The House That Remembered Me by Noctiva at Inkitt
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The house that remembered me

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Summary

Amara moves into her aunt’s mysterious old mansion, only to discover strange voices, hidden warnings, and a forbidden upstairs room. As she searches for answers, she realizes the house knows far more about her than it should—and someone has been waiting for her.

Genre
Mystery
Author
Noctiva
Status
1mo ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The house that remembered me

The first thing Amara noticed about the house was the windows.


There were twenty-three of them.


She counted them twice.


Not because she was bored, but because counting gave her something to do while her aunt drove through the narrow road that seemed to lead nowhere.


“One…”

The car passed another.


“Two…”


Another.


“Three…”


By the time they reached the end of the road, Amara had counted twenty-three.


The house stood behind a rusted iron gate, surrounded by tall trees that blocked most of the afternoon sunlight. It was bigger than she had imagined from the pictures her aunt had sent her.


And older.


Much older.


The walls were pale and weathered, with vines crawling up one side. Several windows were covered by faded curtains.


But one wasn't.


A second-floor window stood wide open.


Amara stared at it.


Someone was standing behind the curtain.


A girl.


At least, she thought it was a girl.


Long hair. Pale dress. Completely still.


Amara leaned forward.


“Aunty?”


Her aunt didn't answer.


“Aunty?”


“What?”


“Is there someone upstairs?”


Her aunt's hands tightened around the steering wheel.


“No.”


Amara looked at her.


“But I saw—”


“There is no one upstairs.”


The sharpness in her aunt's voice made Amara stop.


She looked back at the window.


The figure was gone.


The curtain moved gently in the wind.


Amara swallowed.


Maybe she had imagined it.


She had been tired since the journey began. Maybe that was all it was.


Her aunt parked the car.


For a few seconds, neither of them moved.


Then her aunt sighed.


“Come on.”


Amara opened the door.


The moment she stepped out, the air felt different.


Cooler.


She looked around.


There were no other houses nearby. No children playing outside. No cars passing.


Just trees.


And the mansion.


Her aunt unlocked the front door.


It creaked open.


“Welcome home.”


Amara gave her a confused look.


“Home?”


Her aunt smiled faintly.


“For the next few months.”


Right.


A few months.


That was why Amara was here.


After everything that had happened at school, her mother had decided she needed a change of environment. Her aunt had offered to let her stay with her while she finished the school term.


Amara had agreed because the alternative was spending every day at home listening to her mother ask if she was okay.


She wasn't.


But she was tired of explaining why.


She picked up her bag and walked inside.


The house was beautiful in a strange way.


Old photographs covered the walls. There were paintings of people Amara didn't recognize, antique furniture, and a large staircase leading to the second floor.


She stopped.


Her aunt noticed.


“Don't worry,” she said. “You'll get used to it.”


Amara looked up at the staircase.


“Are the rooms upstairs locked?”


Her aunt's expression changed.


Only for a second.


“Some of them.”


“Why?”


“Because they're old.”


“Oh.”


Her aunt picked up one of Amara's bags.


“Your room is this way.”


They walked down a long hallway.


Amara noticed something strange.


There were family photographs everywhere.


Her aunt appeared in some of them.


But there was another girl.


She looked about Amara's age.


Same dark hair.


Same narrow face.


Same eyes.


Amara stopped walking.


“Aunty?”


Her aunt continued walking.


“Aunty, who's that?”


Her aunt turned.


Amara pointed at the photograph.


The smile disappeared from her aunt's face.


“Nobody.”


“Nobody?”


“Come on.”


She walked away.


Amara stared at the photograph a little longer.


The girl was smiling.


But there was something familiar about her.


Something that made Amara uncomfortable.


She followed her aunt.


Her bedroom was small but comfortable. A bed sat against the wall, beside an old wooden wardrobe.


“This used to be your mother's room when she was younger,” her aunt said.


Amara looked around.


“My mum stayed here?”


“A long time ago.”


“Why didn't she ever tell me?”


Her aunt shrugged.


“Some things don't need to be remembered.”


Before Amara could ask what that meant, her aunt placed the bag on the floor.


“Dinner is at seven.”


“Okay.”


“And Amara?”


“Yeah?”


Her aunt looked directly at her.


“If you hear anything upstairs at night, don't go looking.”


Amara laughed nervously.


“Why would I?”


Her aunt didn't smile.


“Promise me.”


Amara hesitated.


“Okay. I promise.”


Her aunt left.


The door closed.


Amara stood alone in the room.


For the first time since arriving, she felt uneasy.


She unpacked slowly.


Her phone had barely connected to the house Wi-Fi when she heard a faint sound.


Knock.


She looked toward the door.


Nothing.


Another knock.


Knock. Knock.


It wasn't the door.


It was coming from above her.


Amara looked at the ceiling.


She remembered her aunt's warning.


Don't go looking.


She shook her head.


“I'm not doing this.”


She went back to unpacking.


At exactly seven, her aunt called her for dinner.


They ate quietly.


Amara tried several times to start a conversation.


“So, how long have you lived here?”


“Years.”


“Do you like it?”


“It's quiet.”


“Too quiet.”


Her aunt smiled.


“You'll appreciate that eventually.”


Amara looked around the dining room.


“What happened to the girl in the pictures?”


Her aunt's fork stopped halfway to her mouth.


“What girl?”


“The one in the hallway.”


Silence.


Amara immediately knew she had asked the wrong question.


Her aunt placed the fork down.


“Don't talk about her.”


“Why?”


“Because I said so.”


Amara stared at her.


“Who was she?”


Her aunt stood.


“Dinner is over.”


She walked away.


Amara remained at the table.


Something was wrong.


Very wrong.


Later that night, Amara lay in bed scrolling through her phone.


The house was silent.


Too silent.


She checked the time.


12:17 a.m.


She put her phone down.


A few minutes later—


Knock. Knock. Knock.


Her eyes opened.


She sat up.


The sound came from upstairs.


She remembered the warning.


Don't go looking.


Then came footsteps.


Slow.


One step.


Then another.


Then another.


Amara pulled her blanket closer.


The footsteps stopped.


Silence returned.


She waited.


Nothing.


She reached for her phone.


The screen lit up.


One new notification.


No name.


No number.


Just a message.


YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE COME BACK.


Amara's heart pounded.


She stared at the message.


Come back?


She had never been here before.


At least, she didn't think she had.


Another message appeared.


SHE REMEMBERS YOU.


Amara's hands went cold.


Before she could type a reply, the bedroom door slowly opened.


She froze.


Nobody stood outside.


The hallway was empty.


Then she heard a whisper.


Not from the hallway.


From upstairs.


“Amara…”


Her eyes filled with fear.


The voice sounded exactly like hers.


She stepped out of bed.


Then stopped.


Something was written on the wall beside her door.


She hadn't noticed it earlier.


Three words.


Written in fresh, dark scratches.


WELCOME BACK, AMARA.


She stared at them.


And suddenly, a memory flashed through her mind.


A staircase.


A locked door.


A little girl crying.


And her own voice saying—


“Don't tell anyone.”


Amara stumbled backward.


She had been here before.


She just didn't remember.

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