Into The Eye Of Erin by Viktoria Fyodorova at Inkitt
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Into the Eye of Erin

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|5X FEATURED · SHORTYS 2025 SHORTLIST · AULD LANG SYNE HONORABLE MENTION · WATTPAD CREATORS PROGRAM · PAID STORY ON INKSPIRED!| #SupportPacificIslanderVoices Erin, a conflicted Elemental Spirit, embarks on a life-changing journey across the ocean as the first hurricane of the 2025 Atlantic Hurricane Season. *** Erin hasn't been an Elemental Spirit for long, but she has watched the Earth change right before her, becoming more unrecognizable each day because of humans. As her first journey across the Atlantic Ocean approaches, she has one goal and one goal only: to eliminate the humans. Take them out one by one, starting with the Caribbean. As Erin moves her thunderstorms away from Cape Verde and begins organizing into a massive hurricane, she starts seeing the world from different perspectives: between ships, islands, animals, and even the Hurricane Hunters investigating her. When she nears peak intensity in the Caribbean, Erin faces the toughest question of all: "Is this right, or am I just another monster?" That's something the young hurricane must figure out on her own. *** *A short story inspired by Henry Loomis's quote in Jurassic World Rebirth: "When the Earth gets tired of us, believe me, it will shake us off like a summer cold."* *FYI: This is a story, not a science lesson, so don't expect everything to be completely accurate.* *Moral: There is just as much good in the world as there is evil.* *Word Count: 5,000 exactly (500 words per chapter).*

Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter One: Off Cape Verde

Kill the humans.

I’ve been waiting for this day for a while, when I can finally leave Cape Verde and begin my journey across the ocean. My thunderstorms are currently small and muddled, but they should organize soon, and then I can give the humans a taste of their own medicine.

I move past Cape Verde’s dry islands, thunderstorms trailing behind me, and soon find myself over the deep blue waters of the Atlantic Ocean. I need to get used to this salty scent and hot sun because we’re going to be roommates for a few weeks.

Now, where I go depends on nature, but I want to start in the Caribbean, then move to Florida, and finally travel up the eastern coast of North America. I shouldn’t have trouble intensifying because of how warm the ocean waters are now.

Ah ha—there we go! Warm water and minimal wind shear. My thunderstorms are already starting to develop, but I’m still waiting for that Coriolis effect. The real journey will begin when I start spinning, but while I wait for that magical moment, I watch the ocean below.

It’s empty, just like me, and filled with extra water from the melting icebergs. I remember when it was lively—the days I sailed around the world with my mother and father before I became... well... Erin. But now, the ocean is plagued by the icebergs. Humanity does not deserve mercy for destroying my home.

But wait! What’s that? Is my eye playing tricks on me, or is that a family of loggerheads swimming near the ocean’s surface? I swear I see bony heads and flippers. No, they can’t be. I haven’t seen turtles in ages, not since humans started eliminating their nesting grounds. They don’t have hearts—they wouldn’t save the turtles—but I swear those figures are turtles.

They dip back underwater, and there I am—alone once again. The islands are just specks on the horizon, and the rays from the setting sun cast a lighthouse-like glow on the water. It’s mystical, supernatural, and mysterious—and is something that may help humans change their minds if they admired sunsets more.

I don’t want to do this; I never thought I’d turn to disaster to knock some sense into people, but here I am. Helene gave them a good licking last year. She killed over 200 people, most in North Carolina, and boy, was she proud. I was, too, but looking back on it, I now feel… regret? No, no, Erin, the humans deserved that, and now it’s my turn to follow in my mother’s footsteps.

I push my thoughts aside and start watching the ocean again. There are no more turtles, just me with thoughts I never thought were possible for an Elemental Spirit. We have one job and one job only: protect Earth and not let anyone stand in our way.

We can’t change—we’re locked into our identities, we’re cruel, and most importantly...

We can’t be tamed.

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