Chapter Chapter 1 | What Hides In The Haweli by Sara at Inkitt
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What Hides in the Haweli

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Summary

When Karan, a determined investigator searching for his ancestral roots, arrives at a secluded Rajasthan estate, he uncovers a web of dark history and unexplained phenomena. Bound to the estate by blood and tradition is Meera, a young woman caught between a terrifying legacy and a looming curse. Joined by Riya, a scientific researcher mapping the grounds, and Kabir, an ambitious photojournalist determined to capture proof of the supernatural, the group delves into the mansion's forgotten corridors. ​Guarded by the cryptic old caretaker, Panditji—who holds the keys to the haweli's deepest secrets—the group quickly realizes they are not alone. As night falls, the lines between past and present blur. Spectral figures of the estate's former rulers, including the formidable Thakur Vikram Singh, watch their every move from the shadowy balconies above. To survive, the team must unravel the deadly secret hidden within the haweli's walls before the estate claims them as its next victims.

Genre
Horror
Author
Sara
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Chapter 1: The Weight of Unspoken Wood

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The haweli did not merely stand against the Rajasthan skyline; it pressed down upon it. To Karan’s trained eye, the architecture was a physical representation of suppressed trauma. Built from dull, heavy sandstone, its layered archways and asymmetric balconies resembled a face caught mid-groan, frozen before it could emit a sound.

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Karan adjusted the strap of his leather satchel, feeling the reassuring weight of his notebooks and the brass pocket compass he had inherited from his father. As a practitioner of behavioral psychology specializing in collective hysteria, he was accustomed to people fabricating monsters to give a face to their guilt. But as he stepped past the cracked stone threshold, a cold, unnatural stillness settled over him. The air smelled of damp earth, dried marigolds, and ancient dust—a sensory trigger designed to induce hyper-vigilance.

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"You should not have come after sunset, Saab," a voice rasped from the shadows of the outer courtyard.

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Karan turned to see Panditji emerging from the dark alcove near the main gate. The old caretaker moved with the slow, deliberate cadence of a man who had long surrendered his autonomy to the building. A heavy ring of rusted iron keys clinked against his waist with every uneven step. His eyes were milky with cataracts, yet his gaze held a unsettling sharpness.

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"The train was delayed, Panditji," Karan said, keeping his voice calm, pitched at a frequency meant to de-escalate anxiety. "I am Karan. I spoke with the estate's legal executors."

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"Executors write letters; the haweli keeps the records," Panditji muttered, his fingers tightening around a brass oil lantern. The yellow flame flickered, casting long, erratic shadows that stretched up the courtyard walls like reaching limbs. "The rooms are as they were left. Nothing has been moved. Nothing has been cleansed."

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Before Karan could probe further, the heavy wooden doors at the far end of the courtyard creaked open.

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Meera stepped into the faint lantern light. She was dressed in traditional, heavy red bridal attire—intricate gold embroidery gleaming dully under the gray twilight. But there was no celebration in her posture. Her shoulders were tense, locked in a classic defense mechanism, and her eyes moved rapidly, scanning the empty corridors above them. She looked less like a bride and more like a prisoner dressed for an execution.

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"He's here, Panditji?" Meera asked, her voice barely above a whisper, carrying a subtle tremor that signaled profound, long-term psychological stress.

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"The scholar from the city," Panditji replied without looking at her. "He thinks books can explain why walls bleed silence."

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Karan took a step forward, offering a neutral, non-threatening smile. "Meera Ji? I'm Karan. I was brought in to document the estate's history before the transfer. I understand this process must be incredibly overwhelming for you."

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Meera met his eyes, and for a fraction of a second, Karan felt a sharp jab of genuine unease. There was no deceit in her expression, only a profound, suffocating terror. "You look at this place like a puzzle to be solved, Mr. Karan. But puzzles have logic. This house operates on memory. And its memory is angry."

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A bright, intrusive flash shattered the atmospheric heavy air.

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"Hold that angle! The contrast between the ruined carving and the bride is incredible," a voice called out from the dark passage behind them.

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Kabir stepped out, adjusting the lens of his high-end digital camera. His demeanor was a stark, jarring contrast to the oppressive environment—casual, energetic, completely oblivious to the psychological weight of the space. Right behind him came Riya, carrying a heavy tactical backpack, a high-powered LED flashlight already cutting through the courtyard's gloom.

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"Do you ever turn that thing off, Kabir?" Riya asked, her tone crisp and analytical. She set her equipment down on a stone bench and immediately pulled out a handheld thermal scanner and a folded topographical map. "The structural degradation in the east wing is severe. Karan, the load-bearing arches near the main hall show signs of stress fracture. If we're staying overnight, we avoid the second level."

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"It's not structural stress she should worry about," Kabir muttered, reviewing the shot on his camera screen. He paused, his thumb hovering over the dial. "Huh. That's weird."

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"What is it?" Karan asked, walking over to the photographer.

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Kabir pointed to the digital display. The image captured Meera standing in the courtyard, but in the background, framing the upper balcony, the long-exposure shot had rendered a soft, dark distortion. It looked like the faint outline of multiple figures standing in a line, looking down.

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"Sensor artifact," Riya said immediately, not looking up from her map. "Low light, slow shutter speed, ambient dust reflecting the flash. It's a standard illusion."

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"Pareidolia," Karan added automatically, applying psychological terminology to comfort himself as much as the group. "The human brain is hardwired to recognize faces in random patterns. It’s a survival mechanism."

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"Is it?" Meera’s voice cut through the scientific explanation like a blade. She looked up toward the upper balustrades, where the grand arches opened into the dark interior of the mansion's private quarters. "Then why do I hear them breathing when the wind stops?"

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Silence fell over the group again, heavy and absolute. Even Kabir stopped fiddling with his camera.

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High above them, perched on the dark balcony of the second floor, the silhouette of the haweli’s grand structure seemed to lean inward. Karan looked up, his eyes tracing the intricate jali work of the windows. For a split second, illuminated by a stray beam from Riya’s flashlight, he caught the glimpse of a figure—a tall man in traditional formal attire, standing motionless, staring directly down at Karan.

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Karan closed his eyes, counted to three, and opened them again. The balcony was empty. Just carved stone and age-old dust.

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A classic stress response, Karan told himself, though his heart hammered against his ribs in a primitive rhythm that logic could not quiet. Hyper-awareness triggered by environmental isolation and group suggestion.

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Panditji raised his lantern high, the iron keys at his waist rattling as he turned toward the main entrance. "The sun is gone. The haweli is closing its eyes. Come inside... if you think your minds are strong enough to hold what lives here."

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As they followed the old man into the cavernous darkness of the grand hallway, the heavy oak doors behind them slammed shut with a deafening thud—propelled not by a gust of wind, but by the weight of a house that had just claimed its guests.

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