The Dream That Wasn't by Jane at Inkitt
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The dream that wasn't

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Summary

She wakes on the cold floor of a dark room with no memory of how she got there. The silence screams. Sweat on her skin. A metallic smell in the air. Blood on her hands and she doesn't know whose it is. Then, a sound in the distance. Footsteps. Closer, second by second. A door opens. A ray of light. A man in the doorway. Who is he? Why does he know her? And why does this feel less like waking up... and more like being caught? The Dream That Wasn't is a suspense thriller about a girl trapped in a room that shouldn't exist, and answers that keep hiding deeper in the dark. Every chapter pulls one thread. Not all of them should be pulled. Some silences scream.

Genre
Scifi
Author
Jane
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

A sudden awakening

It was evening. The dark room was filled with an eternal silence, a silence that screamed.

In the darkness, two eyes opened. A girl lay on the cold floor when she had fainted, her hand trembling at her side. Sweat trickled from her neck to her chest.

Then came a smell. Metallic. Strange.

She turned her eyes toward her hand.

Blood, It stained her white shirt and pink skirt.

Her body began to shiver. Her heartbeat echoed through the room, and in that silence every beat sounded like a threat, she had grown afraid of her own heart.

Then, something else. A sound woven into the silence and her heartbeat, far away at first, then coming closer, second by second.

Her breath quickened. Her eyes searched the room and found nothing.

Step. Step. Step.

Boots. Someone was coming closer.

She could hear everything clearly now. Too clearly. A door opened and a sudden ray of light cut across the room. Her eyes squeezed shut. Her hands flew up to cover her face, and she peeked through the gaps between her fingers to see what was happening.

Without opening her mouth, her eyes screamed.

It was a man….

Chapters
1. A sudden awakening
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