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The Old and The New

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Summary

This story follows the son of an Elder God known as Avery who after going through something rather traumatizing ends up in a whirlwind of trouble as he’s accused of murdering the High God and his angels in Heaven. This is very much so a rough draft it’s just me posting for the sake of posting, so keep that in mind when reading and feel free to leave constructive criticism. Probably will change the title eventually.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1


Hands grasped every inch of skin on Avery’s body and yet it still wasn’t enough. Even though many had now left their mark on him, making his body throb in painful pleasure, those hands remained, refusing to vanish. The only thing that made the bruises stop pulsing and his words stop bouncing around in his skull was falling further into his drunken spiral with yet another bottle.

A woman sat in front of him, devouring his lips with her own as his left hand threaded into her fiery locks while a man laid behind him, smooth hands caressing his body, appreciating every inch. Another woman laid in front of him, slithering down towards his hips as she turned his lower body so it was facing upwards, allowing her free reign to enjoy the meal her eyes locked upon. Panting heavily into the red head’s mouth Avery couldn’t help the moans that crawled up from his throat, shaking unevenly as he was left shuddering with each bob of her head.

“More,” he sighed out, tasting the sweet wine on her lips. “Another cup.”

Upon uttering this soft command the red head pulled away just enough to pour another cup into a silver goblet, handing it over to him as she turned back.

Snatching it Avery gulped it all down without tasting a single drop, choking a hint at the mouth pleasing him followed by hands that went around behind and lips kissing his neck.

“Such a sweet handsome one you are,” the man teasing his entrance murmured from behind as his lips were replaced with fangs that nibbled on his soft skin. “It’s been a while since we’ve had this much fun.”

“Are you enjoying yourself, pretty boy?” The woman down at his hips purred, her long tail swooshing back and forth idly.

“Yes,” he whispered, gasping as the man behind him ceased his teasing, finally pushing inside and spreading him open wide.

And the next moment, nothing. That was all he remembered before he blacked out completely.

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