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In This Cruel World, We Touch the Hidden Thread

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Summary

Every three years, the Blood Moon rises over Judgment Square. Anyone who has reached eighteen must discover another person’s hidden thread—a secret point buried somewhere in the body that, once awakened, creates an irreversible bond of obedience. Those who fail are sent to the Unclaimed District. Shen Yan and Gu Shen have spent their entire lives preparing for that night. Raised together in an orphanage and trained inside the ruthless Central Academy, they have made an impossible promise: neither will belong to anyone else. But when the Blood Moon rises, hundreds of hunters enter the square with them. To survive, Shen Yan and Gu Shen must find each other before someone else finds them—and prove that even in a world built on ownership, surrender can still be chosen.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 The Shadow Before the Blood Moon

The Blood Moon rose in full only once every three years.

For most people, it was no more than a distant red stain in the sky—a warning repeated in textbooks, prayers, and the bedtime stories adults told children who refused to behave.

But for those who had reached eighteen since its previous appearance, the Blood Moon meant only one thing.

Judgment.

On that night, every eligible citizen was required to enter Judgment Square before the final bell.

There were no exemptions for illness.

No exemptions for wealth.

No exemptions for fear.

The gates would close at moonrise, and no one would be permitted to leave until they had fulfilled the law carved into the black platform at the center of the square.

The same words had remained there for two hundred years.

Find—or be found.

The platform was said to be older than the country itself.

Some claimed it had been built by the first rulers, who believed human beings could never be trusted to choose loyalty freely. Others said the stone had risen from the earth on the night of the first Blood Moon, already bearing the words upon its surface.

The academy taught the official version.

The hidden thread had saved civilization.

Before its discovery, wars had lasted for generations. Alliances broke overnight. Families betrayed one another for food, land, and power. No oath could guarantee obedience, and no ruler could trust the person standing closest to the throne.

Then the hidden thread was found.

Every human body carried one.

It was not a blood vessel.

It was not a nerve.

It was something older than either—something buried beneath flesh, instinct, and reason.

The hidden thread could lie almost anywhere.

Beneath the collarbone.

In the hollow of the waist.

Along the sole of the foot.

Between the nape and the shoulder blades.

Near the wrist, behind the knee, or somewhere so carefully concealed that a person could spend their entire life without discovering it alone.

Ordinary touch was not enough to awaken it.

The finder had to locate the exact point and apply the correct pressure, rhythm, or contact. Once awakened, the thread formed a permanent bond between the person who had found it and the person who had been found.

The academy called it a stabilizing contract.

The law called it ownership.

Most people used a simpler word.

Enslavement.

The one who had been found would lose the ability to resist a direct command from the finder. The reaction was not merely physical. It reached deeper, silencing panic, anger, pride, and even the instinct to run.

Body and mind would submit together.

The bond could not be transferred.

It could not be removed.

It could not be refused once completed.

There was no antidote.

No appeal.

No second chance.

No exception.

To the government, this system preserved peace.

To Shen Yan, it sounded like a sentence passed before anyone had committed a crime.

Those who failed to complete the ritual before sunset were sent to the Unclaimed District.

The academy rarely spoke about what happened there.

Officially, it was a temporary holding zone for people without a recognized bond.

Unofficially, everyone knew the truth.

People sent to the Unclaimed District lost their legal identities. Their names were removed from the central registry. They could be examined, marked, or assigned by the state.

They became public property.

Children whispered that the people inside were kept beneath the city in rooms without windows.

Older students claimed that the district was not beneath the city at all, but behind the northern wall, where the lights never went out and wagons arrived every night.

The instructors dismissed both stories as immature rumors.

But they never explained why no one returned.

Shen Yan first understood the true horror of the hidden thread when he was fifteen.

That afternoon, he and Gu Shen slipped through the academy’s rear gate.

The gate itself was rarely guarded. The academy trusted its walls, its tracking systems, and the fear of punishment to keep students inside.

Gu Shen had discovered otherwise.

“There are seven seconds between the western camera turning away and the eastern one completing its sweep,” he had said that morning.

Shen Yan had stared at him over breakfast.

“You timed it?”

“Three times.”

“You were planning to escape without me.”

Gu Shen had continued eating.

“I knew you would follow.”

That answer had irritated Shen Yan far more than it should have.

He followed anyway.

Their destination was the old city, a district abandoned after the Eastern Fire twenty-three years earlier. Most of its buildings had collapsed. Plants grew through broken windows, and rainwater gathered inside ruined courtyards.

According to a handwritten note Shen Yan had found inside an academy history book, one of the abandoned houses contained a forbidden text called The First Bond.

The book supposedly described a time before the hidden thread became law.

Neither of them truly believed it would still be there.

That was not the point.

The academy had forbidden them from searching for it.

That was reason enough to try.

They entered the old city shortly after noon.

The sky was gray, and the streets were almost empty. Broken statues watched them from the edges of overgrown plazas. The faces had been deliberately smashed away, but their stone hands still pointed toward buildings that no longer existed.

Shen Yan stepped around a fallen column.

“Do you think the book is real?”

“No,” Gu Shen said.

“Then why are you here?”

“You wanted to come.”

Shen Yan looked at him.

“That’s your reason?”

Gu Shen did not answer.

His pheromones carried the faintest trace of cedar, nearly hidden beneath the damp scent of stone and rain.

Gu Shen’s scent had emerged earlier than most Alphas’.

Even restrained, it was cold and distinct, like a winter forest after fresh snow.

Most people instinctively stepped away when they noticed it.

Shen Yan never did.

They searched three ruined houses before hearing the crying.

At first, Shen Yan thought it was an animal trapped beneath the rubble.

Then the sound came again.

A human voice.

Broken.

Breathless.

They followed it through a narrow passage behind what had once been a pharmacy.

Gu Shen stopped before they reached the end.

His hand lifted slightly, warning Shen Yan to remain silent.

Through a gap in the collapsed wall, they saw four people.

An Omega lay on the ground.

He wore the white clothing given to those entering the Judgment that year. The fabric was dirty and torn at one shoulder. He could not have been much older than eighteen.

Three Alphas surrounded him.

One held his arms.

Another knelt beside his legs.

The third stood near the entrance, keeping watch.

“This isn’t Judgment Square,” the Omega said.

His voice shook.

“You can’t do this here.”

The Alpha kneeling beside him laughed.

“The law only cares whether the bond is registered. It doesn’t care where we find you.”

“I haven’t agreed.”

“You don’t need to.”

Shen Yan’s stomach tightened.

The kneeling Alpha removed one of the Omega’s shoes.

The Omega struggled harder.

The Alpha holding him pressed a forearm across his chest.

“Stop moving.”

“Let me go.”

“You should be grateful. The Unclaimed District is worse.”

The kneeling Alpha ran his fingers slowly across the sole of the Omega’s foot.

Once.

Twice.

The Omega’s breathing turned frantic.

Then the fingers stopped.

The Alpha smiled.

“There.”

He pressed.

The Omega’s body went rigid.

For one terrible second, there was no sound at all.

Then every muscle seemed to lose strength at once.

His head fell back against the stone. His eyes remained open, but something inside them disappeared.

The Alpha leaned closer.

“Look at me.”

The Omega obeyed.

“Tell me who you belong to.”

His lips trembled.

Shen Yan waited for him to resist.

To spit in the Alpha’s face.

To scream.

To do anything.

Instead, the Omega whispered, “You.”

“Louder.”

“I belong to you.”

The words were so thin they seemed ready to break apart in the air.

Shen Yan stood frozen behind the wall.

His palms were wet.

His breathing sounded impossibly loud inside his own head.

He had studied the hidden thread for years. He had memorized diagrams, laws, symptoms, and historical records.

None of it had prepared him for the emptiness in that Omega’s eyes.

This was not loyalty.

It was not partnership.

It was the disappearance of a person while their body remained behind.

Shen Yan took one unconscious step forward.

Gu Shen caught his wrist.

The movement was sudden, but the grip was controlled.

His hand was cold.

It always was.

Shen Yan turned toward him.

Gu Shen’s face revealed almost nothing, but his jaw had tightened.

A trace of cedar gathered in the air.

Not enough for the people beyond the wall to notice.

Enough for Shen Yan to understand that Gu Shen was angry.

“We’re leaving,” Gu Shen said quietly.

Shen Yan looked back through the opening.

The Omega was still repeating the same words.

“I belong to you.”

The Alpha beside him laughed.

Shen Yan wanted to interfere.

He wanted Gu Shen to release his pheromones and force all three Alphas to the ground.

He wanted to drag the Omega away and pretend the bond had not already been completed.

But Gu Shen’s fingers tightened around his wrist.

They were fifteen.

There were three Alphas in the ruins, all older and physically stronger.

And the Omega could no longer disobey the person who had found him.

Even if they rescued his body, they could not give him back his freedom.

Shen Yan turned away.

They did not look a second time.

The journey back to the academy felt longer.

Neither of them spoke as they crossed the ruined streets.

The wind had begun to rise, carrying dust through empty windows. Somewhere in the distance, an old metal sign struck repeatedly against a wall.

Shen Yan kept seeing the Omega’s eyes.

He imagined himself on the ground instead.

A hand finding the exact place he had failed to protect.

A command entering his mind and becoming indistinguishable from his own desire.

His name disappearing.

His choices becoming meaningless.

He glanced at Gu Shen.

Gu Shen walked beside him with his usual calm expression, but his hands were clenched tightly enough for the knuckles to pale.

“Are you afraid?” Shen Yan asked.

Gu Shen did not answer.

They passed beneath the remains of an archway.

“Gu Shen.”

“Yes.”

“That wasn’t an answer.”

“I know.”

Shen Yan waited.

Gu Shen remained silent for so long that Shen Yan thought he would refuse.

Then he said, “I’m afraid.”

The admission surprised him.

Gu Shen rarely admitted fear.

“Afraid of being found?” Shen Yan asked. “Or afraid you won’t find anyone?”

Gu Shen stopped walking.

Shen Yan took another step before realizing and turning back.

The afternoon light had faded. Shadows filled the ruined street, leaving Gu Shen’s face half hidden.

When he finally looked at Shen Yan, his eyes seemed darker than the approaching night.

“I’m afraid the person who finds me won’t be you.”

Shen Yan forgot how to breathe.

For a moment, the ruined city disappeared.

There was only Gu Shen standing before him, saying something neither of them was old enough to understand completely.

Shen Yan should have laughed.

He should have accused Gu Shen of saying strange things.

He should have demanded an explanation.

Instead, he looked away.

Neither of them spoke again until they reached the academy wall.

That night, Shen Yan lay awake in the dormitory and repeated Gu Shen’s words in his mind.

He did not know whether they were a promise.

A confession.

Or another kind of fear.

He only knew he could not forget them.

So he buried the sentence inside his heart, like a seal he was not yet ready to break.

Outside the window, the moon was pale and ordinary.

The Blood Moon was still three years away.

But its shadow had already reached them.

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