The Echoes Of Blackwood Manor by Xiguang at Inkitt
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The Echoes of Blackwood Manor

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Summary

A boy in a manor forgot about ghosts and spirituality until he met something, which makes him a superstitious believer................

Genre
Horror
Author
Xiguang
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The leftover Keys

The rain had been relentless for three days, turning the winding lanes of Blackwood Valley into a sludge of mud and fallen leaves. For Leo, a nineteen-year-old architectural student, the weather was the least of his concerns. He stood before the towering iron gates of Blackwood Manor, a desolate estate that had sat abandoned since the late 1950s. The townspeople spoke of it in hushed whispers, claiming the house didn't just decay—it waited.

Leo had managed to secure a temporary summer job assisting a local historical society in cataloguing the manor’s remaining artifacts before its scheduled demolition. It was tedious work, but it paid well enough to cover his next college semester.

"Don't stay past dusk," the elderly society director, Mr. Vance, had warned him earlier that morning, handing over a heavy brass ring of rusted keys. "The wiring is entirely shot, and when the shadows stretch in that place, your mind can play cruel tricks on you."

Stepping through the front double doors, Leo was met with the heavy, choking scent of damp wood, mildew, and ancient dust. The grand foyer was breathtaking yet deeply unsettling. A sweeping staircase climbed toward a darkened second-floor balcony, and grand portraits of the long-dead Blackwood family lined the walls. Their faded, painted eyes all seemed to track Leo's movements as he stepped inside.

He set up his workstation on a dust-covered oak table in the center of the foyer. He switched on his heavy-duty rechargeable lantern, casting a sharp, sterile white glow against the peeling wallpaper. For the first few hours, the work was entirely mundane. He photographed old leather-bound ledgers, catalogued tarnished silver candlesticks, and noted the condition of the rotting furniture.

By 4:30 PM, the storm outside intensified. The sky turned a bruised, unnatural shades of purple and charcoal, plunging the interior of the manor into an early, deep twilight.

Leo reached into his pocket to retrieve his phone to check the time, but the screen remained completely black. The battery had been full when he arrived, but now it refused to power on. A strange, localized chill suddenly bloomed in the room, thick enough that his breath plumed into a white mist before him.

Thump.

The sound echoed from the dark gallery directly above him. It wasn't the soft creak of an old house settling in the wind. It was the distinct, heavy sound of a solid object being dropped onto the floorboards.

Leo froze, his heart hammering against his ribs. "Hello?" he called out, his voice sounding thin and fragile in the vast space. "Is anyone there?"

Only the rhythmic drumming of the rain answered.

Telling himself it was likely a stray animal or a loose shutter, Leo grabbed his lantern and slowly climbed the grand staircase. Every step he took seemed agonizingly loud. Reaching the second-floor corridor, he shone the beam of light down the narrow hallway. Dust motes danced in the white light, but the hallway was empty.

Then, he noticed a door at the very end of the hall. It was a heavy, dark mahogany door, completely different from the rest. Unlike the other doors which stood slightly ajar, this one was firmly shut.

As Leo drew closer, he noticed something that made his blood run cold. Resting on the dusty floorboards directly in front of the threshold was a single, pristine copper key. It was entirely free of dust, gleaming under his lantern light as if it had just been placed there moments ago.

He bent down and picked it up. The metal was ice-cold, sending a sharp shiver up his arm. As his fingers closed around the key, a soft, unmistakable sound drifted from the other side of the mahogany door.

It was the sound of a child softly humming a nursery rhyme

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