Eternal Heresy by Ran at Inkitt
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Eternal heresy

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Summary

Marchis has led a life with misery and pain. His life was filled with regrets, but he gets a chance to relive life. He believes he is on top of the world and follows his ambition to become the best. His story continues as he becomes scheming and cunning. He becomes ruthless to achieve his ambitions.

Genre
Thriller
Author
Ran
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 : REGRET

I regret it. I regret everything. Why did I live until now? What was the point? All my choices were made by the world and society, and every choice was made by somebody apart from me. Why did I live then? What was the purpose?

One last chance, that's all I ask for, nothing else. the next life, I shall pursue what I really want. I was used my whole life; who am I to blame others? I blame myself. I'm a weakling. I'm the one at fault. I shall peacefully die.  “Marchis was around 70 years old when he realized how he lived in despair. He wanted a change, but heavens, would they give him a chance?” A bright light appeared in his eyes.

'Marchis was dead; his family mourned for him for a few days, and they continued with their lives.


What's this? Where am I? Why do I feel strong? Why isn't there pain? Wait, how on earth am I a 12-year-old boy? I have gone to the past ? “All sorts of questions were running in the young march's mind. He looked in the mirror; a healthy young boy with 70 years of experience was standing.".


I have been pitied; I shall not waste this chance. I will live true to myself; the world will be in my hands.


“A revolt grew in his mind; he believed to have no regrets.“


I will do what I can to my fullest. I shall not fail, nor shall I regret. "Marchis's eyes turned dead; only one thing was burning in him; it was his ambition”

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Thank you,,now you say that it really has the potential to reach that level , stay tuned for more chapters it's going to be really interesting.

6 months

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