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The Heiress

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Summary

After the death of her father, Eleanor Ashford arrives at Blackthorne Manor believing she has inherited the estate that has belonged to her family. Instead, she finds a house full of secrets, locked doors, whispered lies… and a man who seems determined to make her life impossible. Nicholas Whitmore has his own reasons for being at Blackthorne Manor, and none of them include trusting Eleanor. The more they clash, the more impossible it becomes to ignore the attraction growing between them. But the manor is hiding dangerous truths, and someone is willing to do anything to keep the past buried. In a house where nothing is what it seems, Eleanor must decide who to trust before the secrets of Blackthorne Manor destroy them both.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One


The first time Lady Eleanor Ashford saw Blackthorne Manor, she thought no place on earth could look so alive and so utterly dead at the same time.

The castle stood at the end of the road like an ancient shadow, perched upon a hill amidst the damp northern moors. Its dark towers vanished into the mist, while its narrow windows seemed to watch her with the same unforgiving scrutiny all of England had turned upon her since her father’s death.

The carriage lurched slowly through the mud. On either side of the road, winter-bare trees bent beneath the wind, their twisted branches almost human in the fading light.

Eleanor sat perfectly still, her back straight, her chin lifted, her gloved hands folded neatly in her lap. Yet beneath that composed exterior, she felt the same chill that crept through the cracks of the carriage door.

“It is not too late to return to London, my lady,” Mrs. Vale murmured.

Eleanor kept her gaze fixed upon the castle.

“Yes, it is.”

Though she tried to sound certain, her fingers tightened against one another.

Mrs. Vale sighed and said nothing more.

Back in London, nearly everyone had advised her against coming. Her aunt had wept. Her cousin Edward had written three separate letters insisting that Blackthorne was no place for a young lady without a husband, a brother, or—according to him—the sense to understand the danger of her circumstances.

But Eleanor understood them perfectly.

Her father was dead.

Her future uncertain.

Her name whispered through drawing rooms, gentlemen’s clubs, and newspaper offices alike.

And Blackthorne Manor—that forgotten estate no one in her family ever mentioned above a whisper—was all he had left behind.

Not the title.

Not the lands attached to the earldom.

Only Blackthorne.

As though somewhere within those walls of stone and secrets, he had left her an answer.

Or perhaps a punishment.

The carriage came to a halt before the manor’s main entrance.

No one emerged to greet her.

For several moments, the only sound was the wind, long and mournful as it slipped through the towers.

Eleanor waited.

One minute.

Then two.

Rain drummed steadily against the roof.

At last, the great doors swung open.

For a fleeting moment, Eleanor felt as though the gates to an unknown world had been thrown wide before her—a world filled with secrets she could neither see nor understand. An uneasy feeling settled in the pit of her stomach.

An elderly gentleman appeared in the doorway, tall and lean, dressed in an immaculate black tailcoat. He descended the steps with solemn dignity.

“Lady Eleanor Ashford,” he said, inclining his head. “Welcome to Blackthorne Manor. I am Alfred Pembroke, the butler of the house.”

Eleanor stepped down from the carriage and discreetly glanced beyond him.

There was no one else.

Strange.

A new mistress arriving at her family estate for the first time, and not a single member of the senior staff had come to receive her.

“Thank you, Mr. Pembroke,” she said, smoothing the skirts of her traveling dress.

“Your journey must have been exhausting, my lady.”

“I survived,” Eleanor replied, unable to hide her weariness.

Something flickered across the butler’s face.

“That is precisely what we all hope, my lady.”

The remark was peculiar.

Before she could ask what he meant, Pembroke stepped aside and gestured for her to enter.

The entrance hall was immense.

Stone walls rose toward a vaulted ceiling dimly illuminated by gas lamps. Portraits draped in grey cloth lined both sides of the hall. In other places, only pale outlines remained upon the walls, as though paintings had once hung there and been removed.

Everything was immaculate.

And yet utterly still.

As though the house itself had stopped breathing.

“How many people live here?” Eleanor asked.

“Seventeen permanent members of staff,” Pembroke replied with the expression of a sea captain who had somehow guided his crew through a storm.

“And who manages the estate?”

The butler hesitated only a fraction of a second.

“Mr. Whitmore.”

His expression did not change.

Yet something else did.

It was the first time Eleanor had heard the name.

The maid standing on the staircase landing lowered her eyes.

The footman carrying her trunks slowed his pace.

And for the first time since her arrival, Eleanor had the distinct impression that they had spoken a name they should not have spoken aloud.

“Is he here?” she asked.

If he was, she could not imagine why he had failed to receive her personally.

“Yes, my lady.”

“Then I presume I shall meet him at dinner, since he lacked the decency to greet me upon my arrival.”

In truth, she rather hoped she would not.

If Mr. Whitmore was as disagreeable as the atmosphere suggested, dinner promised to be a lengthy affair.

“Perhaps.”

It was the only answer she received.

Something about the exchange struck her as odd, though she could not yet decide what.

Before she could press further, something else caught her attention.

At the end of one of the side corridors stood a dark wooden door.

Nothing remarkable.

Except for the heavy iron chain stretched tightly across it.

“The family rooms have been prepared, my lady.”

The butler’s voice pulled her from her thoughts.

Eleanor turned away from the door.

She decided not to ask about it.

Not yet.

But as she climbed the staircase, she began compiling a mental list of everything she wished to know about Blackthorne Manor—its history, its inhabitants, and especially the mysterious estate manager who already seemed capable of unsettling her despite the fact that she had never met him.

She disliked the feeling.

Then again, she was little more than a young unmarried woman in a remote corner of Yorkshire, with no male relative to accompany her and no one to shield her from whatever awaited within those walls.

A young maid awaited them on the upper landing.

“This is Mary, my lady,” said Pembroke. “She will attend to your rooms.”

The girl curtsied.

“If you would follow me, my lady.”

She seemed kind enough.

As they walked through the corridors, Eleanor studied the condition of the manor more carefully.

It needed repairs.

Many repairs.

The roof in several places.

Windows.

Tapestries.

Perhaps even entire wings of the house.

She thought of the figures she had reviewed in London.

Any sensible person would have sold the estate.

She might have considered doing the same herself… had it not been for the letter.

Her father’s final letter.

The one she had discovered among his private papers two days after the funeral.

It contained no explanations.

No apologies.

No answers.

Only a few brief lines.

If you ever wish to understand who I truly was, go to Blackthorne.

And do not allow anyone to persuade you to sell it.

Those words had haunted her ever since.

Alongside the letter had come another discovery.

Investment documents.

Railway shares purchased years earlier.

A discreet fortune.

Enough to keep Blackthorne afloat for a few years.

Enough to fight.

But not enough to fail.

What she could not understand was how her father had managed to place such funds entirely at her disposal when she was an unmarried woman.

It was yet another mystery among many.

At last, Mary stopped before a door and opened it.

“Your rooms, my lady.”

Stepping aside, she allowed Eleanor to enter.

Mrs. Vale followed close behind.

The chamber occupied a corner of the eastern tower and was larger than the principal drawing room of many respectable London houses.

A vast arched window dominated the far wall, allowing the grey afternoon light to spill across the dark wooden floor. Beyond the glass stretched endless moorland, shrouded beneath a veil of mist that seemed unwilling to abandon those lands.

The walls were lined with aged oak panels. Time had darkened the wood until portions of it were nearly black. Between the panels hung faded tapestries depicting hunting scenes and ancient forests.

A grand four-poster bed stood at the center of the room. Its wine-colored velvet curtains had lost some of their former brilliance, yet retained an undeniable elegance.

Beside a white marble fireplace stood two armchairs upholstered in deep green fabric. A fire crackled softly within the hearth, casting dancing shadows across the vaulted ceiling.

Near the window rested a walnut dressing table with an oval mirror. Upon it sat a tarnished silver box, an empty vase, and an ivory-handled brush that seemed to belong to another age.

The room smelled faintly of burning wood, beeswax, and lavender.

Someone had taken care to make it welcoming.

And yet…

Something about it felt strangely watchful.

As though the room had been waiting for her.

For the first time since leaving London, Eleanor felt something close to relief.

Until she approached the window.

From there she could see much of the estate.

The stables.

The neglected gardens.

And a figure.

A man was walking through the rain near the edge of the woods.

Too far away for her to distinguish his features.

He appeared to be examining something beside an old stone wall.

For a few moments he remained there, motionless.

Then he disappeared into the mist.

As though the moor itself had swallowed him.

“Who is that?” Eleanor asked.

Mary followed her gaze.

The color drained from the young woman’s face.

“I don’t know, my lady.”

But the lie was a poor one.

So poor, in fact, that Eleanor knew immediately she had stumbled upon her first mystery.

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