Rivals In Love by Tommy world at Inkitt
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Rivals in love

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Summary

"VAYDEN SANTIAGO " I hate that name. That name makes my skin crawl with frustration. Vayden makes me mad, frustrated and so... But... If I hate him like I say I do, why does it bother me when he's angry, why does his gaze make me so conscious, why does his smile make me have funny aches in my stomach, why do I get... jealous when he's with other girls. I'm meant to hate him not concern about him, I'm meant to forget his existence, not getting my heart to beat for him. Or.. don't I hate him anymore?... " You're distracting me go away" " No you're distracting me. You go away" " How am I distracting you?". " You're always on my mind" "........."

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1 - Asshole Santiago

" Sometimes it's those we least expect that love us more" - Tommy

JIN'S POV

Finally the weekends were over. I'm so happy right now. I just loved Mondays- it meant less time at home. Minutes later, I arrived at school basically skipping happily. "Another session of being awesome" I say to myself as I enter the school hallway. I inhale that hallway smell. Ha! Smells like no parents. My two close friends Emily and Mia squeal as they sight me. "Jinu" Emily yelled happily hugging me. "Hey boos what's up "

" JJ " Mia hugs me. " Hey Mimi.. " I chuckle as she hugs me tighter. "I missed you too Mimi". Mia spent the whole weekend in Ohio - her family likes to spot her as the only female child out of three boys.

" Oh my god guys. We have so many things to catch up on. I heard Ms Kris got married to the librarian" . Mia said as we headed to my locker.

" Really? Mr. Zander?"  Emily asked. " Yes. Apparently they've been dating for a year now. Can you believe it?" Said a hyper Mia. Mia and gossips were like five and six. Emily chuckled. " Well I can. I think they look cute together" I said smiling. " Me too" Mia said. " But he was my crush you know" . I chuckled at that. I enter my locker pin. BAM! ..... Confetti blew up in my face. In my face?....  I hear someone laugh behind me and I don't need to turn to know who it is... VAYDEN BUTTFACE SANTIAGO.  " Happy welcome back Candell" he says now smiling at me.

" Vayden I swear I'm going to Hurt you r..."

" See you in class chocolate princess" he says then walks away laughing. You know what I want to do, I want to punch Vayden's face then bury him in the school backyard. " Fuck you Vayden ". I mutter under my breath as I dust the confetti off.

" Damn! Vayden's so annoying " Emily comments helping me dust off the confetti. Mia scoffs playfully:" no he isn't. He installed a confetti in Jin's locker - just to wish her happy resumption. Awwww".

Emily and I stare at Mia. Did the confetti hit her head or something. " Are you thinking okay Mia" Emily asks. " Yes! Well let's get to class" she walks away giggling.

STUPID VAYDEN! STUPID CONFETTI! ANNOYING MIA! STUPID LOCKER!

Buttface Santiago just had to ruin my morning. I'll get him for this, I swear.

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My vayden free classes were over, now we had calculus together. Urghhhh! Just kill me already. I enter the class only for my gaze to meet Vayden's. He gives me a light annoying smirk. I frown then leave for my seat. Asshole!

The teacher hadn't arrived yet so I decided to take out a book , that's when Arabella and her friends decided to show up. Wannabe queen bee. " If isn't my favourite girl in the whole world " Arabella remarks smiling. Uhh? Me?. Is she talking to me? . I glance backwards before pointing at myself. " Me? ".

She giggles" ofcourse silly. Who else?". Urhhhh? Is she okay?

" I'm Jin candell. One of the girls you hate! .. just thought I'd remind you Bella ". I say putting on a fake smile. Please don't ruin my Monday the more than it's already ruined. Just go away already.

" No silly! I have a problem with Mia not you" she hits my arm playfully. Ow! Someone please save me. " You mean Mia, my best friend, the same one who you slept with her boyfriend just to get revenge because you're a mentally deranged human?! Is it her?". My smile widens. She blinks obviously dumbfounded. " Hmph! She huffs then walks away with her annoying mindless minions. Gawd! I hate her. And it's definitely not because of Mia. Arabella and I have history - long history I'd rather not think about that. URGHHHH! . Now my mood is ruined.

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