Rise Of The Underrated Prodigy by ProdigyChronicles at Inkitt
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RISE OF THE UNDERRATED PRODIGY

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Summary

Mocked as talentless and abandoned by fate, Ethan inherits the Four Supreme Inheritances of the First Primordial Sovereign: the Primordial Devouring Art, the Primordial Devouring Space, the Primordial Veil Art, and the Ancient Cultivation Methods. Hiding his true power while mastering the greatest legacy in history, he uncovers the conspiracy that erased the Primordial Era, challenges the forces that have ruled the shadows for millennia, and ascends from a underestimated disciple to the unrivaled sovereign who unites and rules the Ten Realms..

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Root Mirror

The Root Mirror stood at the center of Cloudreach Hall like something the mountain itself had grown—a slab of black stone taller than three men, veined with silver that pulsed faintly, as if the mirror breathed. Two hundred years old, older than the clan's founding, older than the names carved into the ancestral hall behind it. No one remembered where it had come from. Only what it did.

Every cultivator was born with a spirit root somewhere in their body—a seed of affinity for one of the world's energies, fire or water, wind or earth, sometimes rarer things entirely. Most children carried a single root, weak and unremarkable, the kind that let a person cultivate slowly and plainly for an ordinary life. A few carried two, which the clan prized and trained without expense. Fewer still carried three, and those children were given their own tutors before they turned ten. The mirror didn't create any of this. It only looked at what was already there and said the number out loud, so the clan would know exactly how much of its resources a child was worth spending.

Ethan Ashford stood in the fourth row of testing children, sixteen years old, hands cold despite the summer heat pressing through the hall's open doors. Around him, murmurs rose and fell like insects in tall grass—not about him yet. Not yet.

"Damian Blackwood," the clan steward called, and a boy near the front stepped forward with the loose, confident gait of someone who had never once doubted what the mirror would say.

He pressed his palm flat against the stone. Silver light climbed his arm, wrapped his shoulders, and burst upward in a column that painted the ceiling gold.

*Spirit Root: Upper-Tier Fire. Dual Root Confirmed. Cultivation Potential: Exceptional.*

The hall erupted. Elders nodded. Damian didn't smile—he didn't need to. He simply turned, found Ethan's eyes across the crowd, and let the corner of his mouth curl before walking back to his place among the clan's golden children.

Ethan didn't look away. He'd learned young that looking away only fed people like Damian—and he'd learned, more slowly and more bitterly, exactly why Damian had chosen him, out of every ordinary child in the clan, to feed on. Six years ago, before either of them had roots worth speaking of, Arthur Ashford had been offered the seat of Second Elder and turned it down, choosing instead to remain a common instructor so he could raise his son himself. The seat had gone to Damian's father, who took it, and took the prestige with it, and never once let his son forget that the Ashfords had simply *given it away*—as though refusing power were the same as being too weak to hold it. Damian had grown up believing his family's rise had cost the Ashfords nothing at all. Grinding Ethan down was, in some small and ugly corner of him, proof that the exchange had been fair.

Fifteen more names passed before the steward reached him. Fifteen more columns of light—some gold, some silver, one a startling jade green that made an elder gasp and clap his hands together. Each time, Ethan watched his father's face in the crowd, and each time Arthur's expression didn't change. Not hope. Not dread. Just the stillness of a man who had already decided to love his son regardless of what a piece of stone had to say about him.

"Ethan Ashford."

The hall quieted the way it always did for him—not from anticipation, but from habit. Everyone already knew what this was going to be. He was the boy who fainted during meridian exercises at age nine. The boy the clan's alchemist had once examined for three hours and then simply written *unremarkable* in his ledger and never spoke of again.

He walked to the mirror anyway. He always walked to the mirror anyway.

His palm met the stone. It was warmer than he expected—warmer than it had been for anyone else, though no one else seemed to notice, and he told himself it meant nothing.

Nothing happened.

No light. No column. No number.

The silver veins along the mirror's surface flickered once, violently, like a candle guttering in wind, and then went dark around the shape of his hand—dark in a way none of the other testings had left it. A ring of black spreading an inch beyond his fingers, as if the stone had flinched.

Whispers started immediately.

"Broken already?"

"No—look, it's just him. The light's just... gone."

"Maybe it can't read what isn't there."

The steward frowned, tapped the mirror's edge, murmured something to the elder beside him. They tried again. Ethan pressed his palm flat a second time, hard enough that his knuckles whitened, and felt something under the stone's surface *recoil*—not mechanically, not the way old instruments sometimes stuttered, but the way a hand pulls back from a flame.

The mirror gave nothing. No root. No number. No verdict at all.

"Spirit Root: None Detected," the steward finally said, and even he sounded uncertain reading it aloud, as if the words tasted wrong. "Cultivation Potential: Untestable."

The hall didn't erupt this time. It laughed.

Not everyone. Not his father, whose jaw had gone tight enough that a muscle jumped in his cheek. Not his mother, three rows back, who had gone very pale and very still. But enough of them—Damian's circle first, then spreading outward the way cruelty always spread faster than kindness—enough of them laughed, and the sound of it filled the hall the way the golden light had filled it minutes before, taking up all the same space.

"Untestable," Damian repeated, savoring it. "That's a new one. Usually the mirror just says weak. I didn't know it could say *nothing at all exists here."

"Enough," Elder Rowan said, but there was no real force behind it, and everyone in the hall understood the difference between an order and a suggestion offered without conviction.

Ethan kept his hand on the mirror a moment longer than he needed to. Not out of stubbornness. Because underneath the cold stone, beneath where the black ring had spread, he thought—for just a fraction of a second—he had felt something answer him. A pulse that wasn't the mirror's own rhythm. Something old and slow and patient, like a creature deep underwater deciding whether the light above was worth rising toward.

Then it was gone, and it was just stone again, and he was just the boy the entire hall was already forgetting how to be kind to.

He pulled his hand back and walked to where his father stood, spine straight, refusing to hurry even though every step felt like walking across the surface of a frozen lake that could give at any moment.

Arthur set a hand on his shoulder once he reached him. Didn't say it's fine. Didn't say *the mirror is wrong, though privately Ethan suspected he believed it. He only said, quiet enough that it was for the two of them alone, "Walk with me."

They left before the ceremony finished, before the ranking board was posted with Damian's name near the top and Ethan's left blank—not ranked low, simply *absent*, as though the clan's records had decided the kindest thing to do with him was pretend the test had never happened.

Outside, the mountain air was sharp with pine and the coming autumn. Arthur didn't speak until they'd crossed the training yard and reached the low stone wall at its edge, the one that looked out over Cloudreach's terraced fields toward the valley beyond.

"Your grandfather used to say the mirror only shows what a person already is," Arthur said finally. "Not what they'll become."

"The mirror said I'm nothing, Father."

"The mirror said it couldn't find a root." Arthur's eyes stayed on the valley, not on him—the way he always looked away from Ethan during the conversations that mattered most, as if directness might crack something fragile between them. "That isn't the same sentence."

Ethan didn't answer. There wasn't a version of I felt something under the stone that wouldn't sound like a child's desperate invention, and he was too tired, suddenly, to risk being laughed at twice in one afternoon—even by someone who loved him.

But that night, lying awake in the small room at the rear of the Ashford residence while the rest of the clan slept off the day's spectacle, he pressed his palm flat against his own chest, over his heart, the way he had pressed it against the mirror.

Something pressed back.

Not a heartbeat. Beneath it—older than it, patient in a way nothing sixteen years old had any business recognizing. A slow, deliberate pulse, keeping its own time in the dark, as though it had been asleep inside him his entire life and had only now, in the mirror's presence, decided he was worth waking for.

Ethan lay very still and did not call it fear, though it was close to that. He called it, instead, the first true thing anything had ever told him about himself.

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