The Wilted Flower's Wish by theloveforblsgotme at Inkitt
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the wilted flower's wish

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Summary

Just started to write but the story will be revenge, yearning and attempted mudder mistery.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Su Li-ya

Where did go wrong ? What was my mistake in this?

Mother is emotionless and staining snow a extravagant dark red the frozen pond becoming a murder scene. Father was stabed right through the heart by an assasin . He yelled "run li ya "

I took a run for it through the back door there are five ways to the Zhiyao manor. The last is the best, it leads straight to the Zhiyao manor .

There is a cliff with a lethal drop. It was a suiside spot but was taken over the by the Zhiyao which restricted everyone excluding the guards. So if there are no guards that means I can enter any window which is facing the cliff.

My parents were idiots for keeping four servents a cook, two cleaners and my personal teacher which all leave after dayfall. No guards ,no protection these idiots I can't even grieve properly .

Two more blocks the assasins are still on my toes, now I know why the hell my father decided to physically train me . He said body and mind need to be trained like bs .

Three assasins , and finally I can see the cliff.

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