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SUPER FIGHTERS ①: COMMANDER 100 SAGA [English]

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Summary

DBZ INSPIRED

Genre
Action
Author
Nabii
Status
1mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1: KOG AND GOK' CRUELNES

Once upon a time, there were 3 boys named *Naku kagyeko*, *Kyrs kagyeko*, and *Oman Slam*. They lived in an oppressive house with *Kog* and *Gok*. One day, Kyrs and Oman went to a room where they had stored countless books containing information about how to overthrow a head, calling thier activity '' operation die'' and ''agenda coup intervention". Naku was sent by Kog to give food to gok. Naku saw chicken but. didn't pay attention but it looked like he saw it so he turned and due to his great appetite, he accidentally dropped the plate and it cracked.

NAKU: Ah! Naku!

KYRS: What is go... You fool, Naku, you have killed me! [ Oman opens the door ]

OMAN: What is...

KYRS: The fool

OMAN: [Crying] Naku!

KOG: What's going on

KYRS: [Also crying] Nothing

KOG: Is there a problem? I heard a crash and yellings.

GOK: Oh kog the food!

KOG: Hasn't Naku given you the food?

GOK: No!

KOG: [Opens the door.] What the... [ the house is seen and kog yells '' Naku!'', Oman is not thier brother so he goes home, Naku and Kyrs were adopted and mistreated by kog and gok. The next day they go to school and prepare to fight some bullies. The teacher caught Naku bullied but took naku and whipped him, making Naku have enough of this happening all the time and punch the teacher and run. The CCTV caught him. The same with oman but this time, Oman kicked the teacher. Kyrs was blooded as the bullies mocked him]

BULLIES: You fool, why don't you do something if you are to kill? Hahahaha![The 3 go home with a letter of being banned but kog and gok didn't care and being home forever meant even more inhumane and animal treatment. So kyrs and Oman stole and stored countless books containing information about how to overthrow a head, calling thier activity '' operation die '' or '' agenda coup intervention '']

OMAN: The time is set. You leave at 5 am and meet me at town. Bye.

KYRS: Naku. Naku.

NAKU: Hm?

KYRS: It's time

NAKU: Give me me 1hr please [Kyrs punches Naku and Naku opens his eyes and gets up instantly]

KYRS: Slowly [They reach thier 2 magical dogs and one becomes big and swallows the 2. Kyrs' lessons from school was a bit helpful as he caught a glimpse of aura which corrosed or kind of burnt the dog and the dog died. The second dog came and suffured the same thing. Kyrs' tried intensely to activate aura and nearly did i but he reached his limit as the aura fell on the house, leading to a water explosion]

NAKU: Woah

KYRS: Don't just stand there, run! [the place is set in a Chinese Japanese place].

KYRS: Woah. Jump! [They jump from a story building and fall into a man's house]

MAN: What? Some brats?

KYRS: Who're you?

MAN: Oh man, i don't know when i will learn manners. I'm Captain 1, and a muscle. Anyone who i confront becomes dead meat.

KYRS: [Thinking] Oman, sorry but remain patient.

OMAN: [Thinking] Where are you?

KYRS: [Thinking] Kyrs don't do anything stupid. [Stops thinking] Oh captain could we please stop this and come to a truce?

CAPTAIN 1: Are you deaf? I told you anyone who meets me is dead! Aaaaaa! [Proceeds to attack kyrs]

KYRS: You asked for it. Now how did i do that aura. No, let's see, a rifle! [Grabs the rifle and shoots Captain 1. Not knowing Captain 1's brother, Captain 5 saw everything and snapped Naku and Kyrs. He printed them as wanted posters with Kyrs' bounty 50 zengcheang (zengcheang is the currency) and Naku's as 30 zengcheang].

KYRS: Let's go!

NAKU: Yeah! [They reach Oman]

OMAN: What took you long?

KYRS: Nothing.

NAKU: Oman.

OMAN: Hm?

NAKU: I and Kyrs are brothers, why don't you join us?

OMAN: Guys, i don't deserve to be your brother. I-i'm wante...

NAKU and KYRS (Unison): So as we.

OMAN: Hu?

KYRS: We took long because...

OMAN: I know how it's like. [Kyrs smiles]

NAKU: It's getting dark, let's spend the night in the woods. [The scene is dark and the boys are seen sleeping at a cliff behind them been trees. A shadowy figure is seen going to them].

KYRS: [Wakes and looks around to see thier loot is gone] Oman. Oman. Wake up.

OMAN: What's it?

KYRS: Our loot is gone.

OMAN: Who took it?

KYRS: Don't ask me i don't know. Hey lazy boy wake up, someone stole our loot.

NAKU: [Slit eyed] What? [Kyrs slaps Naku and he wakes well].

SHADOWY FIGURE: Did i hear loot? You kids are thieves.

KYRS: Shut up you hyprocrite! You are also a thief.

SHADOWY FIGURE: [Chuckles] Of course but i am an adult. Where are your parents?

KYRS: I said shut up! [Oman starts his usual way of crying and Kyrs catches another glimpse of aura where he picked a stone but it dropped when he didn't know and tossed as an aura ball went to the figure but he dodged].

SHADOWY FIGURE: Woah aura blast.

KYRS: What?

SHADOWY FIGURE: You just used an aura skill called aura blast. We have 3 types of aura, and this is one. From what i've seen so far, you caught a glimpse.

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