Planet P: Morphic Whisper

StoryWeaverX: I came across your work and it hit differently. I have a perspective on it I think you'd find interesting mind if I share?

Fiona Walker: First of all I have to say that I really enjoyed this short story. I did find the single line paragraphs a little uncomfortable to read as it didn’t flow but the content was amusing and sweet. For me, the ending didn’t feel like an ending, it just stopped. I understand the implication of the final c...

Emily012: Fiona’s fear and resilience shine brilliantly.

iswariya: Plot and writing style are good but at some places we cant avoid feeling like the story is dragging. It would.be good if more spicy things are added in plot to keep the readers captured.

Ren: The storyline is great! The author has built a rich and compelling world, I really like the elemental powers and how those apply in combat. Sometimes there are situations where I wonder why the characters don't use their powers in more practical ways outside of combat, like why doesn't Ross use his ...

Annshula: A beautiful story. I was sceptical, seeing the title. But you wrote a beautiful love story! Thank you for the normal character names. A girl can only handle the "Dante's and Elena's" so many times 😀

Saraa: Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?

Elle Petra: I really enjoyed reading about these characters from the outset. The concept is great, and well-executed. Toward the end of the story I found it difficult to continue to relate to the FMC, to the point where I didn't really hope the main characters would end up together. But this is likely just down...

Dianamill07: Your writing style makes the story really easy to get into. I’m curious, which character is your favorite to write?