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The Legend of Eldorath Vol 1

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Summary

In a world where magic is conjured and glory is carved in runes, survival is merely the price of admission. Kael Arvend has spent his life in the village of Portavell, dreaming of something greater. When he travels to Valenrich to take the Adventurer's Guild Examination, he believes skill and determination will suffice. He is mistaken. Alongside a frail prodigy mage and a ruthless melee fighter, Kael must survive brutal trials, elite rivals, deadly assassins, and the suffocating pressure of the ten-round Central Arena challenge. Only those who demonstrate absolute synergy and technical mastery earn the Rank F License-the most coveted document on the continent. But passing the exam doesn't guarantee safety. When the Golden Stars are awarded and Kael assumes his new identity, he discovers the truth: power is currency... and every coin makes you a target. The tutorial is over. The world is open. The hunt begins.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
RPG_Novel
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
36
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: Echoes in the Wasteland

The crack of the rifle shot faded into the low hills, bleeding into the distant song of waking birds. Kael kept the weapon shouldered for a few beats; the stock still hummed against his shoulder, a physical reminder that control was a daily conquest. In the distance, the target bucket swayed gently, casting golden glints of a sun that streaked the horizon in shades of peach and zinc. The rust eating at the metal edges stood in stark contrast to the morning’s brilliance.

He exhaled slowly and let himself sink into the damp grass, feeling the bite of the dew seep through his trousers. Every shot carried the weight of something ancient: a silent plea to prove he still held the reins of his own life. The scent of wildflowers stirred unwanted ghosts of similar mornings years ago, back when Portavell woke slowly and danger was nothing more than a bedtime story.

“At this rate, it’s going to be a while before you actually impress me,” a soft but steady voice cut through the silence.

He looked up. Liora Venn was coming up the dirt path, books cradled against her chest and an empty basket in her other hand.

“Maybe,” Kael replied, resting the rifle on the grass. “But I’m trying, at least.”

Liora stopped a few paces away, her eyes moving between the bucket, the gun, and her friend.

“And the village’s respect? Do you think you’ll win that just by plinking at buckets?”

“And who said I give a damn about that?” he shot back, lying back down.

“Well, I want more,” Liora said, her gaze drifting to the horizon. “Adventures. Places that don’t even show up on the school maps. I want to leave Portavell and make my mark, however small. The world isn’t easily moved, Kael. Just don’t mistake running away for destiny.”

“Is that why you won’t put those books down? To remind me that thinking is just another way of traveling?”

“Someone has to make sure you don’t get lost before you’ve even left,” she said with a faint, knowing smile.

They walked together toward Hyrwood, where the air grew crisper, heavy with the scent of damp leaves. Liora reached out, her brow furrowed in concentration, eyes fluttering shut as they moved.

“What are you doing?” Kael asked.

“Training my Resonantia,” she replied. He noticed a faint static pop in the air, sharp as the scent of ozone before a storm. “I have to make the ether vibrate at just the right frequency for it to finally manifest—to interact with the physical world instead of just burning up inside me.” She paused, centering herself. “I’m starting to grasp how to feel the flow of mana. The forest helps.”

“Sounds a hell of a lot harder than pulling a trigger,” Kael remarked, adjusting the rifle’s strap over his shoulder. “I’ve never had the knack for that kind of fine-tuning. I’ll take the direct precision of my runic rifle any day.”

“Not all power has to make a sound,” she said with a half-smile. “And the noise? That’s the easy part. The real challenge starts when I have to master Intentio to give this form, Pretium so I don’t collapse from exhaustion, and Permanentia so the whole thing doesn’t vanish the moment I blink. I still have a long way to go with those other three principles.”

They walked side-by-side until, suddenly, Kael froze. The birds at the edge of Hyrwood went abruptly silent, replaced by the dry snap of thick branches being crushed. He hauled Liora behind the gnarled trunk of an ancient tree.

“Two boars...” he whispered.

The brush tore open with the violence of two massive bodies. The boars, their bristles standing on end and tusks caked in earth, snarled as they tore at the ground. Liora recoiled, seeking cover among the exposed roots.

“Stay there! Don’t move!” Kael commanded. The rifle found his shoulder in a single, fluid motion. The moment the first beast lunged, Kael’s finger squeezed. The report echoed through the trees. Clack-click. He ejected the hot casing just as the second boar charged the trunk. Kael pivoted, firing the second shot at point-blank range, stopping the charge inches from his feet.

“Kael...” Liora gasped, the metallic taste of gunpowder coating her tongue.

“Told you it wasn’t just about the buckets,” he said, though his heart was still hammering against his ribs.

Liora looked at the rifle, her expression darkening.

“You’re getting too fast. But sometimes, I feel like you’re shooting at something that isn’t there anymore. Ever since that day at the cliff, you haven’t stopped. It’s like you’re bracing for a fight that’s already over.”

“The world doesn’t forgive the slow,” he replied, his voice clipped. “I just don’t want to be caught off guard again. Never again.”

They continued to the old apple clearing, gathering the fruit before heading back. At the gates of Portavell, they crossed paths with Mira Thorne. The guard stood with impeccable posture, her armor gleaming in the sun.

“Well now, Soldier Mira... caught many outlaws today?” Kael teased.

Mira tilted her chin up, crossing her arms.

“No bandit dares cross my path. If our village is the most peaceful in the realm, it’s because I’m on watch.” She arched a suspicious eyebrow at the basket. “Now tell me... what exactly were you two lovebirds doing out in the woods alone?”

“Picking apples,” Kael answered instantly.

“Apples, eh? Right... a secluded spot, tall trees, and a basket for an excuse. Very convenient. If you ask me, you two were out trysting.”

Liora’s face went scarlet. “I-it’s nothing like that! We’re just friends!”

Mira let out a triumphant laugh.

“Whatever you say. But nothing escapes Portavell’s top sentry. Laugh all you want—one day I’ll hold the highest rank a soldier can reach. And when that day comes, you two will be bowing to me.”

“And what is this grand dream of yours, Mira?” Liora asked.

“I’ll be Captain of the King’s Guard, at the Castle of Tharen,” she declared with unwavering confidence.

“Right, of course. I see,” Liora chuckled. “Keep that up and you’ll go far.”

Kael nodded, adjusting the heavy basket. “Great chat, but we’ve got to run. Good luck, Mira!”

They headed into the heart of the village, where the scent of fresh bread and festival cinnamon had already claimed the streets. At Liora’s house, Serena greeted them warmly.

“Good to see you two!” the woman exclaimed. “What have you been up to?”

“Just in the forest gathering apples for the festival, Mom,” the girl explained, handing over the basket.

Serena smiled, glancing at the young hunter. “Thank you for always looking after her, Kael.”

“It’s no trouble, Serena. We’ve been friends forever.”

Serena invited him in, but he gave a polite shake of his head. “Next time. I’m in a bit of a rush just now.”

After saying his goodbyes, he headed to his own home. The door creaked on its hinges, and the aroma from the kitchen made his stomach growl in protest. He hung his rifle on the wall and sighed. His mother, Elena, was just finishing the table.

“Just in time. Did the training pay off?”

“It did, Mom. But I feel like I could eat an entire boar by myself.”

Lunch was a hearty stew of potatoes and herbs, served with crusty bread and goat cheese. The scent of sage began to unravel the knot of tension in Kael’s chest.

“Eat slowly,” Elena advised. “The path to becoming an adventurer requires patience. Just be careful, my son. But go. The world is waiting for you.”

“Thanks, Mom,” he murmured.

Later, after the chores were done and he had retreated to his room, Kael sat on the edge of his bed. He walked to the window and watched the moon rise over Portavell. The town slept, but inside him, something was finally starting to wake up.

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