Underneath The Moonlight by MakaylaB at Inkitt
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Underneath the Moonlight

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Summary

Underneath the glow of the moon, two worlds exist side by side but remain separated by an unseen force. In a beautiful field of red and yellow flowers, a little girl in a yellow dress runs happily with her parents, trapped forever in a perfect moment of love and joy. Their laughter fills the night as they repeat the same memory over and over, untouched by the pain of the outside world. Nearby, four high school boys sit beneath the same stars, pretending to be fearless while secretly carrying their own struggles, loneliness, and hidden pain. They are alive, but emotionally trapped by their own darkness. When the boys hear a child’s laughter coming from the field, they discover the mysterious family that no one else can see. What appears to be a peaceful scene to the reader becomes terrifying through the boys’ eyes. They see shadows, red eyes, and something unnatural watching them. Terrified, the boys flee, but the little girl’s innocent goodbye follows them into the night. As they escape, they begin to question what they truly witnessed. Was the family a haunting? A memory? Or something far more tragic? Underneath the Moonlight is a story about two forms of being trapped: a family frozen in a moment of happiness they can never leave, and young people lost in their own pain searching for something they cannot see.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
16+

Underneath the Moonlight

The moon hung low over the field, a silver coin pressed against the darkness of the sky. Its light spilled across the earth, touching every blade of grass, every flower, and every shadow stretching beneath the night.

Above, the stars burned brightly, scattered across the endless black sky like pieces of shattered glass. They watched silently over a world that had forgotten how to look up.

The field stretched endlessly in every direction, filled with red and yellow flowers swaying gently in the wind. During the day, they bloomed with vibrant colors beneath the sun, but at night, the darkness softened them into shades of silver and gray.

Yet beneath the moonlight, they still seemed alive.

A little girl in a bright yellow dress ran through the flowers, her pigtails bouncing behind her. The ribbons tied in her hair were worn and loose, but she didn’t care. Her laughter filled the field — a pure, joyful sound from a child who knew nothing but happiness.

“Come catch me!” she called. “You’re too slow!”

Behind her, her parents chased after her.

Her mother wore a yellow dress that matched her daughter’s. The fabric flowed behind her as she ran, glowing softly beneath the moonlight. Her face held a warmth that came only from someone looking at the person they loved most.

Her father followed close behind in a red and black shirt, pretending to struggle to keep up.

“Wait for me!” he called, laughing. “Daddy’s getting old!”

The girl stopped and turned around, placing her hands on her hips.

“You’re not old, Daddy. You’re just slow.”

Her mother reached her first, lifting her into her arms and spinning her around. The little girl’s laughter rose into the night as her yellow dress flared around her like a flower opening beneath the sun.

Her father joined them, wrapping his arms around both of them.

For that moment, nothing else existed.

No fear.

No sadness.

No goodbye.

Only them.

The little girl grabbed her father’s hair as he lifted her onto his shoulders, laughing when he pretended it hurt. Her mother reached up and brushed her fingers against her daughter’s cheek, memorizing the smile she never wanted to forget.

“Again!” the girl shouted.

And they did.

Again and again.

The same chase.

The same laughter.

The same happiness.

The girl ran through the flowers while her parents followed behind, always reaching for her, always close enough to feel her presence but never quite catching her.

They didn’t grow tired.

They didn’t grow older.

The moment never changed.

The wind carried their laughter across the field, but it never traveled beyond the flowers. It stayed trapped within the place they occupied, like the world itself had drawn a line around them.

Her parents watched their daughter run ahead.

Their eyes carried a sadness hidden beneath their smiles — a love so deep it hurt.

They knew this moment was all they had.

And so they held onto it.

The moon watched.

The stars watched.

The flowers whispered in the wind.

And the family continued their game, forever chasing a happiness that had already passed.

But beneath the same moon and the same stars, another world existed.

At the edge of the field, four high school boys sat against an old rusted fence separating the flowers from the road. They were barely eighteen, wearing the confidence of people who wanted the world to believe they had everything figured out.

They didn’t.

A cigarette passed between their hands as smoke curled into the night air. They laughed at jokes that weren’t funny and talked about things that didn’t really matter.

They were trying to be older.

Trying to be fearless.

Trying to escape the thoughts that followed them when they were alone.

Jae-won sat closest to the field, his knees pulled toward his chest. He was the quiet one, the one who listened more than he spoke.

He carried the feeling of never being enough.

No matter how hard he tried, he always felt like he disappointed someone. He saw expectations in his parents’ eyes, even when they told him they were proud.

He wondered if he would ever become the person everyone wanted him to be.

Beside him sat Min-seok, whose anger always seemed closer than his emotions.

He carried resentment toward a father who left and a family that never felt whole again. His anger protected him from admitting how much he was hurting.

It was easier to be angry than to admit he was broken.

Ji-hoon sat between them, surrounded by friends but still feeling alone.

He laughed when they laughed and nodded when they spoke, but part of him always felt somewhere else.

Like he was watching his own life from a distance.

Like he was waiting to finally feel real.

Then there was Sung-min.

The loudest one.

The funniest one.

The one who always made sure everyone else was smiling.

Nobody noticed that his own smile was the emptiest.

He joked because silence scared him.

He laughed because he didn’t want anyone asking if he was okay.

The four of them were young, but they were already exhausted.

They weren’t fighting monsters.

They were fighting themselves.

Sung-min took a drag from the cigarette and stared at the moon.

“My dad keeps telling me I need to figure out my future,” he said with a forced laugh. “Like I’m supposed to wake up tomorrow and suddenly know everything.”

Min-seok scoffed.

“Sounds like your dad.”

Sung-min shrugged.

“Maybe he’s right.”

The words fell into the silence.

Ji-hoon looked out toward the field.

“I don’t even know what I want for dinner tomorrow. How am I supposed to know what I want to do for the rest of my life?”

Nobody answered.

Because none of them knew.

For a moment, the jokes stopped.

The laughter faded.

And beneath the moonlight, four boys sat together carrying things they never said out loud.

Then they heard it.

A sound that didn’t belong.

A child’s laughter.

The cigarette slipped from Sung-min’s hand.

The boys froze.

The sound came again.

Soft.

Bright.

Impossible.

Jae-won slowly looked toward the field.

“Did you hear that?”

The others stared into the darkness.

Ji-hoon swallowed.

“Yeah. I heard it.”

Min-seok stood, scanning the flowers.

“It’s probably just kids.”

“At this hour?” Sung-min asked quietly.

Nobody answered.

Because they all knew.

There was no one else out there.

The laughter came again.

Closer.

And this time, they knew exactly where it came from.

The field.

The boys slowly moved closer to the edge of the field.

The moonlight stretched across the flowers, turning everything silver and gray. The wind moved through the blossoms, but nothing else moved.

The field was empty.

At least, it should have been.

“There’s nobody here,” Jae-won whispered.

His voice sounded smaller than he intended.

Then the laughter came again.

A little girl’s giggle drifted through the night.

Not a frightening sound.

Not an evil sound.

Just the innocent laughter of a child playing.

And somehow, that made it worse.

Because it came from somewhere that should have been empty.

The boys stared into the flowers.

Then they saw her.

A little girl in a yellow dress ran between the blossoms, her pigtails bouncing as she laughed. She moved through the field like she had done it a thousand times before.

Like this was her home.

Like this was the only place she knew.

Behind her stood two figures.

At first, the boys thought they were people.

A man and a woman.

The woman wore a yellow dress that flowed around her, matching the little girl’s. The man wore a red and black shirt, his clothes slightly messy as if he had just been chasing after his daughter.

They looked like a family from a perfect memory.

But something was wrong.

The moonlight touched the flowers.

It touched the grass.

It touched everything around them.

But it didn’t touch them.

The figures looked faded, almost like shadows wearing the shape of people.

The boys stopped breathing.

Min-seok took a step back.

“What… is that?”

The little girl continued running, completely unaware of their fear.

She laughed as she turned around, reaching toward her parents.

“Come catch me!”

The woman smiled.

The man laughed.

To the boys, the scene felt impossible.

Like they were watching something they weren’t supposed to see.

The little girl suddenly stopped.

Slowly, she turned toward them.

Her bright eyes met theirs.

For a moment, nobody moved.

The girl tilted her head.

Then she smiled.

“Want to play?”

Her voice was soft.

Normal.

A child’s voice.

But it echoed through the field strangely, as if it came from somewhere far away.

Jae-won stared at her.

She didn’t look angry.

She didn’t look threatening.

She looked happy.

But the two figures behind her remained still.

Watching.

Waiting.

The woman lifted her hand.

A slow wave.

The boys felt their stomachs drop.

They didn’t see a mother greeting someone.

They saw a shadow moving.

They saw something they couldn’t explain.

They saw something that didn’t belong.

“Get out,” Sung-min whispered.

Nobody disagreed.

“Move!”

The fear finally broke through.

They turned and ran.

Their feet hit the dirt as they stumbled away from the field. They pushed past the rusted fence, nearly falling over each other as they reached the road.

Behind them, the little girl’s laughter followed.

Not angry.

Not chasing.

Just laughing.

But the boys didn’t stop to think about that.

They reached their car and threw open the doors, climbing inside with shaking hands.

Nobody spoke.

Nobody looked back.

The engine struggled before finally turning over.

The car lurched forward, tires throwing gravel behind them as they sped away.

For a few seconds, the only sound was their breathing.

Then Sung-min looked through the back window.

The field was still there.

And so was she.

The little girl stood among the flowers.

Her parents stood behind her.

All three of them watched the car disappear.

And they were smiling.

The boys didn’t slow down.

The road stretched ahead of them, dark and empty, while the field disappeared behind them with every passing second.

Nobody spoke.

Nobody joked.

Nobody pretended they weren’t afraid.

The silence inside the car felt heavier than the darkness outside.

Sung-min looked back through the window one more time.

The little girl was still standing among the flowers.

Her yellow dress moved gently in the wind.

Her parents stood beside her.

They weren’t chasing them.

They weren’t angry.

They were simply watching.

The woman raised her hand again.

Waving goodbye.

The man stood beside her with the same gentle smile.

But the boys couldn’t see kindness.

They saw shadows.

They saw figures that didn’t belong in their world.

They saw something they couldn’t explain.

“Floor it,” Sung-min whispered.

The driver glanced at him.

“What?”

“Floor it now!”

The fear in his voice made everyone listen.

The car accelerated, speeding down the empty road.

They left the field behind.

They left the moonlight behind.

But they couldn’t leave the sound behind.

A small voice drifted through the night.

“Bye bye.”

The boys froze.

The little girl.

Her voice was clear.

Close.

Too close.

Then came the giggle.

A soft, innocent laugh.

The kind of laugh that belonged to a child playing outside.

Not something chasing them.

But they didn’t know that.

They only knew fear.

“No…” Ji-hoon whispered.

The laughter continued.

Then Jae-won looked ahead.

His entire body went still.

“Stop…”

Nobody understood.

“What?”

He pointed.

Standing in the middle of the road was the little girl.

Her yellow dress glowed beneath the headlights.

Her pigtails moved slightly in the wind.

She looked exactly the same as before.

Small.

Peaceful.

Smiling.

The boys screamed.

The driver slammed the wheel, swerving around her.

The tires screeched against the pavement as the car spun slightly. For one terrifying moment, they thought they were going to crash.

But somehow, they regained control.

The car straightened.

And they kept driving.

They didn’t stop.

They didn’t look back.

They didn’t breathe until the field was far behind them.

The car finally stopped outside Sung-min’s house.

None of them moved.

For several minutes, they just sat there.

Four boys who had spent the night trying to prove they weren’t afraid sat frozen in silence.

They had seen something impossible.

But the strangest part wasn’t the little girl.

It wasn’t the shadows.

It wasn’t the way she appeared in the road.

The strangest part was the way she looked at them.

She didn’t look angry.

She didn’t look like she wanted to hurt them.

She looked lonely.

Like she wasn’t trying to scare them.

Like she was hoping they would stay.

Sung-min slowly opened the door.

Before leaving, he looked back at his friends.

For once, he didn’t force a joke.

For once, he didn’t pretend everything was fine.

“See you tomorrow,” he said quietly.

The others nodded.

It was simple.

But it meant something.

Because maybe they understood something they hadn’t before.

Everyone carried something unseen.

Some wounds were just easier to hide.

Sung-min walked to his door.

He paused.

Then he looked toward the empty road.

For a brief moment, he thought he heard laughter.

A child’s laughter.

But this time…

he wasn’t afraid.

The next morning, the field looked completely different.

The darkness was gone.

The moon had disappeared.

The stars had faded.

Sunlight poured across the flowers, bringing the red and yellow blossoms back to life. The same field that felt endless and mysterious beneath the night sky now looked peaceful beneath the warmth of the day.

Children ran through the flowers, laughing as they chased each other.

Parents watched from nearby, smiling as their children played.

Life continued.

The world moved forward.

But beneath the flowers, someone was still waiting.

The little girl stood quietly among the blossoms.

Her yellow dress moved gently in the breeze.

Her parents stood behind her, just as they always had.

Watching.

Waiting.

Forever.

She watched the children running through the field.

She watched their parents call after them.

She watched the way they reached out and held each other.

And she remembered.

She remembered her mother’s hands holding hers.

She remembered her father lifting her onto his shoulders.

She remembered the sound of their laughter.

She remembered being loved.

The little girl slowly reached toward the children.

Her fingers stretched forward.

But she couldn’t touch them.

Her hand passed through the sunlight.

Through the flowers.

Through the world that continued without her.

She lowered her hand.

For the first time, sadness crossed her face.

Not anger.

Not fear.

Just sadness.

Because she finally understood.

The world had moved on.

But she hadn’t.

Her parents were still trapped inside their happiest memory, repeating the same moment forever.

The chase.

The laughter.

The game.

A moment that would never change.

A moment they could never leave.

The little girl looked back at them.

Her mother smiled.

Her father reached out his hand.

They were waiting for her.

They always would be.

And maybe that was enough.

Maybe she didn’t need the world to remember her.

Maybe she only needed the two people who loved her most.

The little girl wiped away the sadness in her eyes.

Then she smiled.

A small, tired smile.

But a real one.

She turned back toward the field.

“Come catch me,” she whispered.

Her father smiled.

Her mother laughed.

And the little girl ran.

Her yellow dress flowed behind her as she disappeared into the flowers.

Her parents followed.

Just like they always did.

Years passed.

The four boys grew older.

They never returned to the field.

They never spoke about what they saw that night.

Some memories were too strange to explain.

Too painful to share.

But they never forgot.

They grew into the people they once pretended to be.

They found their paths.

They made mistakes.

They struggled.

They healed.

But sometimes, when the moon hung low and the night became quiet, they remembered the little girl in the yellow dress.

They remembered the laughter.

They remembered the fear.

But most importantly, they remembered the loneliness behind her smile.

They understood something years later.

She wasn’t trying to frighten them.

She wasn’t trying to hurt them.

She just wanted someone to see her.

Someone to know she existed.

Someone to remember.

And they did.

Underneath the moonlight, the field remained.

The flowers swayed.

The wind whispered through the grass.

The stars watched from above.

And somewhere in that endless field, a little girl in a yellow dress continued running.

Her parents followed behind her.

Their laughter carried through the night.

Not as a warning.

Not as a haunting.

But as a reminder.

That love can remain even after everything else is gone.

That memories can survive even when people cannot.

That sometimes the greatest fear is not being forgotten.

And sometimes…

being remembered is enough.

The flowers swayed.

The wind moved gently through the field.

The moon hung above, silver and quiet, watching over everything.

And somewhere beneath that endless sky, a little girl ran through a field of red and yellow flowers, chasing a dream that never ended.

She ran forever.

She laughed forever.

She was remembered forever.

And in the end…

that was enough.

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This was captivating and fascinating to read! Awsome job!

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What makes this book stand out is its restraint. The supernatural element—a family stuck in a loop of a happy memory in a field—isn't scary. Instead, they represent a universal truth: the need to be witnessed and remembered.

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