The Last Promise by Shiza Afsheen at Inkitt
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The Last Promise

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Summary

Ethan Carter had only one promise to keep—to protect his younger sister, Lily, no matter what. She was his best friend, his greatest strength, and the one person who could always make him smile with her endless teasing and handmade gifts. But everything changes when Lily becomes the seventh victim of New York’s most feared serial killer, known only as The Raven. Devastated and consumed by guilt, Ethan refuses to let her death become another unsolved case. When he discovers that his best friend, Noah Brooks, lost his younger sister to the same killer months earlier, the two set out on a dangerous investigation of their own. As they uncover forgotten evidence, hidden connections, and a mysterious accomplice known only as The Shadow, they realize someone has been watching them from the very beginning. Every clue brings them closer to the truth. Every step puts another life at risk. And when they finally unmask the killer, they discover that revenge can never replace the people they loved. Because some promises survive forever… Even when the person you made them to is gone.

Status
Complete
Chapters
23
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue


“Promise me you’ll never let anything happen to me.”

The words were spoken so casually that Ethan Carter couldn’t help but laugh.

They were sitting on the rooftop of their apartment building, watching New York shimmer beneath the evening sky. The city buzzed with life, but up there, it felt as though the world belonged only to them.

Lily leaned against his shoulder, carefully tying a small handmade bow around his wrist.

“I made it myself,” she said with a proud smile. “It’s not perfect… but now you’ll always have a little piece of me with you.”

Ethan looked at the uneven loops and laughed softly.

“I’ll never take it off.”

She held out her pinky.

“And promise you’ll always protect me.”

Without a second thought, he hooked his pinky around hers.

“I promise.”

Lily grinned, completely certain he would never break it.

Neither of them knew that promises were easy to make…

…but impossible to keep when fate had already written a different ending.

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