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Notorious

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Summary

In Depression-era Europe, the descendants of history’s greatest villains are recruited to stop the descendants of legendary heroes from saving the world by enslaving it. They are not innocent. They are not noble. They are notorious.

Genre
Scifi/Action
Author
Rhialto
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
27
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

London had learned to cough before it learned to scream.

Smoke lay over Whitechapel in a yellow-brown quilt, tucked into alleys and doorways, wrapped around lampposts, pressed against windows as if the city itself were trying to keep the poor indoors where no one important would have to see them. Rain had begun at dusk and had not committed itself to falling. It simply hung in the air, wetting hair, wool, brick, and bone with equal indifference.

Dr. Wilhemina Jekyl preferred rain to fog.

Rain was honest.

Fog concealed.

And in her family, concealment had always been the beginning of sin.

She stood in the back room of the St. Jude Free Clinic with her sleeves rolled to the elbow and blood drying brown beneath her fingernails. On the table before her, a boy of perhaps nine years old breathed in shallow, whistling pulls. His ribs rose like the frame of an umbrella beneath skin too pale for childhood.

“Again,” Mina said.

The nurse beside her, Mrs. Kettle, hesitated. “Doctor, he has had enough already.”

“Again.”

Mrs. Kettle swallowed, then handed her the syringe.

The boy’s name was Thomas Bell. His mother took in laundry when there was laundry to take in, and when there was not, she scrubbed the steps of women who complained about the smell of poverty while standing on floors cleaned by it. Thomas had been brought in with a fever, a crushed hand, and lungs full of poison from a factory room where children were not officially employed.

No one was officially starving either, according to Parliament.

Mina slid the needle into the boy’s arm. His mother stood near the stove, twisting a handkerchief until the fabric tore.

“Will he live?”

Mina did not answer immediately. She disliked lying to the poor. The rich expected lies and paid well for them. The poor deserved better, though they rarely got it.

“I am doing everything I can,” Mina said.

Mrs. Bell nodded as if that were comfort enough. It was not.

Outside, a motorcar rolled through the narrow street, splashing gutter water against the clinic windows. A man shouted. A woman answered with language sharp enough to cut meat. Somewhere nearby, glass broke. London continued its slow collapse with the usual soundtrack.

Mrs. Kettle moved close to Mina and spoke quietly. “There are three more waiting. One burn, one broken jaw, and one gentleman who says he represents the landlord.”

“The landlord is not a medical condition.”

“He says he has papers.”

“Then he may prescribe them to himself.”

Mrs. Kettle almost smiled.

Mina checked Thomas’s pulse. Too quick. Too thin. The child was running out of strength, and strength, contrary to every sermon ever preached in London, was not a moral quality. It was a resource. Like coal. Like bread. Like mercy. And like all resources, it was unevenly distributed.

The boy’s fingers twitched.

Mina looked down. His crushed hand was ruined. Two fingers would have to come off if infection had not already climbed into the blood. His breathing worsened. The injection had not been enough.

She felt the other part of herself stir.

Not a voice, exactly. Voices were too polite. This was pressure behind the eyes. Heat in the jaw. A spreading certainty that the world was simpler than decent people pretended. The boy was dying because men with clean collars had put him in a factory and called the arrangement economics. His mother was poor because other men had designed poverty as a machine and then blamed its victims for being caught in the gears.

Mina closed her eyes.

No.

The pressure smiled without a mouth.

Yes.

“Doctor?” Mrs. Kettle said.

Mina opened her eyes. The room had sharpened. She could hear Mrs. Bell’s pulse. She could smell coal smoke, carbolic acid, old blood, damp wool, fear, and beneath it all the faint sweetness of infection in the boy’s hand.

Too late for ordinary medicine.

Not too late for hers.

“Leave us,” Mina said.

Mrs. Kettle stared. “Doctor-”

“Take Mrs. Bell to the front. Give her tea.”

“I am not leaving my boy,” Mrs. Bell said.

Mina turned to her. She meant to speak gently. Truly, she did. But something of Hyde must have reached her face, because Mrs. Bell stepped back as though the doctor had become a stranger holding a knife.

“Your son needs a procedure,” Mina said. “You do not need to see it.”

Mrs. Bell began to cry, but she let Mrs. Kettle lead her away.

When the door closed, Mina locked it.

Then she opened the black leather case hidden beneath the surgical table. Inside were three vials, a silver tourniquet, two scalpels, and a small mirror she hated but always kept polished.

The serum was her own refinement of her great-grandfather’s formula. The family papers had called it liberation. The courts had called it evidence. The newspapers had called it Hyde.

Mina, who believed in accuracy even when it hurt, called it all three.

She tied the tourniquet around her arm. Her hands trembled. Not from fear of pain. Pain was only information delivered urgently. She feared pleasure. She feared the first instant after the serum entered her blood, when the world became clear and her conscience became quiet.

She filled the syringe.

“For healing,” she whispered.

The mirror reflected a pale woman with dark hair pinned too severely, cheekbones sharpened by sleeplessness, and eyes that had spent too much of life apologizing for a dead man’s experiment.

Dr. Wilhemina Jekyl.

Respectable name.

Damned inheritance.

“For healing,” she said again.

Then she pressed the needle home.

The transformation did not come like lightning.

It came like permission.

Her spine straightened. Her breath slowed. The ache in her shoulders vanished. The room widened, not physically but in possibility. Every instrument suggested itself to her hand. Every weakness in the boy’s failing body announced its solution.

Her reflection changed by degrees. The face was still hers, but freer. Hungrier. The mouth curved slightly, amused by shame. The eyes brightened.

Mina Jekyl stepped back.

Hyde leaned forward.

“Well then,” she said, in a lower voice. “Let us improve upon God.”

Her hands moved quickly. She cut away dead tissue. She opened the wound wider than any ordinary surgeon would dare. She drained infection, sealed vessels, injected stimulants, and used a small electrical apparatus of her own design to shock the boy’s heart when it faltered.

Thomas Bell convulsed once. Twice. Then he dragged in a breath so deep it sounded like the first gasp after drowning.

Hyde laughed.

Mina bit the inside of her cheek until she tasted blood. The laugh stopped.

By the time Mrs. Kettle knocked, the boy was sleeping. Two fingers were gone, but his pulse had steadied. His fever had begun to turn.

Mina unlocked the door.

Mrs. Kettle entered, saw the blood, saw the boy, then saw Mina. Her face tightened.

“You used it.”

“I saved him.”

“You used it.”

Mina removed her gloves. “Both statements appear to be true.”

A pounding came from the front of the clinic.

A man’s voice followed. “Dr. Jekyl! I know you’re in there!”

Mrs. Kettle looked toward the door. “The landlord’s gentleman.”

Mina inhaled.

Ink. Rain. Cheap cologne. Tobacco. Leather gloves. A revolver recently oiled.

Not a gentleman, then.

A collector.

The clinic’s front door banged open hard enough to crack the glass pane.

“Jekyl!” the man shouted. “You owe Mr. Grimsby three months’ rent, and Mr. Grimsby is tired of subsidizing filth.”

Mina looked at Thomas Bell. Then at his mother, visible through the frosted glass, clutching her torn handkerchief.

The pressure behind Mina’s eyes had not faded. It stretched.

Mrs. Kettle whispered, “Doctor, perhaps I should fetch a constable.”

“No,” Mina said.

The word sounded almost happy.

She walked into the front room.

The collector was broad, red-faced, and dressed in the costume men wore when they wished violence to appear administrative. Two younger men stood behind him, one with a crowbar, the other with a sack for whatever property could be taken and sold.

Mrs. Bell stood frozen beside the stove. Three patients sat on the benches. A woman with a burned arm. A man holding his broken jaw. An old veteran with one cloudy eye and no visible injury except hunger.

The collector smiled.

“There she is. Dr. Jekyl herself.” He made the name ugly, though it was not the ugliest name he could have chosen. “Or is it Miss Jekyl? Hard to know what to call a woman playing physician.”

“Mina will do.”

“I’ll call you whatever I like.”

“That is a common misconception.”

His smile faltered.

Mina came closer.

The collector removed a folded paper from his coat. “By authority of the owner, this property is to be seized pending payment. You’ll vacate by morning. Medicines, instruments, furniture, all subject to collection.”

“This is a clinic.”

“This is a building.”

“There is a child recovering from surgery in the back.”

“Then carry him out.”

The room became very quiet.

Mina felt something inside her purr.

She had spent her life fearing Hyde because Hyde wanted to hurt people. It occurred to her, not for the first time, that some people made that desire feel less like madness and more like arithmetic.

She stepped close enough to smell the collector’s dinner.

“Mr. Grimsby has raised the rent twice this year,” she said. “He has evicted six families from Flower and Dean Street. He charges widows for rooms with no heat and children for beds with lice. Last month, one of his men broke a dockworker’s arm in front of his daughter.”

The collector shrugged. “Not my concern.”

“No,” Mina said. “I suppose it is mine.”

He reached for her.

That was his mistake.

Mina caught his wrist, turned it, and broke it with a sound like a snapped branch.

The collector screamed.

The young man with the crowbar lunged. Mina moved inside his swing and drove two fingers into a nerve beneath his ribs. He dropped as if his strings had been cut. The third man went for his revolver. Mina picked up a bottle of ether and threw it. It struck his forehead, shattered, and sent him crashing into the wall.

The patients stared.

Mrs. Bell covered her mouth.

The collector cradled his broken wrist and backed toward the door.

“You’re one of them,” he gasped.

Mina stopped.

Not monster.

Not yet.

The collector’s face twisted with pain and triumph.

“One of the Jekyls.”

There it was.

The family name.

The inheritance.

The verdict dressed in respectability.

Mina took one step toward him. He flinched. She wanted to do more than frighten him. She wanted to peel away his certainty, his smugness, his little rented authority. She wanted to leave him with a lesson written in pain so clear he would carry it to his grave.

Instead, she stopped.

The stopping hurt more than the transformation.

“Yes,” Mina said. “And tonight that means I am the woman between you and them.”

The collector ran. His men followed as best they could.

For a moment, no one moved.

Then the old veteran on the bench began to clap. Once. Twice.

Mrs. Kettle shot him a look that could have sterilized instruments, and he stopped.

Mina turned away before anyone could thank her. Gratitude was dangerous. It made violence feel useful.

She returned to the surgery room, shut the door, and gripped the edge of the sink until the porcelain cracked beneath her fingers.

In the small mirror above it, Hyde smiled back.

“You enjoyed that,” the reflection said.

Mina stared at herself.

“Yes,” she whispered.

The smile widened.

Before the reflection could answer, there came a knock at the rear door.

Not the panicked knock of the poor. Not the entitled pounding of men with papers. Three soft taps. A pause. Two more.

Mina opened the drawer beside the sink and removed a scalpel.

The knock came again.

When she opened the door, a woman stood in the rain wearing a black coat, a widow’s hat, and no expression at all. She was perhaps forty-five. Indian by birth, English by tailoring, and something else by temperament. Behind her waited a motorcar so dark and polished that it seemed cut from the London night.

“Dr. Wilhemina Jekyl?” the woman asked.

“That depends who is asking.”

The woman looked past her into the clinic. Her eyes took in the blood, the cracked sink, the broken bottle, the unconscious child, and the doctor whose pupils had not yet returned to normal.

“My name is Eleanor Nemo.”

Mina tightened her grip on the scalpel.

The woman noticed and appeared faintly amused. “If I had come to harm you, Doctor, I would not have knocked.”

“That is exactly what someone dangerous would say.”

“Yes,” Eleanor Nemo replied. “It is.”

Rain ticked softly against the alley stones.

Mina said, “What do you want?”

“To offer you employment.”

“I have employment.”

“No. You have penance. It is admirable, but inefficient.”

Mina disliked her immediately. That, too, was dangerous. She had learned that people she disliked were often the ones telling the truth.

Eleanor Nemo reached into her coat and withdrew a card. It bore no address, only an embossed symbol: a black nautilus wrapped around a broken crown.

“There is a man gathering followers,” Nemo said. “A good man, according to the papers. A war hero. A reformer. A descendant of one of England’s most beloved legends.”

“Then I wish him joy.”

“He intends to save the world.”

“Men who intend to save the world usually begin by improving it against its will.”

“Precisely.”

Mina looked at the card but did not take it.

“What has this to do with me?”

Eleanor Nemo’s gaze did not soften. “Arthur Harker Pendragon is recruiting the descendants of heroes. Saints. Kings. Knights. Martyrs. Men and women with clean names and bloody intentions.”

Mina waited.

“I am recruiting the other sort,” Nemo said.

Hyde laughed silently inside her.

“The other sort,” Mina repeated.

“The descendants of those history calls villainous. The wicked. The infamous. The monstrous.” Nemo paused. “The useful.”

“My ancestor was a doctor.”

“Your ancestor made Hyde.”

Mina’s jaw tightened. “Yes. That is what everyone remembers.”

“No,” Nemo said. “That is what everyone simplifies. The Jekyl line is not merely a line of monsters. It is a line of division. Respectability and appetite. Science and denial. Charity and violence. You are not dangerous because you carry Hyde, Doctor. You are dangerous because you know what civilized people bury in order to call themselves civilized.”

Mina did not answer.

“I am not interested in being useful to governments,” she said at last.

“Nor am I.”

“Empires?”

“I have something of a family objection to empires.”

Mina glanced at the card again. Nemo. Of course.

“And if I refuse?”

“Then you may continue saving one child at a time while men with cleaner names prepare to enslave millions for their own good.”

Mina said nothing.

Eleanor Nemo stepped back into the rain.

“At midnight tomorrow, come to the old East India warehouse at Blackwall. Use the river entrance. Come alone.”

“I did not say yes.”

“No,” Nemo said. “But your family has always had a weakness for forbidden doors.”

She turned to leave.

Mina almost shut the door. Instead, she called after her.

“Mrs. Nemo.”

The woman paused.

“Why me?”

For the first time, Eleanor Nemo’s expression changed. Not much. Only enough to reveal something tired beneath the iron.

“Because, Doctor, the age of respectable monsters is coming. And I think the world may need someone who understands the difference between the man who makes the monster and the monster he blames.”

The motorcar carried her into the fog.

Mina stood in the alley until the rain cooled her blood and the pressure behind her eyes retreated.

Inside the clinic, Thomas Bell slept.

In her hand, though she did not remember taking it, was the card with the black nautilus and the broken crown.

On the back, written in a precise hand, were six words.

Let the notorious redeem the damned.

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