The Things We Failed To Notice by Naomi Harts at Inkitt
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The Things we failed to Notice

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Summary

After completing her National Youth Service, twenty-six-year-old Boma moves to Calabar to start over with her best friend, Mercy, the one person who has always been more sister than friend. A new city, a promising future, and the comfort of having someone she trusts by her side make life feel full of possibility once again. Reluctantly, Boma agrees to attend Mercy's church, where she meets Pastor Jeremy—a young, respected pastor whose quiet sincerity challenges everything she expected. What begins as an unexpected encounter soon grows into a connection neither of them can explain. But beneath the warmth of new beginnings, something doesn't quite fit. There are questions no one thinks to ask. Small details everyone notices but quickly forgets. Strange moments dismissed as coincidence. Then one unexpected encounter tears apart everything they thought they knew. Sometimes the truth isn't hidden. Sometimes... it's simply the things we failed to notice.

Status
Excerpt
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter One

Some friendships are born out of convenience, others are built by time. But once in a while, life brings two strangers together so perfectly that even family begins to envy the bond they share.That was Boma and Mercy.

They had met during their second year at the university through a mutual friend. Their first conversation was completely ordinary, a borrowed pen, a missed lecture and a friendly argument over who made the better jollof rice. Before long, they were spending more time with each other than with anyone else.

By their third year, they decided to become roommates, moving into a small off-campus apartment together. Sharing that cramped space, surviving exam stress, midnight hunger, and the chaotic rhythm of university life side by side solidified their bond. They became sisters long before either of them fully realized it. By graduation, everyone on campus knew that where one was seen, the other was never far behind.

They were different in almost every way. Mercy laughed easily and could strike up a conversation with anyone, from a strict lecturer to the woman selling akara outside the school gate. She found joy in little things and genuinely believed every problem had a solution. Boma, on the other hand, was quieter. She spoke only when she had something worth saying and observed more than she talked, often wearing an unreadable expression that left people wondering what she was thinking. Yet beneath that calm exterior was a fiercely loyal heart.

After graduation came the inevitable separation. The National Youth Service Corps posted them to opposite ends of the country: Mercy to Cross Rivers State and Boma all the way to Kaduna. Distance, however, did nothing to weaken them. Morning calls became a daily routine and midnight chats served as therapy sessions.

When their service year ended, Mercy made a decision that surprised everyone. Instead of returning home, she chose to remain in Calabar. The city had grown on her. It was peaceful, beautiful and refreshingly slower than the chaotic cities she had always known. Rent was manageable and jobs, though not abundant, were easier to pursue without constant stress. For Mercy, it felt like a place where life could finally begin.

Boma on the other hand returned home to Rivers State after completing her service, promising she only needed a few months at home before deciding her next move. Six months later, she finally called Mercy.

"I will be joining you."

Those two words were enough to make Mercy scream so loudly that her neighbors rushed out to check if she was alright.

By noon the next day, Mercy was standing outside the arrival park, checking her phone every few seconds. The moment the bus finally rolled in, her eyes searched every passenger stepping down. Then, she saw her. Boma climbed down with a backpack hanging loosely over one shoulder and a large sized traveling bag in her hand. For a brief second, they simply looked at each other. Then Mercy ran.

"You finally came!" Mercy cried, wrapping Boma in a tight embrace, laughing and crying at the same time.

Boma chuckled, pretending to struggle for breath. "You want to finish me before I even enter Calabar abi?"

"You don't understand how much I missed you." Mercy said happily

"I missed you too," Boma said softly, holding her tighter.

The drive from the park was filled with comfortable noise, Mercy pointing out landmarks and Boma soaking in the clean, tree-lined streets of Calabar as the evening mist began to settle over the city.

It wasn't until much later, after they had settled into Mercy's cozy one-bedroom apartment and eaten a heavy dinner of fufu and Afang soup, that they finally slowed down. Now, they were sitting on a couch in the living room, legs crossed, with two cold bottles of drink between them. The street outside was completely dark and the night had grown quiet.

"I still can't believe you're actually sitting in my parlor," Mercy said, leaning her back against the sofa. "You'll love this city, Boma. Everything is just... peaceful. There's less pressure here, the cost of living isn't crazy, and people are generally friendly. I honestly think we can build a good life for ourselves here."

Boma smiled, taking a sip from her bottle. "So this is the Calabar you've been preaching about every week."

"I'm serious! And you've seen the apartment now. Is it not fine?" Mercy said

"It is fine," Boma teased, looking around the neatly arranged space. "You tried."

Mercy laughed, nudging Boma’s shoulder with her foot. "I've also been telling you about my church."

Boma rolled her eyes dramatically. "And there it is."

"What?"

"You've disturbed my life with that church, Mercy."

Mercy burst into laughter. "I've only been inviting you!"

"Inviting? Every single phone call somehow ended with 'our pastor said' or 'our church did this' or 'the worship yesterday was heavenly.'"

"Because it really is." Boma shook her head, amused. "You've become an evangelist."

"No," Mercy said, her tone suddenly softening. "I've just found somewhere that gives me peace."

There was a quiet certainty in Mercy's voice that made Boma stop and look at her across the dimly lit room.

"You've never talked about any church like this before," Boma observed quietly.

"I know."

"So... what's different about it?"

Mercy’s smile was gentle, almost mysterious. "I can't explain it. You just have to experience it for yourself."

Boma looked down at her drink. Church had never been a priority for her. Back in their university days, Mercy practically had to drag her to the occasional campus fellowship, and Boma usually found one excuse or another to stay back in the room. Still, seeing how alive and grounded Mercy seemed whenever she mentioned this place made her curious.

"So," Mercy said carefully, breaking the silence. "Will you come with me this Sunday?"

Boma sighed. "You won't stop asking, will you?"

"No."

"You've already decided my answer for me."

"I have hope," Mercy grinned.

Boma laughed, shaking her head. "Fine. I'll come."

Mercy clapped her hands excitedly. "I promise you won't regret it!" She had no idea that one simple "yes" would become the beginning of a story no one would ever believe.

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