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Wrong Floor, Right Ruin

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Summary

I wasn't supposed to be on the eighth floor. I wasn't supposed to knock on that door. And I was definitely not supposed to fall for the man who opened it like I'd interrupted something sacred. Eli Voss is a senior. Cold. Untouchable. The kind of beautiful that makes you stupid. I'm just a freshman who got the wrong dorm building in the rain. One night. One door. One mistake that keeps happening. He doesn't do relationships. I don't do reckless. But somewhere between his warnings and my weak willpower, the lines stopped making sense. This isn't a love story. Not yet. Maybe not ever. But God help me — I keep going back to that door.

Genre
Lgbtq
Author
Sara
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1-The Wrong Door

Eli's POV — No. Wait. Mine.

The rain came out of nowhere.

One second I was walking across the east quad with my duffel bag and a campus map that was already soaked through. The next, I was standing under a broken awning, water dripping down the back of my neck, wondering how I managed to get lost on my first actual night at Carver University.

Orientation was tomorrow. I wasn't even supposed to be moving in today.

But my roommate — a guy named Derek who texted like he was writing a business email — said he needed the room to himself until Friday. So here I was. Wednesday night. Lost. Wet. Holding a paper map that had dissolved into mush.

I looked up at the building in front of me.

Aldren Hall. Eight floors. The lights on the top two were off.

My dorm was supposed to be Aldren South. A totally different building, apparently. I didn't know that yet.

I pushed through the front door because the rain was getting mean about it.

The lobby was quiet. One of those old campus buildings that smelled like wood polish and radiator heat. A bulletin board near the elevator had flyers pinned up — student council elections, a jazz night, a warning about someone's missing bike.

The elevator opened before I even pressed the button.

I got in. Hit the first number my thumb landed on. Eight.

I don't know why. Maybe I thought higher meant drier. Maybe I was just not thinking at all.

The hallway on the eighth floor was narrow and warm. Half the overhead lights were doing that slow flicker thing. There were only four doors up here — two on each side — and the whole floor smelled like coffee and something sharper. Pine, maybe. Or cedar.

I pulled out my phone to recheck the room number Derek sent me.

Room 804.

I looked up. The door at the end of the hall said 804.

Okay. Okay, great. See? Not lost after all.

I knocked.

Three seconds.

The door opened.

And I forgot every single thing I'd been thinking about.

He was tall. Not in a way that announced itself — just tall in the way that made the doorframe look smaller. Dark hair, a little long at the front, pushed back like he'd been running his hand through it. He was wearing a black hoodie, sleeves pushed up, holding a pen between two fingers like he'd just paused something important.

His eyes were grey. Or dark green. I still don't know. They changed depending on the light and I noticed that immediately which told me something embarrassing about myself.

He looked at me the way you look at something unexpected. Not surprised. Just... assessing.

"You're not Damon," he said.

His voice was low. Flat. Like he'd already decided I wasn't worth changing his tone for.

"No," I said. Smart. Brilliant. My mother paid tuition for that.

"Then why are you at my door?"

I blinked. Looked at the number. 804. Looked back at him.

"This is room 804," I said.

"Yes."

"My roommate gave me this number."

Something moved across his face. Not quite amusement. Closer to the thing that comes before amusement, when you haven't decided yet if something is funny or annoying.

"Your roommate," he said slowly, "gave you my room number."

I opened my mouth. Closed it. Opened it again.

"I think there's been a mistake."

"Clearly."

He didn't move from the door. Didn't offer to help, didn't step aside, didn't do anything except stand there looking at me like I was a mild inconvenience he hadn't budgeted time for.

"Do you know where Aldren South is?" I asked.

"Across the quad."

I looked down at my duffel bag. Looked at the window at the end of the hall, where rain was still hammering the glass.

"Right," I said. "Cool. Thanks."

I turned to leave.

"It's flooded."

I turned back. "What?"

"The path to South. There's a drainage problem on the east side. Happened last week too." He glanced past me toward the window with a kind of detached certainty, like he just knew things. "You'd be walking through six inches of standing water."

I stared at him.

He stared back.

"You can wait in the lounge downstairs," he said. "First floor. There's a couch."

Then he stepped back and started to close the door.

"Wait —" I don't know why I said it. "How long does it usually take? For it to clear?"

He paused. Just barely.

"Couple hours. Depends on the drain." He looked at me again, that same measuring look. "You got anywhere else to be?"

I thought about the lobby. The flickering lights. The bulletin board. The mush that used to be my map.

"No," I admitted.

He was quiet for a second.

Then, like it cost him something, he pulled the door open wider.

"Lounge is broken," he said. "TV hasn't worked since March. You can sit in here until it clears up."

He walked back inside before I could answer.

I stood in the doorway for probably three full seconds, doing the mental math on whether this was a good idea.

Then I followed him in.

His room was nothing like what I expected.

I don't know what I expected. Posters, maybe. Sports stuff. The usual.

But it was clean in that deliberate way — not spotless, just organized. Books stacked in actual order on two shelves above the desk. A lamp with warm yellow light instead of the cold overhead fluorescent. A small succulent on the windowsill that looked weirdly well cared for.

There was music playing from somewhere. Low and instrumental. The kind that doesn't ask anything of you.

He sat back down at his desk without looking at me, picked up his pen, and kept writing in whatever he'd been working on.

I set my bag down near the door. Sat on the edge of the single armchair in the corner — the only other seat in the room.

The rain got louder.

"I'm Micah," I said, because the silence felt like something I needed to fill.

He didn't look up. "I know."

I blinked. "You know?"

"Freshman orientation list is posted in the hall office." He turned a page. "Micah Adaeze. Room 112, Aldren South. Wrong building, wrong floor."

He said it without judgment. Just facts.

I didn't know whether to be impressed or unsettled.

"What's your name?" I asked.

A pause. Like he was deciding whether to answer.

"Eli."

Just that. No last name. No nice to meet you. Just Eli, like a door that opened one inch and then held.

I looked around the room again. At the books. At the succulent. At the way his handwriting moved across the page — sharp and slanted and fast.

"What year are you?" I asked.

"Senior."

Of course he was.

I pulled my knees up to my chest in the armchair and watched the rain blur the window.

Outside, the water kept rising.

Inside, Eli kept writing.

And I kept not leaving.

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