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Summary

Julia found a strange ring and felt the call of magic. Now, she must travel across the entire continent to learn magic. Along the way, she meets Eliot, whom she finds as handsome as he is annoying.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1


I woke up at midnight; the air felt lighter.

I heard something calling me, and I couldn't resist the call. I started to walk in a mechanical way, following the voice until I saw a green light. Then, I smelled a sulfuric and sweet aroma, and my mouth filled with an unknown flavor that somehow I recognized as the ether in the air.

I continued walking toward the light; the smell became deeper. I found that the light was coming from a little lilac lake.

I entered and sank immediately. However, water didn't enter my lungs. The ether smell became stronger.

I the center of some rocks, I could see a little jewel box. Once I took it, the light disappeared and the air became dense. The lake disappeared, leaving me in a hole.

I Tried to get out of the dry lake for a long time. I got cold and the sky started to grow dark.

I opened the jewelry box; I couldn’t help myself and put the ring on my finger. Suddenly, I was back home. I removed the ring and put it on again, but nothing happened this time

Is stayed awake all night, trying to use the ring, trying to make magic happen, but I didn’t succeed.

In the morning, I went to visit my friend Marianne; she owns a magic object store. Maybe if the ring didn't work, I could sell it and get some money."

"It's not really powerful, but it belongs to the Whitewood clan. However, I think the main thing here is that you received the call of magic and you should respond. You should go to the capital; there, you can look for a magic guild that could teach you," she said, looking at me with a smile.

She was really happy for me; I could see that.

"I don't know, it's pretty far," I said with a little shame.

"Come on! My cousin Eliot is going there soon. You can leave with him tomorrow; I’m sure he won't mind."

It was a hard night deciding whether to leave everything behind and cross the country to the capital. But finally, I decided to go.

I arrived at the road, and the view was breathtaking. There were pastel-colored trees, a blue paved road, and so many butterflies.

Then, I saw him. Black hair, tan skin, and two big blue eyes. He was the most handsome man I had ever seen. I felt the blood rush to my face.

"Hi, my name is Julia," I said.

"I'm Eliot, and you're turning all red," he said with a joking smile that annoyed me—not only because he was really insensitive, but because it made him look even more handsome.

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