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Queens And Bones

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Summary

A deformed toe on a skeleton should have been a minor detail. But it was the one clue Officer Spector needed to launch his off-the-books investigation after a suspension from the HR Department following a private fallout. When a murder in High Rock Park in Queens hits too close to home, Sam—his own worst enemy—and his teenage sidekick must navigate the crowded streets of Queens, the Bronx, and Manhattan to capture the killer of the High Rock Park victim.

Genre
Thriller
Author
David
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 : HR Christmas

August 19, 2023 | 8:03 p.m.

Tears pricked my eyes as my stomach twisted. The walls were closing in again. You’d think saving the city would make you popular or respected, but in truth, it just leaves you alone in a room full of confetti and empty pizza boxes.

I walked out of the bathroom and into the gloom of my apartment. The cake sat untouched. The colorful confetti my friends had tossed now looked like discarded evidence on the floor. In the kitchen, my investigation board stared back: AEROTECH. ISABELLA. THE COMMISSIONER. THE BLOODY DOG.

I was trying to pinpoint the exact moment my life fell apart. The answer was simple: High Rock Park. Wednesday, April 26, 2023.

Yellow tape hugged the trees like a neon scream against the dark woods. My boots sank into the mud. The scent of rain and rotting leaves hung heavy, but it was the bleached bones laid bare on the dirt that clawed at something deeper. Even in death, they sent a shiver through the living. We were several years too late; the victim was long gone, and the killer had enjoyed at least a five-year head start.

“He fiddles with his collar when he’s nervous,” Officer Henderson muttered, nodding toward our superior.

I didn’t think it was a lost cause. I approached the remains, raising my camera. I always took my own pictures—I needed to see the scene through my own lens before the official narrative hardened into fact.

“Hi. I’m Veronica, the actual forensics expert for this unit.” Her voice carried a confidence that thinly veiled her irritation. “I’ve been working here for three years. It might be appropriate to consult me before potentially contaminating my crime scene. Don’t you think?”

She offered a tight, polite smile. It was the kind that said she didn’t like me.

“I’ll be back for your opinion in four to six weeks—when the lab results come in,” I replied. “Until then, I’m not waiting.”

The flash flickered across the grim tableau as I took a third picture.

“Look at the victim,” I said, my focus narrowing on the dirt. “The femur is thicker than the humerus. Clearly an athlete.” I sighed, searching for a term they’d actually understand. “Think of it as… thick thighs. But it’s bone. Not the actual thigh.”

The chatter stopped dead. Veronica’s jaw went slack. The polite smile vanished.

Just like that, HR Christmas came early.

Two hours later, the echo of my own footsteps was the only sound in the hall. I waited, eyes glued to the small plaque: *HR Department*. I wiped my glasses with my handkerchief for the fourth time in six minutes. One offhand comment—technically correct, yet spectacularly misunderstood—had landed me here.

Things were never looking good for me. Our unit had been under a microscope since an incident involving excessive force. A poor guy ended up with a concussion and a fractured clavicle, courtesy of Grant. Just saying his name behind the HR door was damning.

The door creaked open. “Sam Spector? You’re next.”

Matthew, the HR representative, sat behind a bleak desk. He didn’t look up, too busy leafing through a manila folder that looked uncomfortably thick.

“Are you aware why you’re here?” Matthew asked, steepling his fingers.

“I made a clinical observation that was misinterpreted as insensitive,” I said.

“It was more than a misinterpretation, Sam,” he replied, his voice calm and firm. “Your remark about the victim’s physique, in front of the entire team, demonstrated a profound lack of professional decorum. This, added to your documented history of friction with colleagues—specifically Ms. Jones—and prior memos, establishes a pattern.”

I shifted in the cheap plastic chair. “My intention was purely investigative. The observation was relevant.”

“Intent isn’t the sole benchmark here. Impact is.” Matthew closed the folder. “We have a responsibility to uphold a respectful environment, especially when dealing with the deceased. This unit functions on teamwork and mutual respect, which your actions have repeatedly undermined.”

On the surface, it was about accountability. It sounded logical. Even I could see that. Matthew believed he was doing his job. Hell, part of me believed it, too. But what we didn’t realize—what I was only starting to suspect—was that it wasn’t just me. Four of our best officers had been suspended within the last two months. Each came back to find their active cases buried or reassigned.

Matthew took off his glasses. “This isn’t personal. You have a brilliant analytical mind, Sam. But brilliance isn’t a license to disregard protocol and people. We suspended Benson Grant last week for similar reasons.”

“I understand the concern,” I said, forcing my tone level. “But a suspension? For one poorly phrased comment? That seems disproportionate when there’s an active, cold-case homicide.”

“The decision comes from the Commissioner’s office, based on the full pattern of behavior.” Matthew’s voice was final. “I’m sorry, Sam. The ruling is a 30-day suspension, effective immediately. You are to turn in your badge and credentials before you leave. You’re off the case.”

The air escaped my lungs. The words slammed into me, a cold punch of bureaucratic reality. Thirty days. The killer had a five-year head start, and now they had an extra month.

My body went numb. The case wasn’t just a job—it was a promise to a victim who had nothing left but bones. And now, I was being benched while a killer roamed the streets of New York.

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