The Ashen Crown And The Blood Oath by Waydeanomali at Inkitt
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The Ashen Crown and the Blood Oath

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Summary

Magic always takes something. Nerin has survived the forgotten streets of Sable Ward by making sure no one remembers his face. Then Cinderwake awakens in his blood. Suddenly, the Empire of Edravane wants him alive and its heir, Sevren Caul, is willing to offer Nerin everything he has never had: a legal name, protection, food, a home, and control over his dangerous magic. The price is obedience. His only way out may be Ilyra Venn, a young archivist who knows why Nerin cannot remember his childhood and why his true name was erased from his own mind. As Sevren prepares the Crown Bind, a ritual capable of turning every oath in the empire into absolute command, Nerin must decide whether freedom is something a person can protect aloneโ€ฆ or something that only survives when people are allowed to choose one another.

Status
4d ago
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Ash That Learned to Breathe

Fire always takes something.๏ปฟ

Nerin did not know that yet when he stole bread from a dead man.

The body lay beneath a stone bridge, half covered by a burlap sheet that scavengers had already picked through. The uniform of a Sworn Citizen still clung to him, though the tin badge and boots were gone. Beside one stiff hand, a chunk of black bread soaked up gutter water.

Nerin watched the bread from the shadow of a bridge pillar.

A hungry enough person did not ask why food beside a corpse had been left untouched. A person who wanted to live did.

He studied the sloping roofs across the canal. No movement behind the laundry lines. No flash of saltglass. Only furnace smoke hanging low and the upper city chiming somewhere far above Sable Wardโ€”the change-of-watch bells, too clean for a place where even the rain smelled of soot.

Nerin counted to thirty.

At twenty-seven, a rat emerged from a drainage hole and bit the edge of the burlap.

Not a trap, then. Or a very patient one.

He crossed the alley lightly. The hem of his black coat skimmed a puddle. The coat was too large, bought with two nights of labor at the bone-burning house, but the heavy cloth hid his face and most of his patched clothes. In Sable Ward, good clothing drew knives. Bad clothing drew protection collectors. Nerin preferred to look like someone not worth noticing.

He crouched without touching the body.

No blood. No open wounds. Only a dark line beneath the jaw and skin gone pale-blue. Salt glittered at the corner of the mouth.

Saltglass.

Nerin pulled his hand away from the bread.

Something creaked overhead.

He spun. A wooden bucket dropped from the bridge rail and shattered where his head had been a heartbeat earlier. Three children stepped out from behind an eastern pillar. The largest held a broken stone. The other two carried sacks and fear forced into the shape of courage.

โ€œGo,โ€ said the biggest one.

Nerin knew that kind of voice. An empty stomach, smaller friends, and the belief that cruelty had to come first or the world would get there before you did.

โ€œThe bodyโ€™s poisoned,โ€ Nerin said.

โ€œThe bread isnโ€™t.โ€

โ€œThe salt is in his mouth.โ€

The boy glanced at the bread. Once. It was enough.

Nerin stood. โ€œIf youโ€™re determined to die, wait until Iโ€™m gone. I donโ€™t like eating with fresh ghosts.โ€

The stone lowered a little.

One of the othersโ€”a small child with badly hacked hairโ€”kicked the bread into the canal. It hit the water with a soft splash and began coming apart in the black current.

The biggest boy swore at him.

The smaller child shot back, โ€œI donโ€™t want to carry you home.โ€

โ€œWe donโ€™t have a home.โ€

โ€œExactly.โ€

Nerin almost smiled. Almost.

A second bell rang from the cityโ€™s middle ring.

All three children froze.

Not a watch bell. Three short notes repeatedโ€”the signal that leftovers were being handed out at the Chimney Street public kitchen. The supply usually vanished before the last echo died.

They ran without another word. Nerin waited until their footsteps faded, then checked the corpse once more. Beneath the uniform collar was a thumb-wide ring mark from glass. Not a starving man killed for stealing. Someone had held a Resonance suppressor against him until his lungs stopped working.

Nerin did not know whether the man had been a magic user. He did not want to know.

Knowing something in Sable Ward meant someone could eventually beat the answer out of your mouth.

He headed for Chimney Street.

Not because of the children. Public kitchens sometimes scraped burned porridge from the pots after distribution. If he arrived just as the attendants started clearing people out, he might get a charred bowl without giving a name.

The reason sounded sensible enough as long as he did not examine it too closely.

Chimney Street was already packed when Nerin arrived. People pressed between brick buildings whose walls breathed steam. Hot-water lines from the middle-ring factories ran beneath the road, making the mud smoke and scorching feet through thin soles. A kitchen cart stood before an old temple stripped of its emblem. Two women ladled grain porridge into wooden bowls.

Four Saltglass Wardens waited beside the cart.

Nerin stopped before the crowd could swallow him.

Their bracers were made of transparent plates that caught the grey light. White salt-lines were stitched into their dark-red coats, too clean for Sable Ward. Two carried batons. One held a long staff capped by a glass cage. The last stood beside a cash box, writing in a leather ledger.

No ration came without a price. Today, apparently, the price was not copper ash.

โ€œName and guarantor,โ€ the recorder told an old woman.

She tightened both hands around her empty bowl. โ€œLast year we didnโ€™t need a guarantor.โ€

โ€œLast year wasnโ€™t an emergency.โ€

โ€œWhat emergency?โ€

The Warden beside him lifted his baton. โ€œYour hunger, if you keep holding up the line.โ€

The woman left without porridge.

Nerin took one step back.

Then he saw the short-haired child from under the bridge.

Somehow, the kid had managed to get a bowl. He held it in both hands, shielding it from adult elbows and shoulders. His two friends were nowhere in sight. Maybe they had slipped behind the cart. Maybe they had chosen the smallest because his face was more likely to earn pity.

He was three steps from the edge of the crowd when a Saltglass Warden caught him by the collar.

โ€œProtection tax.โ€

The child hugged the bowl to his chest. โ€œThe kitchen already paid.โ€

โ€œThe kitchen pays for permission. You pay for protection.โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t have money.โ€

โ€œThen half the ration.โ€

The Warden reached for the bowl. The child twisted aside quickly enough to evade the first grab. Porridge spilled over his wrist. He flinched but did not let go.

The people around them moved away. An empty space opened as if the Warden carried disease.

Nerin should have left.

He knew the fastest route: the tailorsโ€™ alley, the soap-factory fence, the roof of the salt depot. In seven minutes he could be on the west side of Sable Ward, unseen and unremembered. Four Saltglass Wardens would not memorize one more face among hundreds of pale ones.

The child bit the Wardenโ€™s hand.

The baton rose.

Nerin moved before he had time to hate himself for it.

His hand closed around the Wardenโ€™s wrist just before the baton came down on the childโ€™s skull.

Eyes behind the glass visor turned toward him.

By the cart, a spoon stopped scraping the bottom of a pot.

โ€œLet go,โ€ the Warden said.

Nerin did. He was not stupid enough to test himself against four armed men. Not yet.

โ€œThe kid doesnโ€™t have money,โ€ he said.

โ€œThen youโ€™ll pay.โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t have any either.โ€

One of the Wardens laughed. โ€œSable Ward breeds comedians now.โ€

Nerin looked at the cash box beside the recorder. โ€œSable Ward breeds plenty. You usually take it without asking.โ€

The silence hardened.

That was the mistake. Not what he had saidโ€”his face.

Nerinโ€™s hood had fallen when he caught the Wardenโ€™s arm. Firelight from the kitchen furnace struck his eyes. The recorder beside the cash box tilted his head, studying the gold Nerin could never completely hide.

Then his gaze dropped to Nerinโ€™s wrist.

A hair-thin black fissure showed beneath the skin, like ash trapped inside a vein.

Nerin tugged his sleeve down.

Too late.

โ€œTake him,โ€ the recorder ordered.

Two Wardens advanced together.

Nerin shoved the child toward the crowd. โ€œRun.โ€

This time, the kid did not argue.

The first baton came from the right. Nerin ducked, drove his shoulder into the attackerโ€™s chest, then stamped the side of his knee. It was not graceful. No one in Sable Ward taught people to fight gracefully. He had learned from warehouse owners, debt collectors, and drunks who believed an Unwritten childโ€™s body had no limits.

The second Warden caught his coat. Nerin released the clasp at his throat and let the cloth stay in the manโ€™s hand. Cold air bit through his thin shirt.

He ran.

The crowd opened too late. People stumbled, bowls fell, porridge mixed with mud. Nerin vaulted an overturned vegetable cart and cut into the alley between a candle factory and a fenceโ€™s house.

A whistle shrilled behind him.

One long note. Suspect fleeing.

Two short. Suspected unlicensed Nhal Resonance.

Nerin swore.

He cut left and kicked out the brace beneath a stack of baskets. Wicker collapsed across the alley. One Warden tripped, but the one with the glass staff vaulted the mess and kept coming.

โ€œStop in the name of the Crown!โ€

Nerin ran faster.

The Crown had never given him bread, a name, or a bed. He saw no reason to give it obedience.

The alley narrowed. Damp brick walls closed against his shoulders. Ahead, daylight formed a pale stripโ€”the exit toward a drainage canal.

A small figure stood in the middle of it.

The short-haired child.

He held the bowl, now half empty, breathing hard, panic on his face. His two friends waited beyond the canal fence, but the iron grate they normally used to cross had been secured with a new chain.

โ€œWhy did you come this way?โ€ Nerin snapped.

โ€œWe always use this way.โ€

โ€œNot today.โ€

Bootsteps closed in behind them.

Nerin checked the walls. Too high. The nearest window was boarded over. The channel beneath the grate was barely wide enough for rats.

The biggest boy yanked at the chain. โ€œCan you break it?โ€

โ€œWith what?โ€

The boy looked at Nerin as though the answer were obvious in the black fissure along his wrist.

No.

Nerin seized the chain with both hands. The iron was new, but the hook had been set into old mortar. He pulled. One brick shifted, shedding dust.

At the far end of the alley, a Saltglass Warden appeared.

The staff came up. Its glass cage opened like transparent petals, exposing the salt crystal inside.

โ€œKneel,โ€ the Warden said.

Nerin pulled the chain again. The skin split across his palms. The hook held.

โ€œKneel and give your name.โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t have one.โ€

The Wardenโ€™s eyes narrowed. โ€œEveryone has a name.โ€

โ€œNot according to your laws.โ€

The Warden twisted the staff.

A hum filled the alley.

Nerin felt it in his teeth first. Then in his bones. The saltglass pulled at something inside himโ€”the pressure he had always mistaken for anger, the heat that came whenever danger moved too close. The fissure at his wrist burned.

He had felt it before in small flashes: when someone kicked him until his ribs cracked; when a warehouse door had been locked from the outside; when he woke unable to remember the face from a dream. Every time, he had swallowed it down and let the heat die with the fear.

Now the heat refused to die.

โ€œLast chance,โ€ the Warden said. โ€œName.โ€

Behind Nerin, one of the children began to cry without making a sound.

The Warden drove the end of the staff into the ground.

A pressure wave slammed through the alley.

Nerin dropped to one knee. The children were thrown against the grate. Air punched from his lungs. The city vanished, replaced by a long ringing and the pulse of blood in his ears.

Heat moved beneath his skin.

Not like fever. Like something buried for years had finally found a crack through which to breathe.

Nerin pressed his palm to the ground. Stone blackened beneath his fingers.

The Warden stopped.

For one moment, the fear on his face was more honest than every law in the empire.

โ€œCinerai,โ€ he whispered.

The word was older than Nerin and heavier than the name he did not have.

The Warden raised his staff for a second strike.

Nerin chose.

He did not summon fire. He did not know how.

He simply stopped holding it back.

Heat burst from his chest into his arm, then struck the ground. Orange light raced through the seams between stones like roots hunting air. The mortar around the iron hook glowed red. Brick split with a crack. The chain tore free from the wall.

The next blast shattered every window in the alley.

The Saltglass Warden threw up an arm. His clear bracer swallowed the heat for one heartbeat, turned white, then fractured from the center. He flew into a stack of baskets and did not get up.

Fire climbed the candle-factory wall.

โ€œThrough!โ€ Nerin shouted.

The biggest boy dragged the grate aside. Two of them crawled through first toward the canal, but the short-haired child stopped and looked back.

Nerin was still on one knee.

The black fissures had spread from wrist to elbow. Each line felt like hot metal embedded beneath the skin. The smell of burned hair filled his nose. His or someone elseโ€™s, he could not tell.

โ€œCome on!โ€ the child cried.

The fire on the wall grew. Another whistle sounded from the end of the alley, followed by many boots.

Nerin forced himself upright. The world tilted. He reached the grate, shoved the child through, then slipped after him an instant before a gloved hand caught at his heel.

They dropped into the dry canal channel.

The children moved faster than rats through the narrow tunnel. Nerin followed the slap of their feet. Behind them, Saltglass Wardens shouted orders to seal every exit from Sable Ward.

The tunnel ended in an old cistern. Light entered through a ceiling grate, cutting the dust into pale bars. The biggest boy shoved a metal panel set into the wall. A gap opened into the cellar of an abandoned building.

They climbed through one by one.

Nerin went last. The moment the panel closed, his knees gave out.

The short-haired child set the bowl of porridge in front of him.

Three mouthfuls remained. Ash speckled the surface.

โ€œTake it,โ€ he said.

Nerin stared at him. โ€œI didnโ€™t save you to get paid.โ€

โ€œIโ€™m not paying you.โ€ The child sat cross-legged. โ€œI canโ€™t eat if you die while watching me.โ€

The largest boy snorted. โ€œHeโ€™s like that.โ€

Nerin took one spoonful so they would stop staring. The porridge was cold, thin, and tasted like charcoal. His stomach seized around it with a pain that almost felt like gratitude.

Above them, the hunt bells began to ring.

One after another. From the eastern gate, the canal tower, the factory post, then the middle ring. The sound spread across Vastrenne, climbing from Sable Ward toward the city of people who had names.

The biggest boy peered through a crack in the boards. โ€œTheyโ€™re closing the roads.โ€

โ€œBecause of him?โ€ another asked.

Nerin did not answer.

He touched his left arm. The fissures remained, but the heat was slowly fading. In its place, an empty room had opened inside his headโ€”too clean, too quiet.

Something was gone.

He closed his eyes.

There was a door he should have remembered. Dark wood, perhaps. A hand pushing it open. Beyond it, golden light and the smell of dry leaves. That place had once made his chest unclench. Once, a voice had told him he was safe.

Nerin tried to step into the memory.

There was nothing there.

Not fog. Not ordinary forgetting. The memory ended at a scorched edge, as if someone had cut it out of his life and burned the wound shut.

He opened his eyes.

The child in front of him was speaking, but Nerin did not hear the words. He stared at the three mouthfuls of porridge, the ash-dark cracks in his skin, and the faint glow still flickering between his fingers.

The fire had broken the chain.

In return, it had taken the only place that had ever felt like home.

From the street above came the amplified voice of a proclamation reader through a metal horn.

โ€œSearch for a gold-eyed male, seventeen years old. No registered identity. Suspected Cinerai blood.โ€

Nerin stood despite his bodyโ€™s protest.

His anonymity was over.

For the first time, the empire knew exactly what it was hunting.

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