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Detective Maya| The Silent Horror

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Summary

Detective Maya, a qualified detective, who has a case on a mansion which legends say is responsible for 30+ deaths… This has picked Maya’s curiosity and made her take the case. Will she survive? Lets see…

Status
4mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

1909| The flashback

It’s the year 1909, the Blackwood family has been living there with 4 kids; 1 girl and 3 boys they were quite noble and had connections with the king and queen at that time.

Lilith Blackwood, the sister of the 3 brothers who was also the youngest in the family was adopted and her biological parents were killed when she was only 1 month old she even had an older sister who died with her parents. They took her in when she was only a month old which was 9 years ago. She wore regularly paired with black stockings, laced boots or Mary Jane shoes, and decorative hair ribbons or elaborate hats with knee length dresses. She was a brunette with wavy medium hair. With beautiful blue eyes.

Their father Lucifer Blackwood, always had one rule, if someone does something bad or wrong at them they always get revenge. Also he was a tall handsome man who was about 6’5 and always wore a sack suit (lounge suit) became the standard for daily wear, and his shirts were designed with high, stiffened, detachable collars, which at the time were a huge trend. He also had brown hair which was heavily oiled, shoulder-length-to-short hair parted down the middle or sides.

Their mother Lenore Blackwood always forced the family to wear black since her twin brother and sister died. She was very beautiful and charming.Lenore was very talented in horse riding, and wore a extreme S-curve corset gave way to the “health” or “straight-front” corset. It pushed the bust down and created a straight, top-heavy line from the neck to the hips and leather gloves in winter and crocheted lace in the summer as it gave a noble and modesty touch to her look, Lenore also wore enormous, wide-brimmed hats decorated heavily with feathers, flowers, tulle, and ribbons, which noble women wore. Her hair was wavy and ginger with a few strands on the front. With icy rare eyes.

The 3 brothers were triplets named, Victor the oldest, Authur the middle and Burton the youngest. They wore sailor Suits these suits were worn by young boys and instead of adult-style trousers, young boys wore knickers (baggy pants buckled or tied just below the knee) paired with long tunics and often wore starched, stiff white collars over their suit jackets or blouses. their hair was cut into short, practical styles, such as a classic side-part or a short, cropped look. Two of them had brown eyes like their father and Victor, the oldest one had icy eyes like their mother.

On Friday the 13th their father went to work and their mother was doing horse riding, the children were playing with each other then night came their father was out of town and they were getting ready to sleep, then a knock came…

”Who’s there?” Said Lilith questionably

“Must be the mailman” said Authur confused

“Its literally night Authur…” said Victor with a questionable face

”Oh yeah I forgot” said Authur with an almost embarrassed face

“It must be dad?” Said Burton curiously

”Im going to open the door and you could be right Burton it must be Lucifer.” Said Lenore

She opens the door and its not Lucifer… Its a man, who is holding a knife covered in blood, Lenore screams the children get frightened! She covers the kids and tells them to hide…

”KIDS! GO AND HIDE ITS TOO DANGEROUS ONLY COME OUT WHEN ITS QUIET” said Lenore with tears and bruises on her face.

The kids go and hide scared for their lives a few minutes later when everything is quiet Victor and Burton go out and check while Authur stays by Lilith’s side. Victor found their mothers dead body… They call Lilith and Authur to come because its safe… But its not, the killer comes out of hiding and kills the kids…

Exactly three days later their father comes home who bought gifts for the family and shocked to see them dead… He cries and sobs and later calls the king… They later held a funeral and thirty years later the father dies due to old age…

Rumor has it that they will kill anyone who comes in their mansion women do not suffer a very serious death but men suffer danger, torture! That is because the killer was a man… They even killed the killer tortured him like never before and finally killed him….

Now lets see what will happen in the next chapter of the book…

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you have so much potential in this writing. I love it so far. some grammar is off but other then that, absolutely perfect☺️

3 months

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