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THE ORIGINAL RANKS

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Summary

In a futuristic world, every child receives a Rank Watch at the age of seven—a device that determines their place in society. The higher the rank, the greater the power, respect, and freedom. The lower the rank, the harsher the life.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1: A World Ruled by Ranks

The world had forgotten what equality truly meant.

Long ago, people believed that every human was born equal.

That belief no longer existed.

Now, the world believed in only one thing...

Ranks.

Every child lived a normal life until the age of seven.

No one knew what their future would be.

No one knew whether they would become respected...

Or forgotten.

On the seventh birthday, every child received a Rank Watch.

A small black digital watch placed on the left arm.

The moment it was activated...

A number appeared on its display.

That number became the child's Rank.

From that day forward, everything changed.

Schools...

Jobs...

Homes...

Privileges...

Even the way people looked at each other...

Everything depended on a single number.

High-ranked people lived in magnificent futuristic cities filled with advanced technology and endless opportunities.

Low-ranked people struggled every single day, surviving in old districts abandoned by society.

No one questioned the system.

Because everyone believed...

The Foundation never made mistakes.

Far beyond the cities stood a gigantic wall stretching endlessly across the horizon.

The Great Divider Wall.

Its true purpose had been lost to history.

Nobody knew what existed beyond it.

Nobody was allowed to cross it.

The Foundation claimed the wall protected humanity.

No one dared to ask...

"Protected from what?"

Because asking too many questions was dangerous.

The world looked peaceful.

But behind that peace...

Countless secrets waited to be uncovered.

And somewhere...

In a quiet little town...

A seven-year-old boy was about to receive his very first Rank Watch.

His name...

Was Asad.

He had no idea...

That one day, he would stand against the very system that ruled the world.

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