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THE SHINING STAR

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Summary

Legi travel to another world. She meet some creature and help them fight a monster. Later she finds about the trapped princess. She is trying to find the lost prince. Will she be able to find the prince?+

Genre
Fantasy
Author
ARSHIKA
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

'THE SHINING STAR'


Legi had just returned from her flute lessons, when her friend called her to go to the beach. She got ready to go to the beach. She went a bit earlier to enjoy the sea breeze.Legi laid her mat and sat on it.

While sitting, she saw an opening forming in the water. It was looking as if a small tidal pool has formed.

As she moved closer a force pulled her inside the opening. She went down the hole gliding as fast as a cheetah and fell on the ground.

When she opened her eyes she saw many creatures were staring her. They were small heighted, had big eyes ,small hands and were wearing a turban with shiny stones in it. They looked scared and were wishpering among themselves in there own language.

One of them asked "Who are you?" in their own language.Legi did not understand anything and requested to speak English. They asked again"Who are you"other asked?Why you are here. How you entered our word?Everyone started asking, it became a chaos.

Then everyone stoped speaking An old creature with a stick came forward.It said to another creature in some other language then all took Legi to a room.On the way she saw stones are sparkling like diamond.It was not just one , but many stones were shining like that.


The only creature who knew english asked "How you entered our world" legi told him everything .Soon the creature and Legi, became friends .the creature told that his name was Blue and they are known as 'Dorties'.Legi wandered around the small world and saw everything was shiny.

On the way she saw stones are sparkling like diamond.It was not just one , but many stones were shining like that.The only creature who knew english asked “How you entered our world” legi told him everything .Soon the creature and Legi, became friends .the creature told that his name was Blue and they are known as ‘Dorties’.Legi wandered around the small world and saw everything was shiny.

On the way she saw stones are sparkling like diamond.It was not just one , but many stones were shining like that.The only creature who knew english asked “How you entered our world” legi told him everything .Soon the creature and Legi, became friends .the creature told that his name was Blue and they are known as ‘Dorties’.Legi wandered around the small world and saw everything was shiny.

Then Legi was taken to the Royal guest house, and there she saw variety of food in the dining room, Legi managed to eat the food.She asked Blue "What is this word's name?" 'Shining Star' he said.

Later she went out for a walk in the garden but saw everyone running she asked "What happened ". Blue replied" It's the Gaint Nato. Every week he come here and take one of us to his tower.

"Everyone requested Legi to help them. She thought for a while, and an idea struck her "Why don't the dorties attack the Gaint?" She gave this idea to them.But they said that they don't have a strong army to fight with the Gaint and will be defeated very easily.

Another idea came to Legi's mind that they can use different techniques to injure the 'Gaint'. And then the army can easily kill it.

The dorties decided to fill a large cloth with coal.Then burn it and throw it on the Gaint Nato. Next, they used there small weapons to stab in the wounds.After that, one dorty bought a pot with the Celestial Gas, which could faint anyone.

After the discussion, the head asked the dorties to throw the giant on the dead lake, Legi asked, "What is the dead lake?"

The dorties explained that the lake in their world is influenced by black magic.Whoever enters the lake is teleported to another world from where it could never return back.

Legi was astonished by listening about the horrifying lake. So as decided the 'Gaint Nato' was thrown into the 'Dead lake'.The 'gaint' cried for forgiveness while drowning and vanshied.

Everyone was very happy and enjoying. While celebrating one thought came to Legi's mind. She asked the head "From where the crystal stone comes?".

The head replied "These stones were formed when the great fairy Luosiana lived here.Whenever she walked, the footprints would turn into these crystals. She had a beautiful palace here, but she had to leave this place.

Because she had to find her lost prince. Many of us went after her, but she demanded us not to come. Instead, she told us that whenever you need me. Just call my name I will come.

When she did not return for a long time, we followed her foot prints and got to know that she was not able to find her Prince so with sorrow in her heart. She locked herself in a cave inside which no one can enter."

We tried everything to open the cave but failed as the magic was too strong. Legi asked "What is another way to open the cave?" The head replied, "We have to find the Prince. So that fairy Louisiana comes out herself."

The head said "Please help us find Fairy Louziana so that we are happy and united together." Legi asked "Where is the cave in which the fairy has locked herself?"

The head replied , it is not far come with me. Legi and the other dorties followed the head. As they reached where the head directed his hand towards the cave.

The cave was surrounded by black smoke, which looked very horrifying, and a transparent shield was made around the cave so that no one can enter it. Legi tried to get in, but was thrown away by the force of the magic.

She called out, please Fairy Louisiana come out we need you. A sad voice replied"I cannot help you without my prince. Please leave me alone and go away". Legi replied , "We are here to help you find your prince".

A long woman with feathers and wearing a beautiful pink dress appeared. She had long blonde hair , big eyes and scars all over her body ,she looked tired and had a sad smile in her face.

She was looking down at her feet with tears filled in her eyes. She said "Please help me find my prince". After that she burst into tears.

Legi asked"When he was last seen?" She replied "When I asked a few people they said that they saw him going to the Black Tulip Tower. People say that whoever enter that cave never return." Legi asked "What is there in the tower that no one returns?"

The fairy replied "No one knows" Legi said "Let's go to the tower" Louisiana's face dropped she said "I can't get out of here until I see the prince" Legi was shocked to hear this and asked why?

Louisiana replied "I met a witch who looked kind, so I told my story so she suggested me to go to this cave as it fulfil your wish but when I came her she showed her real face and locked me here"

She added " I begged her to free me so she gave her word that if someone from another world came and rescue your prince from me, and you meet him so you will free." Legi was shocked to hear this.

Louisiana added "You saw that opening in the sea as I made it for you so that you come and help me." The Fairy said"Go to the Andes hill and find the magical flute my dorties will guide you there."

When you will play the flute the musical notes will guide you to my prince."The fairy added "To defeat the witch you have to break her locket which will weaken her."

Legi followed the dorties and stopped near the hill. The dorties said "We can't go ahead of this as we are very small."

Legi took a deep breath and started climbing. The dorties said "We will guide you where to keep your step". As the dorties were guiding , Legi was keeping a step in each stone.

After a lot of struggle , she finally reached the top. As she tried touch the flute magical creature appeared. He had long hairs , a big moustache, and he was wearing a long white dress. He said "You can't take my flute."

First you have to answer my question. Legi asked what kind of questions. The man said "My first question is what is the strongest power in the world?"

She replied the strongest power in the world is KINDNESS. The divine man was very happy to hear this and said "I was not expecting this answer from you but you know the real meaning of life ,so I give you this flute."

Legi climbed down the hill to the Dark Tulip Tower and played the flute. The notes showed Legi the way to the prince, as she was moving forward suddenly the witch came . She demanded Legi " Go away little girl you can't deafet me."

Legi said " Leave the prince and let him go" The witch laughed and said "Why would I that?" Legi suddenly saw the locket and broke it from the flute.

The witch felt on ground and became very weak. Quickly Legi played the flute. And followed the tune after going through many doors she finally found the prince sitting tied up in the chair.

She hurried to open the ties. When the Prince asked "Who are you?" Legi replied, "I am here to help you. Please come with me , fairy Louzania is waiting for you !" They both went to the cave.

As Fairy Louzania saw the prince she was free from the cave. Fairy Louzania hurried, to hug the Prince and thanked Legi for helping them. All returned to the palace happily. Everything was decorated and a reunion party was oraginsed.

The whole palace was decorated from the crystal stones. Food was prepared everyone dressed nicely.

Soon everyone leapt with joy.Then Legi decided to go home as it was very late, she went to the Fairy and demanded "I want to go home". The Fairy said, "l can help you only if Mr. Yellow comes".Legi asked "Who is Mr. Yellow".

The Fairy said that "He's a kind man who helps people reach back to their world." The Fairy and all others sang together, "Oooo! Mr.Yellow, Mr.Yellow please come Mr. Yellow."

A bright light came and a tall yellow creature wearing an old brown hat appeared with a sweet smile in his face . Everyone was very happy to see him and rushed towards him . He sweetly hugged everyone and gave them few gifts

Then the Fairy explained the scenario and asked Mr. Yellow for help.

Mr. Yellow held Legi's hand to teleport, but everyone said stop. Then one of the dorty handed Legi, gifts then they teleported. When she returned she realized that she was back to time when she left the world.

She thanked Mr. Yellow for helping and asked that how the time stopped.

He replied that "It happens when any other creature enters another world the time stops of that world". Mr. Yellow said bye to Legi and disappeared with a bright light and a sweet smile.

She told everyone everything, but no one believed it. But she knew it was a true adventure and stored all her memories in her diary. She even decorated her study room with the sparkling stones gifted by them .



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