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The Eye in the Window and Other Short Stories

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Summary

Nothing much, just rough stories I write for prompts. For excersise. The eye in the window Running away from the monster Room number 514

Genre
Horror
Author
Ivory
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Eye in the Window

(I wrote this in a text message to someone)

Once upon a time there was a little girl. she lives in a house that used to belong to some people. it was not that old but there was some things that were broken like one of the windows. I mean it wasn't broken, it was just a little loose but she didn't really care.

One night when she was going to sleep she felt scared but she didn't know why. that next night she laid wide awake because she felt like someone was watching her but she didn't know where because it was a small room. she was by herself and there was no one. she tried sleeping but she couldn't so she had no choice but to open her eyes and just lay there with her eyes open because she was tired of closing her eyes.

and as she lay there she noticed something from the window. in the window, which was right across her she could see something. there was a little gap and even the curtains did not hide it. and from the gap in the window she saw an eye watching her and she blinked because she couldn't believe it.

The more she focused on it she could actually see that it was really an eye and it wasn't even moving… like the person watching her was not even moving.

the next night she went to sleep and she saw the exact same thing watching her every single night. The end. Good night

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