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​♱ Whispers from Dartmoor

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Summary

Would you trade your soul for the blood of your tormentor? ​In Dartmoor, the mist isn't just weather. It is the breath of something that should have never awakened. ​Moly was supposed to be nothing more than an obedient servant in the Judge’s house—a man who hid blood-stained hands beneath a mask of piety. But when the pain becomes unbearable, prayers fall silent, and in their place rises a summons to the moors. ​Silas is not a savior. He is an answer. ​An entity older than church bells, with a gaze colder than steel, he offers the justice no one else dared to fight for. The price? Thirty nights in the isolation of Blackwood Hall. Thirty requests Moly cannot refuse. In a house where mirrors are shrouded in velvet, each passing night blurs the line between loyalty and undoing. ​In a world where mercy is a flaw and saints are monsters in disguise, Moly must decide what scares her more: the creature from the legends, or the darkness she is beginning to discover within herself. ​Do not pray for mercy. Pray for revenge.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue: Whispers from the Moors

The mist over Dartmoor was no mere weather phenomenon; it resembled the breath of something rotting, lurking deep beneath the granite tors. The locals whispered that when the azure vapors thickened, turning the moorlands into a pathless labyrinth, one must bolt the doors and remain silent—even if the pleading voice of a loved one called out from the dark.

Moly had no doors to bolt. She no longer even had a voice of her own, stifled by paralyzing dread and a well-learned obedience.

She stood on the very edge of the precipice. Icy rain lashed her face, mingling with the salt blood leaking languidly from her split lip. The throbbing ache in her side was a constant reminder of the Judge’s heavy boot—of his "justice," administered at dawn for thoughts deemed too loud. Below, the sea roared, black and insatiable, striking the jagged fangs of Devon with a fury the girl felt within her own chest. The raging elements seemed to echo her silent scream.

"Let him never touch me again," she rasped into the void. Her hands clenched the grimy hem of her gown so tightly that her nails sliced deep into her skin. "If there is any hell at all, let someone come and take me from here. I want him to feel what I feel... I want retribution. I will give every fiber of my being for it."

The air froze mid-breath. The silence that fell became unnaturally dense—so heavy that Moly could hear the frantic drumming of her own heart. Even the gulls vanished, as if fleeing from a predator that could not be seen.

From the milky suspension, right before her, a shadow emerged.

The man stood in absolute stillness. The next gust of the breeze died before it could touch him. He wore no coat, and his shirt, blindingly white against the gloom, did not stir even under the onslaught of the freezing squalls. The scent of ozone, metal, and ancient, damp woods unfurled around them.

Moly froze. As she looked upon his face, she felt her pulse plummet. The stranger’s eyes resembled liquid silver—they did not reflect the world but seemed to absorb it irrevocably. Most terrifying, however, was the fact that despite the piercing cold, not even the thinnest wisp of vapor escaped his lips.

"The request has been recorded, Moly." The voice was deep, velvety, vibrating directly inside her skull. "But you must know one thing. If you accept my aid, there is no returning to the light that so readily turned its gaze from you. Are you prepared to burn in my shadow?"

Her gaze fell to his outstretched hand. Long, aristocratic fingers, white as ivory, waited with inhuman patience. She remembered the Judge’s heavy breath against her ear and the scent of his sweat mingled with incense.

Her hand moved toward him without a second of hesitation. As her fingertips brushed his skin, she felt no warmth. An absolute, primal chill struck her, instantly silencing the pain of her broken lip.

In that same moment, the church bells in the distance sounded the alarm, but the sound was hollow, as if coming from behind a thick wall. And the world of men—the one that had never wanted her—ceased to exist.

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