Prologue
Darknessβwas not evil.
The idea that darkness meant to define evilβwas not entirely true.
The proficiency belonged to those who thought this world was only between good and evil. But there was a world beyond all that. It belonged to the wicked hearts, the wicked souls. And they were simply soulless beings. They were lost in their virtue.
Their contribution to doom the world had destroyed the peace. But the world was not asleep. For the aphorism was born out of ancient centuries, the witnesses of chaotic times were still here.
For if God would judge, it was the ending.
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