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Last Golden Morning

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Summary

A story about a man who thought his place was absolutely perfect — until a stranger fell asleep under his tree. Prophecy, bath, fire, dissolution. A birth that looks like a death.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1


Last golden morning

It always starts in the morning. He raises up, both hands raise as well gently wipe the face smiling rise. We are in the home of Erik. If you see his place, everything seems quite ordinary. In fact, some have been envious of the sort of environment. He has created for himself to spend his time in as you could see on Erik‘s face that he too thought of his place as absolutely perfect opening the curtains he let the Sun in, but saw outside something that he had not seen ever before. He does not feel threatened, but he does have questions lots of questions no, if this was you, you might start thinking would I get the message faster if I simply open the door or if I run outside, but Erik and all his wisdom knew what to do he opened the window, the sun shining on his face and a stranger that looked tattered was napping under Erik‘s tree Eric yelled ahoy as he crawled out the window. He started skipping and snapping his finger while singing a sweet, sweet melody approaching the stranger very gently he placed his hand on the stranger shoulder, saying kid let’s get you some water. The kid looks up. He has an eyepatch in the look of Eric. He finds trust so he does accept Erik‘s hand and follows him into Eric‘s home. The sun might be out, but the temperature is quite low at this time of the year. Erik adds more fuel to his fire as a stranger for his name stranger says my name is Hall Kia Hall Kia. Here is the bath. Please tend to your wounds. I have all the equipment you might need to do so inside come rejoin me by the fire once you’re done. Kia Hall was certainly a name everyone knew. He’s the one eyed killer. Now as Kia was taking advantage of this much needed bath did not know that as soon as you leave this bath his life will be changed forever see to him. To him Colors weren’t about making rainbows or fantastically beautiful paintings, colors were about burrying something deep while still making it look good. Kia belong to the shadows therefore there wasn’t much known about him except now he was in the house of Erik. in about 30 minutes and 24 seconds Hall Kia comes and joins Eric by the fire. Erik is old, his long white beard and long eyebrows, giving him a very wise look as you would imagine all Kia said thank you old man how can I ever repay you for you save me Eric says quite contrary, my friend you were here to save me as you see. This is a prophecy that you would show up sleeping under my tree exactly today and you shall bring me my Freedom. Kia starts dissolving his body dissolves his meat melts. His skeletons falls apart right in front of Kia within a matter of 90 seconds, Kia watches as he’s used to seeing people die being a professional assassin. But this death was different. I felt more like a birth. Kia sees the soul of Erik rise above the fire and curl and dance around the smoke as his hand comes down touches the eyepatch of Kia Kia‘s eye as he healed. He also now holds all knowledge formerly belonging to Erik. Kia does not need to run anymore nor does he need to kill now he lives in the house of Erik and he knows everything.

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