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Wo Raaz Jo Tum The

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Summary

Har shaam main chhat par. Wahi kone wali jagah. Wahi chai. Wahi intezaar. Wo kabhi-kabhi aata hai. Bike rokt a hai. Phone pe haste-haste baat karta hai. "Kya kar rahi hai?" "Haan aa raha hun." Kisi aur ke liye. Main upar se dekhti rehti hun. Wo neeche se guzar jaata hai. Sab kehte hain "bhool ja". Par kaise bhoolun? Jo har din chhat par aakar baithna sikha gaya ho. Ye kahani hai ek tarfa intezaar ki. Aur ek aise raaz ki... jo sirf chhat ki deewaren jaanti hain. Wo raaz... jo tum the.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1. 6:05 - chhat or intzar

Chai thandi ho chuki thi. 

Par main abhi bhi chhat ke usi kone me baithi thi. 

Jahan se uski gali saaf dikhti hai.

5:58 ho rahe the. 

Dil ne ghadi se 2 minute pehle hi daudna shuru kar diya tha.

Maa ne 3 baar awaaz di - "neeche aa ja". 

Maine keh diya "bas 5 minute".

Jhooth tha. 

Roz ka jhooth.

6:03. 

Kuch nahi. 

6:04. 

Sirf kutte ke bhokne ki awaaz.

Aur phir... 

6:05.

Bike ki awaaz. 

Wahi. 

Dil ek saath tez aur dheere ho gaya.

Main neeche jhuki. Parda thoda sa hataya. 

Wo tha. 

Helmet me. Phone kaan pe laga kar has raha tha.

"Kya kar rahi hai?" 

"Haan haan aa raha hun na... bas 2 minute"

Koi aur tha uske saath baat karne wala.

Wo ruka nahi. 

Mere ghar ke bahar se guzar gaya. 

Jaise main hun hi nahi.

Bike ki awaaz door hoti gayi. 

Aur main... wahi baithi rahi. 

Thandi chai aur garam aankho

Ek aawaz aati h "bhool ja". 

Par kaise bhoolun? 

Jisne har shaam chhat par aakar baithna sikha diya ho.

Aaj phir wo kabhi-kabhi wala din tha. 

Aur main... roz wali ladki.

Chhat ki deewaren phir se gawah ban gayi. 

Ek aur shaam. Ek aur intezaar. 

Ek aur raaz... jo sirf main jaanti hun.

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