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Manipulation

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Summary

After being abandoned, a child has to learn to live on their own, surviving. How will she survive? Will she hurt anyone? How will this end?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One; Pilot

(Short beginning)

A young girl around fourteen walked out the gate of a park. It was around ten in the late evening.

She wore a light blue jumper that looked lovely with her wavy blonde hair. Her eyes were more of a cold blueish grey and a little shimmer.

She walked into the woods for a bit until she found a ditch with an overhead. She spent the night there. She got up around eight the next morning which little to no sleep gained.

Instead of going back to the park she went to a shop that gave out free food that was very well near it's due date.

Afterwards she went straight back to the park she left before.

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A good start to a good story I suppose. 💗✍️✨

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