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THE QUEEN OF BLOOD AND ASHES

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Summary

The Queen of Blood and Ashes The war is over. She lost. Now, she is nothing more than a prize—caged, broken, and waiting to be sold in the Iron Bazaar. But they made one mistake. They thought she was weak. They didn’t know she was the last flame of a fallen kingdom… And fire does not forget. As enemies close in and shadows of her past begin to rise, she must decide— remain a slave of fate, or become the queen of blood and ashes.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
17
Rating
4.5 2 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

THE QUEEN OF BLOOD AND ASHES

Chapter One: The Promise That Never Ended

The war ended three days ago. My side lost. And now I was nothing but a price tag.

The Iron Bazaar stank of rust, sweat, and old blood.

I sat in a cage so small that my knees pressed against my chest. My back still burned from the whip. My left arm — marked by the jagged scar of a sword that should have killed me — throbbed with every heartbeat.

Around me, women cried. Children screamed for mothers who were already sold. Men laughed. The sun hung above us like a white-hot eye that never blinked.

I did not cry.

I had forgotten how.

“Next!” the auctioneer shouted. His teeth were gold. His smile was rot. “A war prize! Northern warrior! Still young. Still pretty… if you wash her.”

Men stepped closer. Their shadows stretched over my cage like vultures.

“She looks like a wild one,” one said.

Another laughed. “Wild things break the hardest.”

I met his eyes. I did not look away.

He did.

That was my only victory that day.

Then—silence.

Not the silence of peace. The silence of a predator entering the room.

The crowd parted like water around a blade.

And he walked in.

The Minister of Dust and Secrets.

He was old. His bald head gleamed under the sun. A long white beard brushed his chest. His robes were deep purple — the color of royalty — but faded, worn by too many wars.

But it was his eyes that made my stomach tighten.

One was blind — milky white, lifeless.

The other… green. Sharp. Ancient. The kind of green that had watched empires burn.

He stopped in front of my cage.

He did not look at me like a slave.

He looked at me like a weapon waiting to be sharpened.

“How much?” he asked quietly.

The auctioneer stammered. “L-Lord Aldric! For you… five hundred gold!”

Aldric did not bargain. He placed a bag of coins on the table. The heavy clink echoed like a drum.

“She is mine,” he said.

And just like that—I was no longer a prisoner of war.No longer a slave of the market.

I belonged to the king’s own minister.


That night, I did not sleep in a cage.

I slept in a carriage.

Soft cushions. Clean water. A bowl of hot soup — real soup, with meat and herbs. I hadn’t eaten hot food in six months.

Aldric sat across from me, silent, watching as I ate. His green eye revealed nothing.

Finally, I broke the silence.

“Why did you buy me?”

He smiled. Not kindly. It was the smile of a man who had already read the ending of every story.

“Because, little wolf,” he said, “you are going to save this kingdom. Or burn it down. I am not sure yet.”

I frowned. “I am a slave. I save no one.”

“You were a soldier before you were a slave,” he replied. “I saw the way you held your chains. Not like a prisoner… like reins.”

I said nothing.

He leaned forward. “I am going to train you, Zara.”

Zara.

My real name.

No one in the market had asked for it.

“Train me for what?” I whispered.

“To survive the prince,” he said. “And then… to survive the king.”


Three weeks.

That was all the time he had.

Every night, while the palace slept, Aldric took me to a hidden chamber beneath his library. Candles flickered. Dust drifted through the air like ghosts.

He taught me everything.

The mind. The body. The heart.

How to read people.How to disappear in plain sight.How to turn pain into power.

On the final night, Aldric looked older than ever.

“Tomorrow,” he said, “I will give you to Prince Kael as a gift.”

My chest tightened. “A gift?”

“Yes. A beautiful, silent, dangerous gift.” He paused. “He will be angry. He may hurt you. But you will not break. Do you understand?”

I nodded.

Then he removed his silver ring and pressed it into my palm.

“This belonged to the prince’s mother,” he said softly. “She made me promise to protect him. I have failed that promise every day since.”

For the first time, I saw fear in his eye.

“Zara… I need you to make me a promise.”

“What promise?”

“Protect him. Not the kingdom. Not the throne. Him.”

I looked at the ring — small, delicate, engraved with a wolf.

“I promise,” I said.

“Say it fully.”

I swallowed.

“I promise to protect Prince Kael. Even if it costs my life.”


The Obsidian Fort was exactly as Aldric had described.

Black stone walls that swallowed sunlight. Red curtains like dried blood. Cold air, even in summer.

I was taken to a plain wooden door reinforced with iron.

A guard knocked. “Lord Aldric sends a gift.”

A voice from inside — young, rough, tired.

“I don’t want anything from that old man.”

The door opened anyway. I was pushed inside.

Prince Kael stood in the center of the room.

No crown. No luxury. Just a man.

Tall. Broad-shouldered. Dark hair falling over his forehead. Golden-brown eyes that burned with something deeper than anger.

And on his right hand — a burn mark.

The shape of fingers.

His father’s fingers.

He looked at me like I was nothing.

“A gift?” he said coldly. “A slave?”

I stayed silent.

He stepped closer, circling me.

“You’re the northern soldier,” he said.

Still, I did not speak.

He stopped in front of me.

“Do you know what I do with gifts?”

“No, my prince,” I said quietly.

“I break them.”

He grabbed my chin, turning my face left and right, searching for fear.

He didn’t find it.

Then his fingers brushed the ring at my neck.

He froze.

“Where did you get this?” he whispered.

“Aldric gave it to me,” I said softly. “He said your mother wanted you protected.”

Kael stepped back like he had been burned.

“Get out,” he said.

“My prince—”

“I SAID GET OUT!”

His voice broke.

I turned to leave. But before I stepped out, I glanced back.

He stood there, head bowed, shoulders trembling.

Not angry.

Crying.

And in that moment, I remembered my promise.

I will protect him. Even if it costs my life.

The door closed behind me.

But the promise—

It had already begun.

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author

Honestly, this is beautiful. Your method of writing is unique and inspirational. The paragraphs and punctuations are also on point.

But from my perspective, I think the fact that everything is happening too fast in one chapter make it look like a prologue or summary.

And sincerely, it's captivating but most readers may feel like they already know too much of what may happen in the story. You should write every scene, every step that Zara make gradually. She's already a very lovable character. You just need readers to feel connected.

But for me, I love the story already. Zara is just the kind of female lead I love talking about. And it's cool that a prince will soon start relying on her presence to take certain decisions in the story.

Bravo 👏👏

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Thanks ☺️ your comment will help me

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ohh this is something new

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