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Silent Prey

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Summary

In the aftermath of the Voidcaster's devastating attack on Mandalore, a new threat emerges. One that has time and patience. A mystery stretching back to the time of the Rakata.

Genre
Scifi
Author
maxchaos82
Status
Complete
Chapters
19
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue: Damnation

24,000 BBY — Uncharted planet, deep in the Unknown Regions

The temple had no name.

It rose from black volcanic glass like a wound that refused to close—jagged spires of obsidian and durasteel fused together by Rakatan engineering, half machine, half blasphemy. No banners flew here. No hymns echoed. Only the low, constant moan of wind through cracked stone.

Inside the sanctum, five Rakata moved with the silence of executioners.

Their leader—tall even by their standards, skin the color of old blood, eyes burning with the violet of a dying star—carried a long case of polished songsteel. The others flanked him, hands tight on force-pikes, though nothing living had ever breached this chamber.

They stopped before the altar.

A single cradle of quantum-crystalline lattice waited at its center, edges still warm from the forge. The lattice pulsed faintly, rejecting the air itself around it.

The leader set the case down. A gesture. Servos hissed. The bottom split open.

A crystalline object dropped into the cradle with a sound like a bell struck underwater.

The hilt of The Silenced Song lay there—songsteel core wrapped in quantum-crystalline facets, frost kyber embedded mid-length like a frozen heart, unbound kyber at the emitter already flickering with violet-white static. The singularity core at its base was a perfect black sphere, so dark it seemed to drink light. Around it, space itself bent—tiny gravitational lenses warping the torchlight into impossible arcs.

The leader stared.

No one spoke for a long time.

Then, in the guttural Rakatan tongue:

“Abomination.”

The word hung in the air like smoke.

One of the others—a younger engineer whose crest still bore the red of apprenticeship—stepped forward. “The Star Forge logs contain no record of its forging. No design schematics. No test data. Nothing.”

Another hissed. “Not erased. Gone. As though the Forge itself birthed it and then severed the umbilical.”

The leader’s clawed hand tightened on his pike.

“The singularity core is stable—barely. The unbound kyber is… screaming. The frost crystal is the only thing keeping the heat bloom from melting the housing. This is not a weapon. It is a wound in the Force.”

He turned to the cradle. The lattice accepted the hilt with a soft click, then sealed around it like a closing fist. A final pulse of cold blue light ran through the frost kyber, dimming the violet flicker at the emitter.

The leader exhaled—a long, shuddering sound.

“We built this temple to contain what should never have been. Let the stars themselves be its jailer.”

He raised one hand. The others followed. A low chant rose—Rakatan prayer, older than their empire, asking forgiveness for what they had allowed to exist.

The leader was the last to leave.

He paused at the threshold, looking back once.

The hilt lay motionless in its cradle. No light. No hum.

Only silence.

He pressed the final rune on the door frame.

Massive obsidian slabs ground shut with a sound like a tomb sealing.

The temple fell dark.

Outside, the planet’s single moon cast no reflection on the black glass. The wind howled, but inside the sanctum there was nothing to carry it.

The Silenced Song waited.

It would wait as long as it needed.

Circa 5000 BBY

The star had no name.

It had burned for billions of years, a steady white-blue furnace at the heart of a system no one would ever chart. Then, in one heartbeat of cosmic time, its core collapsed.

The supernova was not loud in the vacuum. It was silent, blinding, inevitable.

Planets near the star shattered like glass dropped on stone. Rocky husks vaporized into expanding shells of plasma. Gas giants boiled away their atmospheres, leaving only blackened cinders tumbling into the newborn nebula.

One world survived.

The temple planet—already scarred, already half-dead—caught the blast at an oblique angle. The shockwave tore across its surface like a blade drawn too fast. Continents cracked. Oceans boiled into steam clouds that froze again in the sudden cold. The atmosphere burned away in sheets of fire, leaving only a thin, acrid veil of ash and ionized gas.

The planet did not shatter.

It screamed.

Mountains folded inward. Valleys became canyons. The black volcanic glass that coated much of the surface melted and re-froze in jagged, twisted spires—hundreds of meters tall, reaching like broken fingers toward a sky that no longer held a sun. At the exact center of that new crown of obsidian thorns stood the temple: untouched, unbowed, its obsidian slabs still sealed, still silent.

Inside the sanctum, the cradle had not moved.

The Silenced Song rested in its lattice prison, quantum-crystalline facets reflecting the dying flare of the supernova through hairline cracks in the temple roof. Frost kyber pulsed once—slow, deliberate. The unbound kyber at the emitter flickered violet-white, then dimmed again. The singularity core spun in perfect darkness, drinking light, drinking time.

No sound escaped the hilt.

But in the Force, something laughed.

Not with joy. Not with malice.

With recognition.

The galaxy had tried to erase it once. It had failed.

Now the galaxy had flung it free.

The planet tore away from its dead star, momentum carrying it out of the supernova’s expanding shell and into the long dark between systems. A rogue world. Nameless. Unmapped. Drifting.

1000 BBY Uncharted Nebula

The nebula closed around it like a shroud—gas clouds thick with heavy elements, radiation, gravitational eddies. Sensors would see nothing. Navicomputers would scream warnings and refuse to plot a course. The planet vanished into the cosmic blind spot.

Inside the temple, the Silenced Song waited.

The laughter never stopped.

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