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Blake

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Summary

would Blake take her mothers steps and make the same mistake or is Blake gonna keep on fighting to get stronger? Blake is a normal average girl who wants to become a successful dancer well so she thought?? until a tragic event happens and tares her whole family apart. Blake is not known to have a lot of friends but can count on her mother to give her support and friendship.. but what if she needs to leave the small town and travel to New York with her abusive uncle because her dad doesn't accept her after he finds out she's pregnant. come and read about how Blake gets through it and how her life changes in a matter of days and how her dance improves and how she starts focusing on only herself and how she doesn't need support to be successful in life. there's gonna be a few bumps on the road and we are gonna watch how her relationship changes with gang leader mike. ENJOY :)

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 ~ pilot

I came back home from school as happy as ever I open my door and shout "MUM! I'm home" but there was no answer I look in the living room and kitchen yelling "MUM!" but she didn't answer she always answers me and when she goes somewhere she would call I ran upstairs to see what's up.

As I'm walking up the stairs I saw the bathroom door wide open and saw a puddle of blood as soon as I saw my dear mother laying there in the puddle of blood I instantly fell on my knees with tears steaming down my face and I scream for help "NOOO plz mum don't go"

I got my phone and called the ambulance and heard the sirens going off they took away my mother right in front of my eyes.

As I'm waiting in the waiting room the doctor came with a sour face "I'm so sorry darling for your loss" and walked away the only words I can think of is why, why? was it me, was I not good enough, what I'm suppose to do now, it cant be? she wouldn't just leave me? right there I lost all the control I had and was on the floor screaming everyone was looking the nurse came and put me in a separate room and wanted me to explain so I told her what happened and she sent me back home.

the streets are as if nothing happened even the neighbours they were just looking at me I went in and slammed the door I was in her room finding everything important for her and taking it their probably gonna be the last things I have of her I stuff it in my pocket and wonder what I have to do next I heard a knock on the door and went downstairs it was the police officer.

"hey what's the problem sir?"

"hey miss may I come in" I moved a side and he came in my living room and sat down with a note pad and pen in his hand and started asking questions about my mother and I was confused he said "captain doesn't think it was a suicide he thinks its a murder but tried to make it look like a suicide"

"who would do something like"

"that's what we are trying to figure out do you know anyone that might not like your mother or even hate her"

"mum never really let me go out much and not a lot of people would come she would tell me its dangerous out there and that to keep me safe I shouldn't break the promise"

"um miss do you have anywhere to stay like with a family member?"

"umm I don't know"

"I found your fathers number"

"really? I haven't spoken to him in years. I don't think he really wants to talk to him I mean if he did he would of at least tried to contact me"

"umm actually? he contacted us as soon as he heard about your mother and asked you to come where he is to live with him"

my face lights up and I cant stop smiling

"where does he live?"

"umm let me check miss"

I cant believe dad wants to see me again.

"he lives in new York city"

"WHAT! that's so far from here"

"Yes miss but you have to your plane leaves tomorrow night"

"ok thank you sir"

he nodded and smiled as he left.

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