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Hell Saga Verse

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Summary

Adil was just a student

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 "Does its real"

The sky was wide and ruthlessly blue, the kind that made you squint. A cool wind swept dead leaves across the college courtyard as the rising sun burned the buildings gold — the sort of morning that had no business being this peaceful.

Adil had no time to appreciate it.

He sprinted across the courtyard, uniform half-tucked, lungs already complaining. Black hair, compact build, slightly above average height — and completely, catastrophically late. Again.

One more late arrival means suspension. The thought hammered in rhythm with his footsteps.

He threw himself through the classroom door just as the bell rang, skidding to a stop with his hands on his knees, breathing like he’d fought someone on the way here.

“Oh, thank God,” he wheezed.

A sharp smack landed on the back of his head.

“Always late, huh?” Jake leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, grinning like he’d been waiting specifically to do that.

He had been. He’d arrived early — earlier than either of them, earlier than most of the class — and positioned himself exactly here, exactly like this, because this was the bit. The entrance. The thing that made Adil look up and see him first. Jake had learned early and thoroughly that if you didn’t make yourself the first thing in the room, some rooms just moved on without you. He’d gotten very good at being the first thing.

Tall, broad-shouldered, with messy blue hair that somehow looked intentional — Jake had the kind of presence that filled a doorway completely. He cracked his knuckles. “Don’t tell me you’re dodging our challenge.”

“You think I’m a coward?” Adil straightened up, rubbing the back of his head, a smirk already forming.

“Then let’s settle it.”

“Gladly.”

From the nearest desk, someone sighed with the exhaustion of a man twice his age.

“Seriously.” Garu didn’t even look up. Lean, unhurried, with the posture of someone who had long ago made peace with being surrounded by idiots, he rubbed the back of his messy black hair and stared at the ceiling. “Do you two think about anything besides fighting?”

“Oh, what’s up, Garu?” Adil waved cheerfully.

Garu finally looked at them. “Have you forgotten there’s a Math test today?”

Both boys froze.

The silence lasted exactly one second.

“WHAT—”

“I’m doomed,” Jake said immediately, his face draining of color. “My mom will actually kill me if I fail again.”

“Relax.” Adil patted his shoulder. “I’ll bring flowers to your funeral.”

“Shut it!” Jake shoved him.

“Take this!” Adil shoved back —

And then it stopped being a shove.

Jake’s front kick came without warning. Adil barely got his arms up in time. Even with a guard, the sheer kinetic force behind the strike was insane — Jake was a freak of nature, a naturally gifted heavyweight who trained like a demon. The impact hurled Adil backward, slamming into a desk, the old wood splintering beneath the impact. The classroom shuddered. Students leapt from their seats.

“Kyokushin!” someone shouted. “Five bucks on Jake!” “Adil’s too smart — he’ll take it!”

“Called it.” Garu pressed his palm to his face. But even he watched. He always watched. He remembered the first time they’d fought — Adil had won, and Jake hadn’t forgotten it for a single day since. His gaze drifted to the window. Outside, dark clouds had begun gathering at the edges of the sky. Strange ones. Heavy and still in a way clouds shouldn’t be. He didn’t remember hearing anything about bad weather.

Adil climbed out of the wreckage of the desk, grinning through the sting. “No warm-up. Fine.”

Jake came in fast, fist aimed at his face. Adil slipped left, then right, rolling his shoulders as each strike sailed past him. “Too slow—”

Jake’s roundhouse caught him clean across the cheek.

His head snapped sideways. He dropped to one knee, blood touching his lip, vision briefly white. His grin didn’t move.

“Why so serious?” he murmured — then drove a cross punch straight into Jake’s solar plexus.

Jake folded, gasping. Adil followed immediately with a flurry of jabs, too fast to count, rattling against Jake’s guard like hail on a roof.

Jake roared and tackled him to the floor, raining down wild punches. Adil covered up, absorbing, waiting with the patience of someone who already knew how this ended. He let one strike through deliberately — caught Jake’s wrist — and twisted.

The joint lock snapped into place.

Jake howled, thrashing, but every movement only tightened it. Adil pivoted smoothly, locking him into a full armlock, pinning him to the floor while the classroom erupted around them — desks pounding, voices overlapping, dust hanging in the air like smoke.

The door slammed open.

Their teacher stood in the frame, eyes burning. The classroom went silent so fast it was almost funny.

“You absolute brats.” His voice was dangerously quiet. “Again?”

Adil was already on his feet, pointing at himself. “I started it.”

“I started it,” Jake said simultaneously —

But he was still on the floor.

He hadn’t gotten up yet. Not because he couldn’t. Because for just a moment, with the classroom gone silent around him and every eye on the teacher and nobody looking at him specifically — nobody ever looked at him specifically when Adil was standing — he let himself stay down.

Why me again.

Not anger. Not the hot embarrassment of losing in front of an audience. Just the question — quiet, old, wearing the fight as a costume but belonging to something underneath it entirely — surfacing for exactly one unguarded second before he put his hand on the floor, pushed himself upright, and the grin came back on like a light someone had flipped.

The teacher’s eye twitched. “All three of you. Out. Cleaning duty. Now.”

“With respect,” Garu said slowly, lifting his head, “I didn’t move.”

“Now.”


Evening Punishment

The mops dragged across the dusty floor in lazy strokes. The grumbling was nonstop.

“You only won because of that stupid technique,” Jake muttered, dunking his mop into the bucket.

“So you admit I won,” Adil said, smirking as he wrung his out.

“Wake me up when we’re done,” Garu mumbled, eyes half-closed, leaning on his broom. “This is both your fault.”

The classroom felt different in the evening. The warm gold light from earlier was gone, replaced by something flat and grey. Faded portraits of past headmasters lined the walls, their painted expressions severe. Above the blackboard, a cracked plaque read: Founded 1899 — Knowledge Is Power.

Nobody spoke for a while. Just the wet drag of mops across old floors and the distant sound of the city winding down outside.

Then Adil went to dip his mop and stopped.

From the bottom of the bucket, dark crimson was rising — slowly, quietly, threading upward through the grey water like something bleeding from far below. It didn’t rush. It didn’t splash. It simply spread until the entire bucket looked like a pool of fresh, warm blood.

Adil didn’t move.

“...Guys.”

“Yeah,” Jake said. He was already staring at it.

“I see it,” Garu said. Both eyes open now.

None of them moved toward it. None of them moved away. They stood in the specific stillness of people watching something impossible happen very quietly in front of them and not yet knowing what to do with that information.

Then the scratching started.

Not random. Not frantic. Deliberate — the sound of something that knew exactly what it was drawing. From the bare concrete wall beneath the portraits, invisible claws began to carve deep dragging gouges into the plaster. Slowly. Patiently. Line by line, with the unhurried precision of something that had all the time in the world.

A shape was forming.

An eye. Narrow and long, its pupil a vertical slit, jagged rays extending outward from its edges like a sun that had never seen light. Adil had never seen the symbol before in his life. He couldn’t look away from it.

Jake moved to the door without a word, grabbed the handle, and pulled.

Nothing.

He braced his foot against the frame and threw his full weight into it. The door didn’t resist dramatically. It didn’t rattle or strain. It simply didn’t move — as though it had always been a wall and they were only now realizing it.

He turned back to the others. No one said anything.

The temperature dropped.

“Look,” Garu said quietly.

His lazy posture was completely gone. He was staring at the plaque above the blackboard, where the cracked wood had begun to split further open. From deep inside the fracture, faint at first then burning steadily brighter, a golden eye materialized. Its slit pupil dilated slowly — adjusting, focusing — until it had found all three of them and locked on with the deliberate attention of something that had been watching for a very long time and had only just decided to stop hiding.

On the wall, the carved eye began to glow in answer. The same gold. The same slit pupil. Both burning simultaneously, filling the grey room with a light that felt nothing like warmth.

Adil stepped back until a desk stopped him.

Then the portraits moved.

Their painted smiles widened — past the edges of their frames, past anything a face was supposed to do — stretching into expressions that had forgotten what smiling meant. Crimson gathered at the corners of their eyes and ran slowly, deliberately, down the canvas in thin dark rivers.

“Okay.” Adil’s voice came out quiet and flat. His eyes moved from the bloody bucket to the carved eye to the golden eye burning above the blackboard to the laughing portraits. “That’s not funny anymore.”

The floor trembled. Dust rained from the ceiling in thin curtains, falling through the golden light. The plaque rattled violently in its frame — Knowledge Is Power — pulsing in rhythm with the eye above it, with the eye carved into the wall, with something that had clearly already decided how this evening was going to end.

Adil’s friends were gone. He hadn’t even seen it happen.

Garu’s mop was on the floor.

Jake’s mop was on the floor.

Just Adil. Just the glowing eyes. Just the portraits that wouldn’t stop smiling.

Then the light came — not from any direction, from everywhere at once, swallowing the bloody bucket and the locked door and the carved eye and the golden eye and the crimson tears and the smiling portraits and everything —

Adil threw his arms up.

It didn’t matter.

The light took everything.


Silence.

The classroom stood empty. Dust settled slowly back to the floor.

On the wall, the golden eye had stopped glowing.

But the carving remained — deep, deliberate, waiting.

Outside, the city’s lights burned on.

Indifferent.



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