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Saquar: the light of a new tomorrow

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Summary

The novel is set centuries after humanity's great victory over all other races. The Viloan, desperate to liberate the subjugated peoples, implore the primordial god Ciplan to intervene. The god refuses to interfere, but grants them the possibility of creating a being with enough power to change destiny. Thus, Saquar is born, an ambiguous figure, capable of becoming either hero or villain. Through his journey, he must experience the world firsthand and decide whether he will fight for the liberation of the races or succumb to darkness.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue: The Tears of the Viloan

The air in the celestial realm of Aethel was not breathed; it was endured.

It was thick as molasses, heavy with a sorrow so profound it had weight and a taste of copper and dried tears. An intangible pressure bent the majestic obsidian wings of the Viloan, whose feathers whispered laments as they brushed against each other. They stood in their silent multitude upon the plains of shimmering mist that formed the floor of their abode, their forms a paradox of terrifying beauty and sublime anguish.

Horns coiled from their noble, fierce brows like the night itself; eyes that shone with the glow of dying stars held a softness, an infinite compassion that belied their demonic appearance. Their arms, a mosaic of the races they mourned—the grace of elves, the stony strength of dwarves, even the cunning claws of lesser demons—were either entwined in mute prayer or hung slack, defeated by a despair millennia old.

Before them, the great Pool of Vision, whose waters were mercury and dreams, did not reflect the sky of Aethel. Instead, it showed the grim, smoke-veiled tapestry of Zyken, the mortal world.

The vision was a high-definition martyrdom. They watched, with agonizing precision, as cities of elegant alabaster spires, once the domain of elves, burned under human banners embroidered with swords thirsty for conquest. The stench of soot and charred flesh seemed to rise from the pool. They witnessed the grand adamant and mithril gates, carved with dwarven runes of power, being shattered by relentless battering rams; their sacred forges, once singers of creation, now producing not art, but the cold, bitter sound of chains. They saw the vast fields tilled by broken-spirited ogres, the intricate goblin mansions looted and silenced, and the darkest, most shameful corners, where the most ethereally beautiful non-human races were kept as trophies, destined for pleasures far worse than death.

A sound then arose from the Viloan, a harmonic, funereal lament that was not a song, but the sound of a world’s hope dying.

It was their very essence crying out. They were observers, healers, thinkers. Their strength lay in infinite wisdom and mercy, not in the brutal, simple logic of war. And against humanity’s relentless, savage, and ingenious gift for conflict and annihilation, their benevolence was a shield of parchment against a storm of steel.

Their collective gaze, laden with an unanswered question, shifted from the pool to the figure seated at the farthest edge of their realm, where the mist melted into the void. It was not a figure of blinding light or consuming fire, but of a serene, overwhelming presence, like the stillness in the eye of a cosmic hurricane.

It was Ciplan, the Great Sovereign, the Primordial.

His form was undefined, a kaleidoscope of existence: one moment an ancient king with a crown of galaxies, the next an ancestral tree whose leaves were whispers of eons, and then a silent star containing all secrets. He was the only god with the authority to intervene directly in the mortal course, and He had chosen silence.

One of the Viloan, older than the rest, his horns engraved with the complete history of forgotten ages, stepped forward. His voice was like the whisper of a billion leaves in a primeval forest, soft yet of an immensity that filled all of Aethel.

“Great Ciplan,” he intoned, his head bowed in a gesture that was both reverence and supplication. “We have observed until agony has carved grooves into our spirits. We have wept until our tears have filled bitter oceans in the realms below, and still the suffering does not cease, it only deepens. Humanity does not conquer; it extinguishes. It snuffs out the light of all it deems ‘other.’ They know only dominion, not communion. We beseech you. Lend us Your authority. Allow us to descend. Allow us to show them a power that does not corrupt, but purifies.”

The silence that followed was denser than the mist, heavier than the sorrow. The last spark of hope in the hearts of the Viloan began to flicker, on the verge of extinction.

Then, a voice spoke. It was not heard with ears, but felt in the soul of every being present, a vibration resonating in the very core of their being. It was the sound of mountain roots shifting, of stars being born and dying.

“I feel your pain as if it were my own,” Ciplan’s thought resonated, laden with the unique, vast, and unfathomable sorrow of a god who must bear witness. “But the path of mortals is theirs to walk. To intervene with my full hand is to unravel the very board upon which they play. The consequence would be nothingness… absolute.”

A wave of cold despair washed over the multitude. The obsidian wings closed in a little tighter. But the divine thought continued, and in its tone, a new nuance arose, a fissure in the absolute neutrality.

“However… your compassion is not a mistake. It is a vital thread in the vast tapestry of my design. I will not allow you to go yourselves, for you are of my direct essence and your presence would incinerate the world you seek to save. But I will permit you to create. Forge a being of Zyken, from the very clay and essence of that wounded world. A new thread. A needle to stitch the torn fabric of its fate. This is the limit of my intervention. What this creation sows… will be your own harvest.”

Permission. It was not the liberation they dreamed of, not the army of light they yearned to send. But it was a tool. It was a seed of hope, a singular chance.

And so, the Viloan committed themselves utterly. They gathered not with weapons or armor, but with a pure and terrible purpose. They poured into their creation not only arcane skill and raw power, but the very core of the conflict they sought to resolve. For they understood a dark and necessary truth: to defeat a monster, one must know the nature of the monster. To overcome absolute war, one must be its ultimate master.

They wove with threads of light and shadow the pure innocence of a child, so he could walk unnoticed among the oppressors, a wolf in sheep’s clothing. They inserted the untamed ferocity of a primeval beast, to disembowel the relentless soldiers. They forged a moral core of absolute good, a beacon of compassion… and in its very shadow, the latent potential for an equally absolute evil, for they knew that purity of spirit could not always break chains forged in hatred; sometimes, chains required a hammer of dark and bloody metal to be shattered.

They shaped a body in the celestial mist: a child, with hair the color of sunlight on a field of ripe wheat and eyes of deep, royal amethyst. He was beautiful, unassuming, almost fragile. But beneath that soft, human skin slept a musculature of divine potential and an anatomy of nightmare containing the terror of every slaver, awaiting its moment.

They breathed into him a single, driving purpose, a mandate burning like a sun in the center of his newborn soul, an imperative that overrode all else: *Bring them freedom. Break their chains.*

And as the last and brightest spark of their collective energy flowed into the small, sleeping form lying upon the celestial mist bed, the eldest Viloan, with a voice that for the first time in eons trembled not with sadness, but with solemn determination, spoke the name that would be both a promise of salvation and a prophecy of vengeance for the world below.

“Saquar.”

The Champion was born. And the world, unaware, awaited his first breath.

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