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The Thorny Flower's Obsession

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Summary

Mimi has never been denied. Raised to have everything at her fingertips, spoiled and protected by a brother who would destroy anyone for her sake, she grew into someone cold and untouchable—someone who feels nothing and fears even less. Until Victor. The only man who doesn't care. He doesn't look at her the way others do. Doesn't bend. Doesn't want her. And that is exactly why she needs him. What begins as a challenge turns into something far more dangerous. Mimi doesn't just want Victor—she becomes consumed by him. Every glance, every rejection, every moment he slips from her grasp only pulls her deeper into a quiet, burning obsession. Because Mimi doesn't lose. And she doesn't let go. But the closer she gets to him, the more something unfamiliar begins to take root beneath her control—something fragile, something human... something that threatens to change her. And for the first time, Mimi is no longer certain if she's the one in control— or the one falling apart. Because obsession always demands something in return. The question is... will he ever be hers—or will her obsession destroy them both?

Genre
Romance/Drama
Author
Anele
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1-before and after

Mimi laughed too easily.

That was the first thing everyone noticed about her.

Her laughter was soft, light, and real—the kind that made even the coldest guards at the mansion relax just a little. She wasn’t born into wealth, but you would never guess that from the way she moved through the halls like she belonged there.

“Miss Mimi, you shouldn’t run in the hallway,” one of the maids called out.

Mimi turned around mid-step, walking backwards now with a grin. “Then don’t make the floor so shiny. It makes me want to slide.”

The maid sighed, but she was smiling.

Everyone smiled around Mimi.

She had been brought into the house years ago—small, quiet, and clutching a worn-out cloth doll. No one knew much about her past, and no one dared ask too many questions.

Because he had brought her.

And when her brother made a decision, no one questioned it.

“Mimi.”

Her name came from behind her, calm but firm.

She stopped instantly.

Then she turned, her whole face lighting up. “Brother!”

He stood at the end of the hall, tall, composed, dressed in a dark suit like always. His presence alone was enough to silence a room, yet Mimi ran straight to him without hesitation.

She threw her arms around him.

“You came back early!”

“I said I would,” he replied, his tone softening just slightly.

He wasn’t her real brother.

But he was the only family she had.

And to Mimi, that was enough.

That night changed everything.

The house was quieter than usual.

Too quiet.

Mimi had stayed up late, waiting. She sat on the couch, hugging a pillow, flipping through channels she wasn’t really watching. Her brother had gone out on business again. He always told her not to wait up.

She never listened.

A sound came from somewhere deeper in the house.

She frowned.

“Hello?”

No answer.

She stood up slowly, her bare feet silent against the cold floor.

“Is someone there?”

Another sound. Closer this time.

Her grip on the pillow tightened.

“Brother?” she called, hopeful.

But it wasn’t him. A tragedy befell Mimi

The hospital smelled like disinfectant and fear.

“No—no, don’t touch me! Please—no!”

Mimi’s voice tore through the room, raw and broken.

Her body thrashed violently against the hospital bed, hands pushing, scratching, fighting against something no one else could see.

“It’s okay, you’re safe—Miss, please calm down—”

“DON’T TOUCH ME!”

Her scream echoed down the corridor.

A nurse tried to hold her arm—Mimi reacted instantly, jerking away like she’d been burned.

“Get off me! GET OFF!”

Machines beeped rapidly. Another nurse rushed in.

“She’s having another episode—call—”

“I said don’t touch me!” Mimi cried, curling into herself, shaking uncontrollably. “Please… please… don’t…”

Her voice broke into sobs.

And then—

She saw him.

Standing in the doorway.

Her brother.

Everything stopped.

Her breathing hitched. Her wide, terrified eyes locked onto his.

“…brother?”

The word came out small. Fragile.

He walked toward her slowly, ignoring the nurses trying to explain.

“You shouldn’t get too close, she’s unstable—”

“Leave.”

His voice was quiet.

But absolute.

The room cleared instantly.

Now it was just the two of them.

Mimi stared at him like she didn’t believe he was real.

Then her face crumpled.

She broke.

“Brother—!”

She reached for him desperately, her entire body shaking as he caught her before she could fall off the bed. She clung to him, fingers gripping his shirt like it was the only thing keeping her alive.

“I’m here,” he said, one hand steady on her back. “You’re safe.”

“I— I couldn’t— I tried—” Her words came out in broken pieces. “I told them to stop— I said— I said no—”

Her voice dissolved into uncontrollable sobs.

“I know,” he said quietly.

Her nails dug into his arm, but he didn’t react.

“I’m sorry— I’m sorry— I’m sorry—”

“You did nothing wrong.”

She shook her head violently, burying her face into him.

“Don’t let them touch me,” she whispered, her voice trembling. “Please don’t let anyone touch me again…”

His hand stilled on her back.

“No one will,” he said.

And for the first time since that night—

Mimi stopped fighting.

Six months later.

Rehabilitation changed people.

But not always in the way others expected.

The gates of the facility opened slowly.

Mimi stepped out.

She looked the same.

Same face. Same soft features. Same long hair.

But everything else?

Different.

Her eyes no longer searched for warmth.

They observed.

Calculated.

Felt nothing.

“Miss Mimi,” one of the staff said gently, “your brother is waiting.”

She didn’t respond.

She just walked.

Each step steady. Controlled. Precise.

Like she had learned how to exist all over again.

Her brother stood beside the car, watching her approach.

For a moment, neither of them spoke.

Then he opened the door for her.

She paused.

Looked at him.

There was no smile this time.

“…Let’s go home,” she said.

Her voice was calm.

Too calm.

He studied her for a second longer.

Then nodded.

As the car door closed, the staff behind them whispered quietly.

“She’s so different…”

“Is she better?”

No one answered.

Because the truth was—

Mimi wasn’t better.

She was just…

no longer the girl who laughed too easily.

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