The Girl Who Couldn't Use Her Power by Namra at Inkitt
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The girl who couldn't use her power

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Story Summary – The Girl Who Couldn't Use Her Power Luna Ashford is a 17-year-old college student hiding a dangerous secret. She was born with a rare and mysterious power powerful enough to change the fate of the world. Before her mother died protecting her from a mysterious assassin, Luna promised that she would never use her power until her eighteenth birthday, no matter what happened. Unable to save her mother because of that promise, Luna grows up believing she is weak and useless. Soon after, her cruel stepmother throws her out of the house. Forced to survive on her own, Luna studies in college during the day and works part-time at a restaurant at night. Unknown to everyone, she works there for a special reason connected to her mother's past and a hidden secret. As Luna's eighteenth birthday draws closer, strange dreams, mysterious symbols, and powerful enemies begin to appear. One night, after finishing work, she mysteriously disappears. Kidnapped and taken into a hidden magical world, Luna learns that she is the last heir of an ancient bloodline and the only person capable of awakening a legendary power that can either save the world or destroy it. Hunted by dark forces and surrounded by allies with hidden motives, she must uncover the truth about her mother's death, the promise she made, and the real purpose of her extraordinary power before time runs out.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Namra
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1the promise

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Chapter 1: The Promise

The night was filled with silence, but the flames rising from the village told a different story.

A young girl stood frozen, tears streaming down her face as she held her mother's hand.

"Promise me," her mother whispered weakly, "you will never use your power until your eighteenth birthday."

"I promise, Mom," the girl cried.

Moments later, darkness swallowed everything.

From that night on, she carried two things in her heart—a mysterious power she couldn't use and the painful memory of the promise she could never break.

She had no idea that her eighteenth birthday would change her life forever...

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