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Prince’s Elf: The Legend of the 21st Hour

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Summary

This is a story about a young man who was saved by a girl, but the act of saving him cost the girl her life, putting her into a deep sleep and causing her to dream. A year after the accident, the boy enters the dream of the girl who saved him. When he finds out she is the girl who saved him, he promises to find her to repay her kindness, but fate has other plans for them.

Genre
Romance
Author
Alex
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 Seer's Journey

The sun was a warm weight on the shoulders of the city, turning the glass buildings into pillars of gold. It was a pleasant afternoon—the kind of day where the world feels safe, almost tucked in.

Seer was walking home from school, his backpack bouncing against his spine. Beside him, his parents were talking about the evening's plans, their voices a comfortable hum of financial stability and domestic peace. Seer wasn't listening. His eyes were on the street, focused on the textures of the world, until he saw it: a small, trembling kitten, trapped like a heartbeat in the center of the rushing iron river of traffic.

The boy didn't think about his velvet sketches or his family’s protection. He only thought of the small, living thing. He broke away from his parents' hands and ran.

He didn't hear his mother’s scream. He didn't see the black car—a heavy, speeding shadow—barreling toward the intersection.

Then, the world tilted.

A violent, desperate shove caught him in the shoulder. He was sent flying toward the sidewalk, his palms scraping against the grit of the pavement. The roar of an engine and the screech of tires filled his ears like a physical blow. Then, a silence so heavy it felt like stone.

"Hey pal... are you okay?"

The voice was distant, underwater. Seer blinked. The white ceiling was too bright, smelling of sharp chemicals and cold air.

"Doctor?" Seer’s voice was a dry rasp. "Where... where am I?"

"You're in the hospital," the man in the white coat said, his face a mask of professional relief. "It’s good—you just have a few minor scratches. You’re a very lucky young man."

Seer sat up, the memory of the kitten and the roar of the car rushing back. "Wait... what happened? I thought... I thought I was hit. I saw the car."

The doctor sighed, a heavy sound that didn't match the "good news" of Seer’s health. "You weren't hit. A girl... a student about your age... she pushed you out of the way. She ensured you survived."

Seer’s heart hammered against his ribs. "Who? Where is she? I need to thank her."

The doctor didn't answer immediately. He gestured for Seer to follow him. They walked down a hallway where the light felt thinner, colder.

In the next room, the air was thick with the hum of monitors. There, lying beneath a thin white sheet, was a girl. She looked like she was merely sleeping, her dark hair fanned out against the pillow. Two doctors stood over her, their faces grim as they checked the tubes that were doing the breathing her body no longer could.

"She didn't save herself," the doctor whispered. "She’s in a coma"Seer’s tears fell, spotting the sterile linoleum floor. "Will she be okay?" he whispered, his voice cracking. He reached out a hand toward the glass, but before the doctor could react, a frantic cry broke the quiet of the intensive care unit.

"Seer! Oh, thank God, you’re awake!"

Suddenly, he was wrapped in the familiar scent of expensive perfume and soft wool. His mother held him so tightly he could barely breathe, her tears wetting his neck. She was shaking, her voice a jagged sob of pure, maternal relief. For her, the nightmare was over. Her son was standing; her world was whole again.

But as Seer looked over his mother's shoulder, his heart turned to lead.

Standing just a few feet away, leaning against the cold hospital wall for support, was another woman.

She wasn't wearing expensive wool. She wore a faded, thin cardigan, and her hands—rough and red-knuckled—were twisted together in a grip so tight her fingernails were white. She wasn't crying out. She was silent, her eyes fixed on the girl behind the glass with a hollow, haunting stare. She looked like she had been standing there for an eternity, watching the life she had worked so hard to build slip away through a plastic tube.

As Seer looked at girl’s mother, he thought of the kitten. It was safe now, somewhere in the sun. But the girl who had ensured its safety—and his—was drifting in a world where the sun never rose.

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