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Answering the Call

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Summary

Dallas, 1928. Blanche Lynch never expected her life to change in a single moment. The night she is attacked, she should have died, yet something inside her awakens instead. The impact hits, the world tilts, and a force she cannot explain rises to meet the danger. After that night, the city feels sharper. Her senses catch on things she cannot name. Her body reacts before her mind understands why. Blanche tries to pretend nothing is different, but the truth follows her. Whoever attacked her was not trying to end her life. They were trying to awaken something buried deep within her. The more she resists, the more that strange new instinct pushes forward, pulling her toward a path she never meant to walk. Betty steps in first, loyal and unshaken, determined to help Blanche make sense of what is happening. Others join the edges of her story, including a man tied to the violence spreading through the streets. As Blanche uncovers the pattern behind the attack, she realizes it is not random and it is not new. She has stepped into a role that has been waiting for her, and the call will not be ignored. A noir‑flavored urban fantasy set in 1928 Dallas, exploring awakening power, hidden danger, and the cost of answering when the city demands your name.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

This is a brand‑new project I’m still drafting, and I’ll be rolling it out at a steady pace. I’m very open to thoughtful feedback as the story grows. This is a true passion project, and I really hope you enjoy walking through 1928 Dallas with Blanche and Betty.


The city wakes up, Betty arrives crooked and chaotic, and the girls step into the night like they own it.

Blanche POV

Friday at five in Dallas is when the city streets start hopping. Businesses are locking up, and streetcars are full, and the sidewalks start to buzz with people ready to embrace the nightlife and forget the week. I am waiting in the lobby, of course. I am always waiting on my chaotic and crazy Betty. I was born less than fifteen minutes before her and have been waiting at least that long ever since.

She isn’t my blood sister, but we have been neighbors and friends since birth. We went to the same school and were expelled together and that is just the way we like it. You might say we aren’t conformists, and that would not be wrong. Betty might have cornered the market on coloring outside the lines of conformity. I make every attempt to stay in the lines, but inevitably Betty drags me out every time. I will never admit it to her. I love every second. But then I don’t have to admit it. She knows. We are that close.

The lobby smells faintly of floor polish, old paper, and cigarettes. The marble floors shine under incandescent bulbs which glow brighter than the old gas ones ever did. The brass doors of the elevator gleam like they were freshly polished.I smooth my skirt and check my curls in the reflection. They have stayed neatly pinned, despite the switchboard headset, just the way I like them. I fold my hands again and wait.

Just then the elevator dings and out comes my girl.

Her hat is a bit crooked, the seam of one of her stockings is askew, and her T-straps click a little too loudly on the marble floor. Her ruby-red dress hugs her waist and flares at the hips, swaying with every step. Her curls bounce like they have their own agenda, and her lipstick is the kind of red that makes men forget their wives’ names. All five foot five of her screams trouble. She spots me waiting in my usual place and flashes her signature trouble‑has‑arrived smile. It is the definition of a smile that will undoubtedly get a girl in trouble without uttering a word.

“Boss chasing you around the desk again?” I ask, glancing at her hat.

“Of course,” she answers.

“Did he catch you?” I follow up, glancing at her seams.

“Not today, he didn’t.” She winks at me as she loops her arm into mine and with the other adjusts her hat. The seam she ignores because she is Betty.

“Betty, you could make the devil himself blush.” I shake my head and squint at her.

She throws me a wicked grin, and we slip out on the street. A streetlight flickers overhead, casting long, strange shadows that stretch and stretch and snap back with each pulse of light. A Model A Ford rolls past, its engine rumbling low, headlights cutting through the dusk just as we pass the Magnolia Building, its limestone façade catching the last of the sun. Men spill out of its doors loosening their ties, trading the day’s ledgers for the promise of liquor and jazz. The whole block hums like it’s shaking off its manners for the night.

The air outside is warm and carries the sharp tang of hot metal from the streetcar line, and magnolia trees. People move past us in a steady stream. Men in rolled-up dress shirts, already shedding their suit jackets. Women brush past us in dresses that still hold the shape of the day, and leaving behind the scent of jasmine and powder. The city feels alive, like it is waking up just because we stepped into it.

Betty walks with a bounce that makes her curls shift and her skirt swing, drawing the eye of many a passing gentleman. Her stride is longer than mine which pulls me along. Years of practice have given me the muscle memory to match her. I joke to myself it helps to keep me thin.

A handsome young man leaning casually against a lamppost catches my eye. His tie is loosened, his sleeves rolled up exposing his strong arms. He tosses me a smile so warm it steals my breath. I look away too quickly, pretending I didn’t notice. Betty notices everything. She bumps my hip and smirks. “Oh, he is swell,” she murmurs. “You’re allowed to look.”

The streetcar rattles past us, spitting sparks from the overhead line, scattering gold across the brick street like someone striking a match. A man leans out and whistles. Betty waves as though she knows him. There is every chance she does. Betty collects attention the way other girls collect costume jewelry. She seldom keeps them long, but she keeps them entertained. I collect details and information. We make a good pair.

We round the corner toward Elm as a neon sign starts buzzing to life. Music is already spilling out of clubs even though the sun hasn’t completely set yet. The city hums with the promise of a night that could go anywhere, and it usually does. A saxophone wails from somewhere down the block. A trumpet answers. Laughter is rising from a doorway ahead. Someone calls out to a friend across the street. It blends like a symphony into the kind of evening that lists a million different possibilities.

Betty squeezes my arm. “Ready to tear up the town?”

I smile. “I’m always ready.”

The night is young and so are we. There is a dance floor calling our name and a corner booth with a bottle of gin tucked discreetly under the table for us.

We step into the evening like it belongs to us. Maybe it does.

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