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THE SILENCE KILLER

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Summary

Detective Ben Assakorn was just transferred to Lang Pung, a quiet town where nothing ever happens. Until bodies start appearing. No screams. No witnesses. No sound. As the silence grows heavier, Ben realizes the truth is This town isn't peaceful. It's hiding something. And someone... doesn't want him to find out. "In Lang Pung, the silence doesn't protect you... it kills you." 🖤

Status
6mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Silence killer

🩸 Introduction — The Silence Killer

The road to Lang Pung was too quiet.

Not the peaceful kind of quiet—the kind that settled gently over rice fields at dusk, where crickets sang and the wind whispered through the trees.

No.

This silence was different.

It was heavy.

Unnatural.

Detective Ben Assakorn sat behind the wheel, his fingers tapping lightly against the steering wheel as his eyes followed the narrow road cutting through endless stretches of forest. The deeper he drove, the more the world seemed to fade behind him.

No cars passed.

No voices echoed.

Even the wind... felt absent.

He glanced at his phone.

No signal.

Of course.

A small town like Lang Pung wasn't exactly known for connection to the outside world, at least.

Ben let out a quiet breath, his jaw tightening slightly. Transfers weren't new to him. He had been moved before, different cities, different cases, different faces pretending to cooperate.

But this one felt... off.


Lang Pung District.

A place barely mentioned in reports. No major crimes. No media coverage. No reason for a detective like him to be sent here. And yet... He was.

The trees began to thin.Dim streetlights flickered into view, casting weak pools of yellow light onto the cracked road. The town appeared slowly, like it had been hiding... waiting for him to arrive.

Old wooden houses stood close together, their windows dark.

Shops lined the street, but most were already closed—even though the sky had not fully surrendered to night.

It was too early for a town to sleep.

Ben slowed the car.

His eyes moved carefully, observing every detail—the way a curtain shifted behind a window, the brief silhouette of someone standing too still before disappearing into the shadows.

They were watching.

He didn't need proof.

He could feel it.


The sign at the entrance stood crooked, half-covered in moss.

"Welcome to Lang Pung District."


The paint was fading. Like no one had cared enough to fix it.


Ben stepped out of the car. The moment his shoes touched the ground. He noticed it.

Nothing.

No insects.

No distant chatter.

No hum of electricity.

Just...

silence.


His brows furrowed. That wasn't normal. Even the quietest towns had something... a dog barking, a fan spinning, leaves rustling.

But here?


It was like the world had been muted.

"Detective Ben Assakorn."


The voice broke through the stillness. Smooth. Calm. Too perfectly timed.

Ben turned...

A man stood a few steps away, dressed neatly, posture relaxed, a polite smile resting on his lips like it belonged there.

Chief Aran.

"Welcome to Lang Pung," he said warmly, extending his hand.

Ben shook it.

Firm grip. Steady eyes.

But something in that smile didn't reach far enough.

"You must be tired from the drive," the chief continued. "It's a long way from the city."

"It is," Ben replied shortly.

His gaze lingered for a second too long.

Studying.

Measuring.

The chief chuckled softly, as if amused by something Ben hadn't said.

"You'll get used to it," he added. "It's quiet here."

Quiet.

The word hung in the air Too heavy. Too deliberate. Before Ben could respond. A sharp sound cut through the night. A thud. Both men turned. It came from the alley just across the street. Dark. Narrow.

Hidden between two old buildings. The silence returned instantly after. Like the sound had never existed. The chief's smile didn't fade.

"Probably nothing," he said casually.

But Ben was already moving. Each step toward the alley felt heavier than the last. The air grew colder. The shadows deeper. And that silence, It wrapped around him. Tighter. Then he saw it.

A body. Collapsed on the ground. Eyes open. Unmoving. Ben crouched beside it, his pulse steady but sharp, scanning for injuries, signs of struggle. Anything.


There was nothing. No blood. No wounds. No indication of how or why this person had just died. Ben slowly looked up. His eyes scanning the alley. The buildings. The empty street beyond.


No witnesses.

No footsteps.

No sound.


Just that same suffocating silence. Behind him, the chief finally stepped closer. Calm. Unbothered.

"You see," he said quietly,

his voice almost blending into the stillness.

"This is why we needed you."

Ben's gaze hardened. Because in that moment. He understood one thing clearly. This town wasn't quiet. It was being silenced. 🖤

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