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Muztar

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Summary

Haya Asfandyar was just a nineteen-year-old girl with a simple life, a pure heart, and a dream of becoming a doctor. She believed in love, family, and the goodness of people, never imagining that one day the same people she trusted would become the reason behind her destruction. When her brother kills one of Zayyan Qureshi’s enemies, revenge demands a price—and Haya becomes that price. Her own father hands her over to her enemies, leaving her alone in a world she never belonged to. Zayyan Qureshi is a ruthless underworld king whose name is enough to make people tremble. After losing his beloved brother to his enemies, he buried his emotions and became a cruel man consumed by revenge. To him, Haya is nothing more than a part of the punishment meant for her family. But as their lives become tangled together, hatred slowly turns into something neither of them is prepared to understand. Zayyan wants to become a shield for the people he loves, yet his uncontrollable anger keeps destroying everything he tries to protect, while Haya struggles to survive the darkness that stole her innocence. He was her punishment. She became his weakness. And by the time Zayyan realizes that the girl he was trying to break has become the only person he cannot live without... it may already be too late.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Character intro


Zayyan Qureshi

Age: 33

Occupation: Underworld Leader And Top business tycoon

Zayyan Qureshi is a name whispered in fear. At thirty-three, he rules the underworld with an iron fist. Ruthless decisions, merciless punishments, and an unforgiving nature have made him a man even the most powerful fear to challenge. He doesn’t forgive betrayal, and he never gives anyone a second chance. Once someone becomes his enemy, there is no mercy left in him.

Zayyan carries an intimidating presence wherever he goes. His deep black eyes hold a darkness no one dares to challenge, framed by long lashes that only sharpen his already intense gaze. His defined jaw, long sharp nose, perfectly structured features, and tall, strongly built physique make him dangerously handsome. But his appearance is not what makes people fear him—it is the coldness in his silence, the authority in his presence, and the darkness behind his eyes.

He doesn’t need to raise his voice to command a room. One look from him is enough to silence everyone.

Cold. Ruthless. Possessive. Unforgiving.


To the world, Zayyan Qureshi is nothing but a cruel beast who has forgotten how to feel. But there was a time when he wasn’t this way.

The death of his beloved brother at the hands of his enemies changed him forever. Losing the person he loved most shattered something inside Zayyan, leaving behind a man consumed by grief, anger, and revenge. From that day onward, he became the very monster his enemies feared. He built his empire on fear and made a promise to himself—no one he loved would ever be taken from him again.

Zayyan wanted to become the shield of his loved ones. He wanted to protect them from every danger, even if it meant destroying the entire world around them. But his greatest weakness was his short temper. In moments of anger, he destroyed the very things he was trying to protect. He pushed away the people he loved, broke their hearts, and turned his own hands into the weapons that caused their pain. And when his anger finally faded, when he finally realized what he had done... It was already too late.

For his enemies, Zayyan Qureshi is a nightmare.

For the world, he is a monster.

But for the few people he calls his own, he is a shield—a man willing to stand against the entire world for them.

Yet loving Zayyan comes with a price.

Because once someone becomes important to Zayyan Qureshi...There is no escaping him.

“I don’t need to threaten people. My silence is enough to make them fear me.”





🤍 Haya Asfandyar

Age 19

Occupation: college student and dream to become a doctor.

Haya Asfandyar is a name that sounds as gentle as the girl who carries it. At nineteen, Haya is a simple college student who has lived a quiet, sheltered life far away from the darkness of the world. Raised with traditional values, she believes in kindness, honesty, and the goodness of people. She has never been interested in the dangerous games of power, revenge, or hatred that exist beyond the walls of her peaceful life.

With her innocent smile, soft nature, and compassionate heart, Haya seems almost too pure for the cruel world surrounding her. She is emotional and sensitive, but beneath that softness lies a strength she doesn’t yet know she possesses. She may cry easily, she may fear easily, but she is not someone who will remain broken forever.

Then one night changed everything.

A night she never imagined would become the dividing line between the girl she once was and the woman she would eventually become. Zayyan Qureshi, a man she should never have crossed paths with, entered her life and left behind wounds that could not simply be forgotten. The darkness she had spent nineteen years knowing only through stories suddenly became her reality.

Her brother’s actions against Zayyan’s placed their entire family in danger. Instead of protecting his daughter, Haya’s own father handed her over to the very people who wanted revenge. The girl who had spent her entire life believing that family meant safety suddenly discovered that even the people she trusted most could become the reason she needed saving.


And when Haya thought her suffering could go no further, fate dealt her another cruel blow.

Haya was thrown into a world of fear, revenge, and betrayal—a world where innocence was considered weakness and kindness could become a weapon against her.


Haya⁚ I have a few questions to ask…Can anyone answer me? 🥺

1 “What kind of justice is this, where a man commits the sin, but a woman is forced to bear the punishment?”

2 “They all gave me punishment, and I accepted it all… but someone, just tell me—what was even my sin?”

3 “Why am I paying for a sin I never committed, If I was innocent, then why was I the one who had to suffer?”

4 “Why was my silence taken as acceptance of a punishment I never deserved?”

5 “Tell me… if I was the victim, why was I treated like the culprit?”


[By the end of the story, you’ll have all your answers].” 🤍



Author’s Note 🤍


If you want to witness Haya’s pain without being traumatized by it, then welcome to this story. 🥀

This is the story where you got to know not every princess gets her prince charming. Not every fairy tale has a happy ending, and not everyone who smiles has a heart filled with kindness.

Sometimes, the people who are supposed to protect you become the reason you need protection. Sometimes, innocence is punished for sins it never committed. And sometimes, the person you think will save you becomes the reason you learn how to survive.

So, if you’re ready for a story filled with pain, betrayal, revenge, broken hearts, and a girl who slowly learns to survive the darkness...

Welcome to MUZTER [ helpless ]. 🖤

Read at your own emotional risk. 🥀



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