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LAST PIECE OF ART

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Summary

Seventeen-year-old Elara has always believed that paintings are more than colors on a canvas—they are stories waiting to be understood. On the day of her graduation, she visits an art exhibition with her parents and discovers a mysterious painting that feels strangely familiar. The painting, titled Incomplete Sketch, depicts a girl whose face remains unfinished. Elara soon realizes that she has seen it before—five years ago, when she was twelve. But she cannot understand why a forgotten painting has returned to her life. On the way home, a tragic accident changes everything. As Elara opens her eyes again, she finds herself surrounded by the life she has always wanted: her parents are still beside her, and everything seems normal. But something is wrong. As memories, dreams, and reality begin to blur together, Elara is drawn deeper into the mystery of Incomplete Sketch—a mystery whose truth has been waiting for her all along.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1: THE LAST PIECE

CHAPTER ONE

The Last Piece

The morning sunlight streamed through the curtains, bathing the small bedroom in a warm golden glow. Every wall was covered with sketches—portraits, landscapes, flowers, and unfinished drawings that reflected years of patience, practice, and passion. Some were neatly framed, while others were pinned above her study desk, filling the room with pieces of her imagination.

A seventeen-year-old girl sat quietly by the window, her sketchbook resting on her lap. A pencil danced effortlessly between her fingers, moving with the ease of long practice.

Her name was Elara.

To her, sketching had never been just a hobby. It was the language she understood best. Whenever she felt happy, overwhelmed, confused, or even lonely, she reached for a pencil. While others poured their hearts into diaries, Elara told her stories through drawings.

She believed every piece of art carried a soul.

Some told stories of hope.

Some whispered heartbreak.

And some were meant to remain mysteries forever.

A gentle knock broke the silence.

“Elara?” her mother’s voice called from outside the room. “Are you awake?”

A smile appeared on Elara’s face as she continued sketching.

“I’ve been awake for almost an hour, Mom.”

Her mother chuckled.

“You’ve been drawing again, haven’t you?”

Elara grinned.

“Maybe.”

“I knew it.”

A moment later, the bedroom door opened.

Her mother stepped inside, carrying a tray with breakfast. She carefully placed it on the desk before looking around the room with an amused sigh.

“You really need a bigger room.”

Elara looked up innocently.

“Why?”

Her mother gestured toward the walls.

“At this rate, your drawings are going to take over the entire house.”

Elara laughed.

“They’re not taking over the house.”

“Oh, really?”

Her mother folded her arms with a playful smile.

“I found three sketches on the dining table yesterday.”

Elara lowered her head, trying to hide her smile.

“...I forgot to put them away.”

“And last week, your father found one inside his office bag.”

“That wasn’t on purpose.”

“It never is.”

For a moment, they simply looked at one another.

Then both of them burst into laughter.

Just then, a familiar voice echoed from downstairs.

“Who’s making fun of my future-famous artist?”

Elara’s eyes lit up instantly.

“Dad!”

She hurried downstairs, nearly missing the last step before her father caught her by the shoulders.

“Easy there,” he laughed. “I’d rather not spend your graduation day in a hospital.”

She gave him an embarrassed smile.

“Sorry.”

He gently brushed a loose strand of hair away from her face before taking a step back.

For a moment, he simply looked at her.

“My little girl graduated from high school...”

His voice was filled with pride.

“I still remember carrying you on my shoulders after your first day of school because you were too tired to walk.”

“And now she’s officially a graduate,” her mother said, smiling warmly as she joined them.

Elara laughed softly.

“You two are acting like I’m leaving forever.”

Her father smiled.

“No.”

He paused for a second.

“We’re just realizing how quickly time has passed.”

His words lingered in the air.

Then he smiled again.

“And no matter how old you get...”

“...we’ll always be proud of you.”

A warm smile spread across Elara’s face.

There were no perfect words to answer that.

So she simply hugged both of them.

After breakfast, the family headed to Elara’s graduation ceremony.

The school campus buzzed with excitement. Laughter echoed through the hallways as students congratulated one another, teachers shared heartfelt smiles, and proud parents captured countless photographs to preserve the memories of the day.

When Elara’s name was called, she walked confidently across the stage to receive her certificate.

The applause filled the auditorium.

As she accepted her diploma, her eyes instinctively searched the crowd.

She found them almost immediately.

Her father stood with his phone raised, recording every second with a smile that couldn’t have been any bigger.

Beside him, her mother clapped proudly, her eyes shining with happiness.

For a brief moment...

Elara wished time would slow down.

She wanted to remember this day exactly as it was.

After the ceremony, her parents wrapped her in a warm embrace.

“We’re so proud of you,” her mother whispered.

Her father smiled.

“This is only the beginning.”

He placed a hand on her shoulder.

“One day, people will stand in line just to see your artwork.”

Elara laughed.

“I hope you’re right.”

He shook his head confidently.

“I know I am.”

“You just have to keep drawing.”

Elara looked down at the sketchbook she had carried with her all day.

It wasn’t just paper and pencil anymore.

It was a part of who she was. After the graduation ceremony, Elara and her parents spent the afternoon driving through the city. The streets were alive with energy. Restaurants buzzed with conversation, children laughed as they chased one another through nearby parks, and the warm summer breeze carried a feeling of freedom that made the day feel almost perfect.

“So...” her father said, catching her eye in the rear-view mirror. “Our graduate deserves a proper celebration.”

“I couldn’t agree more,” her mother replied with a smile. “So, where would you like to go?”

Elara tapped a finger thoughtfully against her chin.

“Hmm...”

“Ice cream?” her father suggested.

She smiled and shook her head.

“No.”

“A movie?”

“No.”

“Shopping?”

A laugh escaped her lips.

“You two know me better than that.”

Her parents exchanged amused glances.

“Then where?” her mother asked.

A bright smile spread across Elara’s face.

“The art exhibition downtown.”

Her father chuckled.

“I should’ve known.”

“You’d choose paintings over shopping any day.”

“Obviously.”

Her mother smiled, shaking her head.

“I don’t think I’ve ever met anyone who gets this excited about paintings.”

Elara turned her gaze toward the window, watching the city drift by.

“They’re not just paintings.”

She spoke so softly that it almost sounded like a secret.

“They’re stories.”

Silence settled over the car.

Neither of her parents replied.

Instead, they simply smiled.

They had heard those words countless times over the years.

To most people, a painting was something beautiful to admire.

To Elara...

It was something to understand.


Nearly thirty minutes later, they arrived at the exhibition.

The building itself was breathtaking. Towering glass windows reflected the afternoon sunlight, while elegant banners welcomed visitors at the entrance.

The moment Elara stepped inside, she stopped.

Her eyes wandered slowly across the enormous gallery.

Paintings of every style covered the walls.

Some were bright with life and color.

Some carried an unsettling darkness.

Others were so breathtakingly realistic that they almost seemed alive.

Visitors moved quietly from one painting to another, speaking in hushed voices so they wouldn’t disturb the peaceful atmosphere.

Without realizing it, Elara smiled.

“This place...”

She looked around in quiet amazement.

“...it’s beautiful.”

Her mother laughed softly.

“I knew you’d love it.”

The three of them continued through the gallery together.

Every few steps, Elara stopped to admire another painting.

Sometimes she studied the brushstrokes with quiet fascination.

Sometimes she leaned in, searching for the tiniest details hidden within the canvas.

Other times, she simply stood still, imagining the story the artist had poured into each piece.

Her father folded his arms with an amused smile.

“I have a feeling we’re going to be here all day.”

“I don’t mind,” her mother replied.

“As long as she’s happy.”

Elara looked over her shoulder and laughed.

“You two can look around without me if you’re getting bored.”

“No chance,” her father answered immediately.

“We’re staying together.”

Her smile grew a little brighter.

For just a moment...

Everything felt perfect.


As they continued exploring the gallery, Elara suddenly stopped.

Without realizing it, she had come to a complete standstill.

Something...

had caught her attention.

A single painting hung beneath a soft golden spotlight.

Unlike the others, it wasn’t surrounded by visitors.

It rested quietly against the wall...

Almost as though it had been waiting for someone.

Elara couldn’t take her eyes off it.

She found herself walking toward it without thinking.

One slow step after another.

The closer she came...

the stranger she felt.

Her heartbeat quickened.

Not because the painting was frightening.

But because...

it felt familiar.

A faint crease formed between her brows.

“Why...?”

“Why does this feel so familiar?”

She searched through her memories, desperately trying to remember where she had seen it before.

Nothing.

Not a single clear memory surfaced.

Yet the feeling refused to disappear.

It was almost as if the painting had been waiting for her...

Or perhaps...

She had been waiting for it.

Without saying a word, Elara slipped her phone from her pocket.

Click.

The sound of the camera was barely audible.

She stared at the photograph on her screen for several long seconds.

“I’ve definitely seen this before...”

she whispered to herself.

“But where...?”

No matter how hard she tried...

She couldn’t remember.


“Elara?”

Her mother’s gentle voice pulled her back to reality.

“We’re heading out.”

“Oh...”

She looked at the painting one last time before slipping her phone back into her pocket.

“I’m coming.”

As she walked away, she couldn’t resist glancing back one final time.

For reasons she couldn’t explain...

It felt as though she was leaving a piece of herself behind. The evening sky was painted in shades of orange and gold as Elara and her parents stepped out of the exhibition.

A cool breeze brushed against her face as she held her sketchbook close to her chest. Before getting into the car, she couldn’t help but glance back at the gallery one last time.

For reasons she couldn’t explain...

...that painting refused to leave her mind.

Her father unlocked the car with a smile.

“So,” he asked as everyone settled into their seats, “did our graduate enjoy her surprise?”

Elara fastened her seatbelt and smiled at him through the rear-view mirror.

“I loved every second of it.”

Her mother laughed.

“I told you she’d choose an art exhibition over anything else.”

Her father chuckled as he started the engine.

“I was secretly hoping she’d ask for shopping.”

“I’d rather spend hours looking at paintings.”

He smiled proudly.

“That’s my daughter.”

The city slowly faded behind them.

Streetlights flickered to life one after another as the evening traffic flowed peacefully along the road.

For a while...

No one spoke.

Elara slipped her sketchbook from her bag and opened the photograph she had taken inside the exhibition.

The mysterious painting filled her phone screen once again.

Without hesitation, she picked up her pencil.

The soft scratching of graphite echoed through the quiet car.

Line after line...

Stroke after stroke...

The painting slowly came to life beneath her fingertips.

Her mother glanced back with a knowing smile.

“I had a feeling you wouldn’t wait until we got home.”

Elara laughed quietly.

“I couldn’t.”

“There was something special about that painting, wasn’t there?”

Elara’s smile faded as she looked at the sketch.

“...Yeah.”

“There really was.”

She added a few more lines.

Then...

Her hand froze.

The pencil stopped moving.

She stared at the drawing in complete silence.

“...No way.”

Her heartbeat quickened.

“I know this painting...”

She tightened her grip on the pencil.

“I’ve drawn this before.”

The words escaped in little more than a whisper.

She slowly closed her eyes.

And then...

The memory returned.


Five years earlier...

Twelve-year-old Elara stood beside her parents at a small local art fair.

The colorful stalls barely caught her attention.

Instead...

Her eyes settled on an artist standing quietly near the entrance.

He was holding a single painting.

A painting unlike anything she had ever seen.

Young Elara stood there, unable to look away.

It was beautiful.

Peaceful.

Almost impossible to forget.

The artist noticed her staring.

“You like it?” he asked with a gentle smile.

She nodded without hesitation.

“It’s beautiful.”

His smile widened.

“I’m glad you think so.”

A familiar voice called from behind.

“Elara.”

“We’re leaving.”

She gave the painting one last look before running back to her parents.

That evening...

She filled page after page trying to recreate it from memory.

When she finally finished, she couldn’t stop smiling.

It quickly became one of her favorite sketches.

But as the years passed...

The sketch disappeared.

And little by little...

So did the memory.


Elara’s eyes flew open.

“...That’s it.”

She looked back and forth between the sketch and the photograph on her phone.

“It really is the same painting.”

She couldn’t believe it.

How had she forgotten something that had once meant so much to her?

Excited, she leaned slightly forward.

“Mom...”

Her mother turned around.

“Hm?”

“Look at this.”

Elara held up her phone with a bright smile.

“Isn’t it beautiful?”

Her mother glanced at the screen before smiling warmly.

“It really is, sweetheart.”

“But...”

Elara frowned.

“I’ve seen it before.”

“You probably saw something similar.”

She shook her head.

“No.”

“I’m sure of it.”

She leaned forward again, looking toward the driver’s seat.

“Dad...”

“You have to see this.”

“What is it?” he asked, his eyes still fixed on the road.

“This painting...”

“I drew it when I was twelve.”

“I just remembered.”

Her father smiled through the mirror.

“We’ll talk about it when we get home.”

“Please...”

She lifted her phone a little higher.

“Just one second.”

For the briefest moment...

His eyes left the road.

A deafening truck horn shattered the silence.

“Watch out!” her mother screamed.

Everything happened at once.

Blinding headlights rushed toward them.

Her father’s eyes widened.

He jerked the steering wheel.

The tires screamed against the asphalt.

Elara’s sketchbook slipped from her lap.

Her phone crashed onto the floor.

Time seemed to stop.

Then— `

CRASH!!

The violent sound of twisting metal tore through the night.

Glass exploded in every direction.

The car spun violently before everything fell silent.

Her sketch disappeared beneath shattered glass.

Then...

Everything went dark.

She never saw the ambulance arrive.

The story should have ended there...

But it didn’t.


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