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The Ghost of Lin Ren

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Summary

He was murdered by the people he trusted most. Now, he's back in a body no one would ever suspect, playing a deadly game of hide-and-seek in the modern suburbs. They thought they killed a man, but they only created a monster.

Genre
Thriller
Author
Munirat
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1: Code of thieves

The midnight air in the village was thick with dust, smoke, and the heavy, suffocating stench of poverty. In this era, wealth belonged only to the corrupt elite behind high palace walls, while the rest of humanity fought like rats for scraps. For Lin Ren and his crew, survival meant one thing: taking from those who had plenty to feed those who had nothing. But Ren survived by a strict, unyielding code he had drilled into his men since they were boys dodging guards in the alleys. We steal to eat, but we never spill blood.


Tonight's target was an isolated, weathered house sitting on the jagged edge of the village. Rumor among the beggars said the old couple inside possessed a secret stash of silver, hidden away from the tax collectors.


They slipped through the rotted wooden window like shadows-four men driven by desperate hunger and growing greed. Ren stood by the doorway, his hand resting on the hilt of his dagger, eyes scanning the dark room as his crew ransacked the heavy wooden chests. But desperation makes people clumsy. A heavy floorboard creaked loudly under a boot.


An elderly man stumbled out from the back room, a dim, flickering lantern shaking in his frail, wrinkled hand. His eyes widened in terror as he opened his mouth to scream. Panic took over. Before Ren could move, his closest friend lunged forward, a wicked blade flashing in the dark.

The old man collapsed to the dirt floor without a sound, the lantern shattering beside him.

"What did you do?!" Ren hissed, rushing forward as his heart hammered against his ribs. He knelt by the body, looking at the dark blood pooling on the floor. Horror gripped him. The line had been crossed. The code was broken.

From the deep shadows of the corner, a figure crept out. It was the man's wife-a frail, trembling old woman. Her eyes were wide with shock as she stared at her husband's lifeless body, her breath catching in her throat.

"She's a witness," his friend muttered, raising the bloody dagger again, his eyes wild and unstable. "We can't leave any loopholes. If she speaks to the magistrates, we all hang. We have to finish her too."

"No!" Ren stepped directly between his crew and the terrified woman. He drew his own blade, but instead of pointing it at the woman, he turned the steel toward his own men. "We don't kill. We've already crossed the line tonight. We take the silver and we run, but no one touches her."

The crew exchanged cold, silent glances in the dim light. In the dark, the bond of brotherhood snapped, replaced by the brutal logic of self-preservation.

"You're going to get us all killed, Ren," his friend whispered.

Before Ren could pivot, a sharp, blinding pain pierced through his back. Another blade sank into his side from behind. He gasped, his lungs burning as his own gang closed in around him. Their faces twisted into monstrous shadows as they struck again and again to keep him quiet.

As Ren's vision began to fade into blackness on the cold dirt floor, he felt a strange, sudden warmth. Through the blur of his dying sight, he saw the old woman stepping toward him. She wasn't crying anymore. A mysterious, glowing light reflected in her eyes as she reached out a hand toward his chest.


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