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Redemption

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Summary

Sophia was raised in the dark to be a killer. No love. No mercy. Only rules, knives, and silence. To the world’s worst people, she is the last thing they ever see — the devil in disguise. But one night above ground changes everything. For 3 minutes she sees light, music, and a life she was never allowed to have. Now something human is cracking open inside her. She was made to kill. But can she learn how to live before the dark claims her again?

Genre
Mystery
Author
Ahri
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1: The Devil in disguise

Devils are everywhere. 

If it’s not a devil, it’s a demon. 

If it’s not a demon, it’s a deadly human. 

For the good, the devil is Satan — the voice at 3am that says you’re not enough. 

For some, demons are the things that live in old houses and older sins. Things with too many teeth and no reason. 

And for others, the devil is human. The ones with clean hands in daylight and something dark under their nails at night. The ones who smile, who hold doors, who you would never suspect. 

But what do those deadly humans see in their last second? 

They don’t see God. They don’t see judgment. 

They don’t see a courtroom. 

They see _her_. 

Her name is Sophia. 

And she is the devil in disguise. 

Not with horns. Not with fire. 

With a face you forget five minutes later. With a voice that’s soft. With manners that make mothers trust her. 

That is the point of the disguise. To be seen and not remembered. To be near and not noticed. 

She was raised in places without windows. 

No birthdays. No photos. No songs. 

The world she knew had rules written in quiet and lessons written in pain. 

While other girls were learning how to be liked, she was learning how to disappear. 

While others were taught to forgive, she was taught to erase. 

Erase a name. Erase a trail. Erase the noise. 

They told her there were only two kinds of people. 

Those who take, and those who are taken from. 

Hesitate, and you become the second one. 

So she didn’t. 

She was built to be a ghost. 

Beauty as camouflage. Blue eyes that stay calm. A smile that opens doors. Skin that looks like it’s never been hurt, because it hasn’t. 

She moves like smoke. You don’t see her come in. You only feel the room change after. 

There are names for her in certain circles. None of them are said out loud twice. 

The kind of people who do unspeakable things are very afraid of her. 

The kind of people who enforce rules can’t find her. There is no pattern. No signature. No reason that fits on paper. 

The people she is sent for... vanish. And the world is a little quieter after. 

Blood was never supposed to be hers. 

Only theirs. 

The first rule was repeated until it felt like breathing: 

_Don’t feel. Don’t want. Don’t love. Be the devil before the devil gets you._ 

So she did. 

She became the story used to keep other monsters in line. 

_Behave. Or she finds you._ 

And it worked. 

For a long time, it worked. 

She is efficient. She is clean. She is untouchable. 

Weapons don’t bleed. 

Ghosts don’t bleed. 

Devils don’t bleed. 

So why is she bleeding? 

It started without a sound. 

Not from a mission. 

Not from a fight. 

Not from a knife, or a bullet, or any wound you can explain. 

She woke up one night and felt it. 

Warm. Wet. Her own. 

Right in the center of her chest. 

A crack. A leak. 

She pressed her hand there in the dark and stared at her fingers. 

Red. 

Her blood. 

The devil doesn’t bleed. 

The weapon doesn’t bleed. 

So why is she? 

The people who made her would call it failure. 

The people she hunts would call it justice. 

But she doesn’t have a name for it yet. 

Only the panic. Only the question that won’t stop echoing: 

_If I can bleed, what else can I do?_ 

She tells herself it’s nothing. A glitch. It will close. 

She walks through crowds and counts exits like always. 

She sleeps with her back to the wall like always. 

She does the job like always. 

But the blood doesn’t stop. 

It’s not a lot. Not enough to kill her. 

Just enough to remind her. 

Just enough to make her wonder. 

Is it fear? 

Is it something breaking? 

Is it the thing she was told she didn’t have, finally finding a way out? 

She was built to erase. 

But you can’t erase this. 

You can’t erase the feeling of your own blood on your skin. 

You can’t erase the question. 

The dark keeps records. The people who made her are still there. 

The people she was sent for have families, have debts, have memories. 

If she falters, they will know. 

If she weakens, they will come. 

So she hides it. 

Long sleeves. High collars. Perfect posture. Perfect smile. 

No one sees. No one is supposed to see. 

Because the moment they do, the disguise is gone. 

And what happens when the devil in disguise starts falling apart? 

She was made for one purpose. 

That was the design. That was the whole design. 

To be the thing that other monsters fear. 

To be the end of the story. 

But designs can fail. 

Ghosts can be seen. 

Weapons can wonder what it would be like to be set down. 

And devils... devils can get hurt. 

By what? 

By who? 

She doesn’t know. 

And not knowing is the scariest thing she’s ever felt. 

Because monsters make sense. 

This doesn’t. 

At night the silence is different now. 

At night she can hear it. 

Her own heartbeat. Too fast. 

And under it, something else. 

A dripping. 

The dark is patient. It will wait. 

But blood doesn’t wait. 

Blood keeps coming. 

And then one night, someone else sees it too. 

_He_ sees it. 

He doesn’t flinch. He doesn’t look away. 

He watches the blood pour from a place that shouldn’t bleed. 

And he isn’t worried. 

He isn’t scared. 

He isn’t offering help. 

He just watches. 

Like he’s been waiting for this. 

Like he wants her to bleed. 

Because of what she did. 

Because of what she took. 

Sooner or later someone will notice. 

Sooner or later she will have to answer the question. 

Run back, and stay what she was made to be. Dry. Cold. Untouchable. 

Or stay, and find out why the one who makes others bleed... 

is bleeding herself. 

And why _he_ wants to watch her do it. 

*_She was made to kill. 

But why is she bleeding? 

And why does he want her to?__

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