An Escape From Chaos by a Nigerian Writer at Inkitt
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An Escape From Chaos

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Summary

Tari was just walking home with roasted corn in hand when a stranger asked for directions — and her whole world vanished into the back of a van. Behind a fence, in a place with no name, she learns the only rule that matters: watch, wait, never run. She's seen what happens to the ones who try. So she waits. She counts. Month after month, she builds something no one around her can see — a plan patient enough to outlast fear itself. But the night it finally comes down to seconds, nothing goes the way she planned. One girl walks free. Not the one anyone would have guessed. How far would you go to save the ones you left behind?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

There is a kind of silence that doesn't mean peace.

It sounds, at first, like nothing at all — a held breath, a room where no one dares to move too quickly. You learn to hear the difference if you stay in it long enough. Ordinary quiet has an edge you can lean against. This kind has none. It just keeps going, waiting to see what you'll do with it.

She would remember, later, that the last ordinary sound she heard was traffic — the hum of evening cars, a hawker's bell somewhere behind her, the small, unremarkable music of a street she had walked a thousand times without once thinking to memorize it. She did not know, in that moment, that memorizing it was something she would have given almost anything to do.

Some people are taken by force, all at once, a door kicked in, a scream cut short. That is not always how it happens. Sometimes it is quieter than that. Sometimes it is a mild voice, and a kind face, and a single wrong turn taken in good faith — and by the time the silence closes in, there is no longer any door to kick down, because you have already walked through it yourself.

This is not a story about that silence winning.

It is a story about a girl who learned to listen to it so carefully, for so long, that she found the one sound inside it that didn't belong — a gap, a rhythm, a mistake waiting to be made by someone who wasn't paying attention.

She was.

What she did with that gap is the rest of this story. But it starts, as these things always do, with an ordinary evening, a bag of roasted corn, and a stranger who only wanted to ask for directions.


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