Eternal Life: Origins by Arlhyn at Inkitt
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Eternal Life: Origins

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Summary

Long before Elara and her group crossed the Ancient Gate and discovered the Forbidden Kingdom, another group of young adventurers began writing the true history of Eternal Life. Belle, a delicate 19-year-old girl, and Silas, an arrogant 21-year-old mage, enter the world of Eternal Life in search of a second chance. What they don’t realize is that inside the game, their bodies become perfect, and they discover the most powerful and forbidden mechanic of the system: the Essence of Desire. Sexual pleasure generates power, stats, and abilities… the more intense and varied the pleasure, the stronger they become. Soon, Lann joins them — a mysterious player who enters purely out of curiosity and ends up trapped in the digital world. Between the three of them, a fiery love triangle is born, filled with passion, jealousy, desire, and betrayal that will push their limits to the breaking point. This is the prequel to Eternal Life. The story of how two elders who would one day give shelter to Elara and her party around a campfire were once young, full of lust, ambition, and insatiable desire. The true origin of the Essence of Desire. The birth of the first legendary party. And the beginning of a legend that has yet to end.

Genre
Erotica
Author
Arlhyn
Status
3mo ago
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Important Announcement: A New, More Intimate and Passionate Beginning

Hey everyone!

Thank you so much for reading Eternal Life: Orígenes. When I first started writing this story, everything sounded incredibly epic in my head: a big isekai with a large cast, multiple storylines crossing, intense battles, and deep emotional connections. However, as the chapters progressed, I realized that with so many characters appearing at the same time, the story wasn’t giving each of them the love, attention, and development they truly deserved.

After thinking about it carefully, I’ve decided to restructure and edit the entire novel. From now on, I’ll focus mainly on Group B (Belle, Silas, Lilith, Valeria, and Lety). This will allow me to dive much deeper into their personalities, their growing relationships, and especially the slow-burn romantic tension between Belle and Silas.

The love triangle (Silas — Belle — Lann) will still be a central part of the story, but it will develop more naturally and gradually between both groups. Once I finish polishing and expanding Group B’s arcs, I’ll continue with Part 2, which will heavily focus on Group A (Lann, Lisandra, Leroy, Mya, and Sonya). You’ll get to see how the two groups meet, how rivalries are born, and how the complicated feelings between Belle, Silas, and Lann evolve in a more emotional and satisfying way.

I believe this change will make the story much richer, the characters more memorable, and the ecchi/hentai moments more intimate and meaningful. Your support means the world to me, and I hope you enjoy this new, more focused direction.

Thank you for understanding and for continuing to support Eternal Life.

With love and gratitude, Your Author

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