Criminals' Regression Factory by Yuna at Inkitt
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Criminals' regression factory

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Summary

Sara is a colleague student. one night when she was doing experiments, she unintentionally invented a machine. a machine which makes others regress to an infant. both mentally and physically. (it's my first book and I don't have Much experience and also English is not my first language. you can give me your idea in comments section to help me to improve)

Genre
Young Adult
Author
Yuna
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Sara:

I'm going crazy. I haven't been able to sleep properly for a few nights because of this damn experiment.

I've tried different things, but no matter what I do, this fucking rabbit won't grow anymore. I've done different tests. What's really wrong with this rabbit?

The deadline for this test is tomorrow. If I don't understand the cause of this problem, how can I get a grade from the professor?

The rabbit is very small and I don't know what medicine to inject it with. If it dies, I'll fail this semester. I don't want that to happen! Absolutely not!!!

Let me try the machine again. If I fiddle with the buttons a bit, and move the power cords, maybe I can get a grade on this subject!

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Of course it won't work!

I sat next to my desk on the ground. I wrapped my arms and my leg and started to cry. Professor will be disappointed with me...

Tears are falling from my cheeks. I started to play with my curly hair to distract myself from the situation, but it didn't help. I cried as hell. I felt my throat was itchy.

"Hmmm. I'm thirsty."

I went to the kitchen to drink a glass of water. Suddenly...

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*BOOOOOMMMM*

"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?" My sister Lara, shouted.

"I Don't know!"

Suddenly I panicked. What if he rabbit died? If that happened, I will fail the fucking semester!

I ran to the room. The smoke from my experience machine filled the entire room.

"DAMN."

I went to my desk.

But I saw some thing odd...

"What the hell just happened?"

I saw a baby bunny instead of a rabbit.

"W w w WHAT?!"

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