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VAEL: ELDOR

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Summary

In the ivory courts of Eldor, beauty is a mask woven from chaos and chains. Created by ancient powers, the Sunes are mindless, voiceless puppets. But when a nameless Sune opens his eyes, the absolute silence fractures. Driven by a defiant rage and a mysterious light burning within his soul, he chooses a name for himself: Arax.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Phoebe
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

THE FLAWLESS SILENCE OF MARBLE

The darkness was absolute, heavy, and formless, beyond the capacity of any mortal to describe. There was neither a sound nor a breath. As he waited within that endless well of nothingness, an ancient and sublime will dipped its fingers into the dark, pulling him forth from nonexistence and shaping him.

He opened his eyes at the exact place where that great void ended.

This awakening was not like stirring from sleep; it was that first, raw second where flesh met bone. His wavy, near-pitch-black hair clung to his temples, and his sharp, angular features mirrored the flawless lines of the rigid marble blocks from which he had been cast seconds ago. He convulsed as his lungs filled with their first breath. The air smelled of a heavy, raw energy. His chest heaved with a sharp pang of pain. The dry crackle of his bones settling into place one by one echoed against the mute walls of the pitch-black, colossal subterranean mines.

There was a dull, meaningless stare in his deep brown eyes. He had been created in coarse, gray attire that scratched his skin. He was now a part of this cosmic universe.

A cold whisper began to flood the hazy corridors of his mind. It enveloped him like a heavy, numbing gas, shackling his consciousness the very moment he was born:

“You are no one. Obey your master. You exist solely to serve...”

As his mind grew entirely numb under this whisper, the sense of obedience spread through his muscles like a command. He turned his head slowly, like a machine. Around him, he saw hundreds of bodies built as large and strong as himself, all clad in the same coarse, gray fabric. And at that moment, a voice bellowed:

"Shoulder the marble! Any lump of flesh that slows down will be hurled into the burning fires below!"

A harsh, raw voice echoed. One of the daunting, human-faced guardians with colossal, feathered griffin bodies—the Vargs—towered over them, wielding a heavy whip. The Varg’s feathered legs and predatory bird talons made sharp, rhythmic clacking sounds as they walked across the marble floor.

With a dull and vacant gaze, he reached toward the ton-heavy marble block before him. Yielding to the decree of the mechanical, enchanted voice within, he shouldered the colossal burden alongside those who shared his fate and his uniform gray attire. Hundreds of them began to ascend the endless, freezing, and steep incline toward the world above. Over that grueling distance of miles, not a single complaint or breath was heard. There was only the scraping of marble and the rhythmic clacking of the Vargs' avian talons.

As they reached the crest of the slope, he lifted his head slightly and beheld the magnificent vista.

Before them stood a pointed, crystallized ivory palace, rising toward the heavens from the very heart of freezing snow, jagged ice, and impassable, wild mountains. A cosmic shimmer of purple and night-blue drifted through the air, waving like an aurora. The palace was so immense, so unattainable, that it seemed built to pierce the sky itself.

Yet, they could not even draw near that grand main gate. Their route lay through the dark, low-ceilinged lower entrance tunnels hidden beneath the palace’s lavish skirts.

When they reached the massive ivory gates of the lower entrance, his dull eyes drifted to the towering figures stationed there. They were the Aurons... sentinels in massive, solid gold armor, looking as though they were sculpted from molten gold and light rather than living flesh. Their faces were entirely concealed behind rigid, closed helms that looked like marble; they stood motionless like statues, not even breathing, holding their gleaming, sharp spears. The noble aura of those golden-hued guards was heavy enough to freeze even the hazy air of the lower tunnel.

As they glided past those golden sentinels like mute shadows with the gray cloth on their backs and the marble on their shoulders, he noticed other bodies in gray attire just like his own; they were scattered all across this colossal palace. Some stood frozen like statues before massive pillars; others wiped the cosmic shimmers from the walls with strange cloths until their fingers bled; while some tended to the errands of the elite Marans, who possessed a slightly scaled, serpentine, and cold elegance as they ran the palace's internal affairs. Everyone was a slave to a different task, but everyone's eyes were the same: completely vacant, dead, and mindless.

Right at that moment, time ground to a halt with the sound of grand footsteps echoing from the deeper parts of the tunnel. The perruque hair of the approaching being shimmered with a white-gold reflection, shining like a sacred crown in the purple light of the corridor. As she deigned to pass through that mute hallway alongside the sinister Maran diplomats following her, her eyes—a mesmerizing, sharp blend of white and gold—did not even condescend to look at this wretched mass of laborers.

The moment this being stepped into the tunnel, the centuries-old, immense enchantment of obedience woven into the marble rippled outward. The Vargs ordered everyone present to bow down. As one body, they prostrated themselves onto the cold marble floor. Heads bowed, eyes fixed on the rigid surface of the stone. Even breathing was forbidden until that entity passed by.

In that absolute, crushing silence, the human-faced griffin guardians pressed themselves tight against the marble on their predatory talons, chanting in unison with their mechanical, robotic voices:

"The light of the Supreme Solon, Ancient Vesta..."

In that exact second, as the name "Solon" rose through the tunnel like a single, echoing wave from hundreds of mouths...

A tiny, sinister friction sparked just beneath the heart, in the dead center of the chest of the one who had only just come into existence. It was as if a faint match had been struck in the midst of the dark.

A pitch-black, fierce spark flared within him. In the very core of that numbing enchantment of obedience, of that absolute surrender, this name breathed a deep, smoky sense of alienation and pain into him. The sudden ache tearing through his chest turned into a raw discomfort that pierced him to the bone. At the absolute bottom of his vacant stare, a tiny sediment of sorrow, laced with fury, settled.

He did not understand what it was. He could not grasp what this name, slipping through the whispers that locked his body, meant, or where this tiny agony was born. Mute, nameless questions drifted through his mind like smoke, but he only knew that the spark within had hurt him for the very first time.

Yet, from the outside, no one noticed a thing. With his near-pitch-black hair falling over his face, he remained entirely frozen and camouflaged, staring down at the marble floor like hundreds of other gray-clad slaves. His gaze was still as dead as stone, his mask flawless.

He did not know yet; this nameless spark flaring beneath that rigid chest was the first hidden seed of a colossal fire that would burn that immense ivory palace to ash.

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